Lucas's Map : Egypt Landing

[N3XuS]

The British made up a plan about invading Egypt which is controlled by the french army. They planned to do a big attack on a Village. Unfortunately the plan was ruined as a battery of cannons were placed towards the Ocean and the landing failed slaughtering all major companies on the beach, therefore a small commando took position on a small village at the right , the french got surprised and left all their equipment there. The position is secured.More to come...


Name as you like it in the game credits: You know it Im already in , PM me if you want it again.
Contact information (Preferably steam): My ID is : lad594forever
Scene Name: Egypt Landing
Description: One faction spawns in front of the village , the other spawn in front of the landing .
Supported Gamemodes: Battle/ TDM
Download link: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/38392004/scn_mp_arabian_village.sco
Codes as found in scenes.txt:
scn_mp_arabian_village mp_arabian_village 256 none none 0.000000 0.000000 100.000000 100.000000 -100.000000 0x000000012002a0b20004992700006e54000007fe00001fd2
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outer_terrain_desert



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[Menelaos16]

Reminds me of Men of War, African campaign. Great job!

 

[N3XuS]

Updated.

 

[ADrunkenIrishman]

Reminds me of Men of War, African campaign. Great job!

I thought the same thing haha, looks good Lucas

 

[WDMeaun]

Isn't 5 mortars next to each other a bit much?

 

[N3XuS]

Isn't 5 mortars next to each other a bit much?

No as it is to bombard defenders who are in the fortified village , so its blind fire

 

[N3XuS]

Version Updated

Introducing the market :

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New bird-eye version :

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[Temuzu]

The road looks horrible, work on it a bit.

 

[N3XuS]

Thats the 3rd time someone tell me this... 

I'll change it but Im disapointed you didnt tell more about my map Temuzu

 

[gokiller]

Keep up the pratice Nex3s and you will get there

Some things

- The roads, make them smaller and maybe use Earth (terrain) instead? Just see what looks the best.
- I never saw trees in the middle of the roads, with that I never saw normal "green" trees in the middle of the Dessert ^^
- See if you can connect all these parts, it looks like some split up map. No connection and it looks more divided.
- Maybe a little less cannons (mortars)? 5 Mortars next to each other can be 1. A pain in the ass seeing there are really close to each other. 2. I'm not so sure if it's that great for the performance.
- See to an little road through the market, i'm sure it will look way better
- Having these kind of "fire things" in your market are quite useless. Seeing as it's day light, and it's in the Dessert, keep it realistic ^

And btw, where are the spawn points (for each side)?

Goodluck with it, hope you can do something with my "suggestions".

Gokiller

 

[tompaw0w]

While I agree with Gokillah another noteworthy addition to his suggestion is that you can use the opacity bar to dope the roads, meaning the roads would have a more smoothened look and it'd look more natural in context with the surrounding desert textures.

Furthermore I like the idea, there aren't many desert maps out there in the crowd.

Sven

 

[N3XuS]

Thank you really much Gokiller ! And thanks Svensson too, I kept searching for the guy that actually teach me how to map ! 

I'll do my best ! And I'll change the map tonight of course 

Cheers

 

[gokiller]

No hurries mate ^^ take your time

 

[N3XuS]

No hurries mate ^^ take your time

Im going tomorrow morning at 6h30 AM on a vacation for 15 days in the south of France scuba-diving so I need to finish it tonight 

 

[N3XuS]

Final Version up.

Map has been modified by the suggestions above !

I'll be gone for 15 days , goodluck !

 

[Elduar_Rhinestone]

Have fun there