AAR: The Harrowing Tale of a Wandering Knight-in-Training.

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Finally I had the time to read your story. It's really great to read :smile:. I like the optimism of Sir Cypher, even when it's not going that well. He's making the best out of it. Keep it up! It would be nice to see a screenie of a great victory in a tournament tough.
 
UPDATE:
School just started up and I haven't had a whole bunch of time to play, much less write. I'll try to get another chapter in soon!
 
the writing isn't bad but personally i hate the character, he HAS taken to many rocks to the head, i see his optimism as stupidity and there is a fine line. "well i have taken 57 rocks to my head but no one can beat me!" for me to enjoy this it has to be a little smarter, like floris, he had a nice background a good plan and although he was fairly arrogant he knew that he wasn't doing so well at times, CYpher however when he is a ruler will not observe his position very well unless he undergoes a serious personal change.
 
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