A scythian tale (verry long, RTW campaign story)

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I once wrote this to post it on the TWC forums, I figured I might post it here aswell for those interested:

A Scythian tale

The beginning, the reign of king zipoetes

The year was 270 BC, a man with a deep stare in his eyes, the kind of stare you see on men when they ponder on important and hard issues, was looking at a map on a table. Age was beginning to take it’s toll on this man. His hair was turning grey, as was his mustache. This man, would influence the fate of the known world for many generations to come, he was zipoetes, the king of the Scythians.

For many years the steppe people had been living nomadic lives and fought each other ferociously over small pieces of land. Now under this man, who had turned 50 on this day that would mark the beginning of a storm that would last for many years to come. The steppe people had united and called themselves the scythii, they were master archers and horsemen thanks to a life of hunting and fighting. But now they had build settlements and united under a king. King zipoetes, a lively man, with great commanding skills and a sharp eye for governing. As all good Scythians he liked a drink, but he didn’t drink in excess, no this man was more of a social drinker. The only negative feature about this man was that he was known throughout the land as a bloodthirsty man. (although for a Scythian this was nothing out of the ordinary)

Now on this day, this warm day, the king looked at a map of his recently founded kingdom and after a long pondering gaze at the royal treasury and list of details of the settlements in his kingdom of warriors, he concluded: our nation is doomed unless we act, our neighboring kingdoms have built many things like roads and farms, we will need those things to feed our people and to quickly transport our armies because we are surrounded by too many potential foes, to the east are those detestable Parthians, they only care about gold, and will attack us as soon as they think they can make a profit, to the south are the Armenians, horse lords like us, combined with hat strange formation those barbarians call the phalanx and strange armour for horses, the word for those units is catapracht if I’m not mistaken. Further south are the kingdoms of Pontus and Seleucia, and rumors have reached my ears of a kingdom called Egypt that could rival the mighty warriors of Scythia when it comes to aggression.
To the west are the Thracians, Germans, Dacians and those Greeks, who have true contempt in their eyes when they look at us.

The king looked at his generals and said: our mighty warriors are undefeatable in battle, yet we do not have enough of them, we could always hire those sarmatians into our armies but we will need gold to do this. Therefore we shall pause from waging wars! Let the men put down the sword, the spear and the bow, and pick up the hammer.

And so, in his first year as king, the great king had connected all his settlements by a new invention called a road, and introduced religion as a way to give his people an even better sense of unity, the great demi goad kolasky was now being worshipped throughout the kingdom.

the first battles and expansion : the wars against the rebels.

Scythia was not only surrounded by kingdoms, no! Three independent and very hostile provinces lay next to the kingdom, and there were rumors of an Amazon city to the north ruled by ferocious woman who where unmatched in aggression and bravery. And so it came to be that in his second year as a ruler, an army under the command of captain Scyles appeared on the doorstep of campus scythii the capital of Scythia.
Zipoetes realized he had to fight the enemy, if he wouldn’t his people would think he was a weak king and would no longer follow him.

So in the winter of 269 BC the 2 armies met to the north of campus scythii. Zipoetes brought along his trusted bodyguards and 3 units of Scythian horse archers, in total he had an army of 227 men. He did not know what kind of units he would be facing, but he did now the enemy greatly outnumbered him with an army of 442 men.

Before the battle started zipoetes spoke the now legendary words: “today is a grim day for our enemies, they have to face brave warriors such as us”

He decided to split up his army, even tough he could have chosen for the advantage of picking a defensive position, he decided to outflank the enemy and make his archers shower those fools who defied Scythia with arrows.

The enemy had positioned on top of a hill and consisted of 2 units of archers, 2 units of peasants, and a general and his bodyguard. Ziopetes had a tactic he loved using, in this tactic all the horse archers would form a circle and keep on galloping thus constantly peppering the enemy with arrows, as this took a huge toll on the enemies morale, their general decided to charge the closest unit of horse archers, Zipoetes the brilliant commander that he was, anticipated this and charged the general in his flank, and instantly killed him. Soon all the barbarians ran and if they would have had tails, those tails would have been in between their legs!

This would become a joyful day for the old king, not only did this battle make him famous throughout his kingdom as a superior commander, but on this day prince Palacus had reached the age of 16. he was a man now, and would soon command his first army and begin to learn everything that could be learned about warfare, and governing.
At the same time general Skunxa had conquered the settlement of vicus vendae for the Scythian kingdom as retaliation for the attack on Scythia that same day.

In the mean time travelers had brought news that Greece was now at war with some unknown barbarian tribe called Rome. Surely the Greeks would be either weakend or distracted for a while and therefore a possible threat to Scythia was now gone. As for those Romans, Zipoetes told his concerned generals, if we haven’t heared of them, then they are nothing compared to us so we shall not worry about them.

The Scythian settlements all had roads connecting them and a shrine to the demi god kolasky to unify them, but Zipoetes realized that this was not enough, more required structures needed to be built. Unfortunately he lacked the funds to start these building projects and so he did what any desperate king would do, he sent out his armies to conquer rich settlements. Prince Palacus was sent out to conquer the once Greek colony of Chersoneses, a settlement founded by Greek colonists, but long since left behind by the Greeks and now an independent city. On his way to the city, the prince fought an army sent out by the city and overcame them so easily that we shall not go into detail about that battle here, what is important tough is that the prince became known as a brave and skilled general, who was very able when it came to attacking, and who seemed untouched by fear.

In the coming years, Zipoetes added domus dulcis domus to the kingdom of Scythia, started extensive building programs to give his people, ports, farms, traders, roads, shrines blacksmiths and so on. And he succeeded in negotiating alliances with the kingdom of Pontus and the mighty kingdom of Parthia. Also, he successfully negotiated trade rights with these kingdoms as well as with the small kingdom of Armenia.

And as he died peacefully on that sad day of 259 BC at the age of 61 leaving behind 2 sons and 2 daughters, the nation of the Scythians wept and mourned for the death of the great king who gave them a country and a better standard of living.

The reign of Partatua

And so, in the year 259 BC Zipoetes oldest son Partatua inherited the nation of Scythia, little was known about this man before he had become king and many people had expected Palacus to become king as he was Zipoetes favorite son. And no one had ever heard of this Partatua. We know now that he was a man blessed with commanding skills and a great sense of loyalty, and governing. This great sense of loyalty and his belief in the so well known Spartan lifestyle, might explain why he was such a drunkard and bloodthirsty man, since rumors of his wife’s relations with many different men had spread throughout the kingdom, and psychologists today would claim that he did not know how to handle this and therefore took his frustration out on others

Just like the great king Zipoetes, Partatua realized that in order to become a powerful nation, Scythia had to develop some sort of economy and culture since culture is what binds a people together, and gold is what drives them to battlefield.

Partatua realized that, because of the rumors about his wife’s affairs, the warriors of Scythia would never follow him into battle unless it would be absolutely necessary. After all who would follow a man that can not even manage his household in to battle, surely he wouldn’t be able to manage something as comprehensive as a Scythian army!

This was Parpatua’s curse to be forever in the shadow of his father the great king Zipoetes, and the only means of stepping out of that shadow (glorious conquest) taken away by his unfaithful wife. He would be nothing more then an ordinary king for eternity because of matters out of his hands.

After long consideration by the bonfire while looking at his children (whilst wondering if they where really his children) he decided he would become known as the Partatua the explorer!

He send out his diplomats to all corners of the world, and managed to secure an alliance with the sworn enemy: Thrace!

War against the amazons

Then one day 1 of his diplomats returned and said: I have found the legendary city of the amazons! Partatua, thinking of those amazons and of his own wife decided that this would be the opportunity he had been waiting for in his married life! He would take revenge on those unfaithful woman by conquering the Amazon city and wiping out those woman who defy the rules of nature and are the true example of everything his unfaithful wife stands for.

He would ride into the city himself and kill them all, unfortunately he was in a settlement far away from the Amazon city and so he started marching towards the settlement of campus sarmatia, since according to his diplomat, he had to cross the nearby river and follow a small path through the northern woods to reach the legendary Amazon city!

Partatua began on a long march to reach campus sarmatae and built many watch towers on the way over there. On his way he fought many small armies consisting of thieves and robbers and he hired many mercenaries and as he was about to enter the forest for the march towards the legendary Amazon city, Thrace betrayed the good king and attacked the capital of Scythia witch defense would now be in the hands of his 18 year old nephew Ara.

The siege of campus scythii.

The Thracians had send 1 of their princes with an army of 1105 men to besiege the settlement of campus Schytii. Ara who had only 323 men under his command consisting of 2 units of archer warband and 3 units of Scythian horse archers knew that he would have to make full use of the archery skills of his men and set up his men close to the wooden wall surrounding the settlement and he himself marched out of the settlement and waited in front of the gate, while shouting insults towards the enemy so rude that we will not go into detail about the nature and content of these insults! These insults enraged the Thracian prince so severely that he ordered his men to march forward and bring him the head of that insolent Scythian!

As the Thracians advanced Ara smiled and mumbled: fools! Prepare to die. And he ordered his warriors to unleash a rain of arrows so massively that the sun was blocked and a dark cloud in the air and an even darker shadow on the ground seemed to move towards the Thracian soldiers who could only stare in horror as the dark shadow and cloud moved towards them until the cloud dispersed and brought many Thracians to the afterlife with each volley!

This went on until the Thracians retreated, they had lost 562 soldiers whereas Ara had lost none of his men. One would think that this was the end of the siege but, the Thracian prince still enraged by the horrible insults Ara had shouted towards him before the battle, decided that they would not leave until he had Ara’s head on a plate.

And so, the second battle in the siege of campus Schtytii was about to begin..

Ara decided that since his plan worked so great the last time, he would repeat it. So he marched out the gate with his bodyguards and started insulting the enemy. The Thracian prince however anticipated this and had stationed some musicians next to him to ensure he would never hear any of those insults. at the same time he sent his peltasts and militia cavalry forward to counter the Scythian arrows with javelins. Ara knew that this would not make him lose the battle but he refused to let his men be killed that easily and personally charged the Thracian peltasts and cavalry and fought them with the kind of bravery you only encounter in those epic tales of great heroes. After a very fierce fight Ara had only 6 bodyguards left but managed to fill the heart of the Thracian peltasts and militia cavalry with fear and they ran like the cowards they were. Whilst Ara chased them till the outer edges of the battlefield. “look at that one of his soldiers said 7 Scythian horsemen chase 60 fleeing Thracians, the great king Zipoetes must be smiling from the heavens on his grandson with pride.”

After finishing of those fleeing pests, Ara turned his attention on the Thracian infantry and prince, in the battle with the militia cav the Thracian prince had tried to flank Ara and as a result Ara managed to almost kill him. In fact the Thracian prince lost his entire bodyguard unit.

While Ara turned and charged the enemy he had eyes only for the Thracian prince, and decided to blindly charge him, some call this bravery others call this idiocy. His soldiers still inside the settlement saw what their brave general did and immediately sallied out of the settlement and charged the Thracian infantry. Not 1 Thracian survived this great battle and Ara had lost 101 men as he wept for the loss of his men he scolded the remaining for sallying out of the settlement. “you fools” he said, “but lord Ara” his men replied before he could finish, “we couldn’t stay inside while you had all the fun, we wanted to be able to tell our children: we fought alongside the great Ara on that day! Not: we watched the great Ara fight whilst we where too cowardly to fight”

Ara smiled and realized that the foundation stones laid by the great Zipoetes on witch his uncle Partatua was building, would play a significant role in the world, and he had just contributed to this great destiny.

Partatua becomes: Partatua the fool

During all this, Partatua had done nothing, he continued his march towards the Amazon city determined to conquer it. And as he ventured into the woods and came closer and closer to the city, Parthia betrayed the alliance and attacked the poorly defended city of campus alani. Luckily for the city they where able to pay off the attackers. And still Partatua did nothing, he seemed obsessed with the Amazon city.

And as he almost reached his destination, and saw the signs of a settlement in the far horizon, screams emerged from the woods, so ferociously that they struck fear in the hearts of even the bravest Scythian warriors, where these human cries? Suddenly the sound of thundering hooves and cracking wheels emerged and the fabled amazons appeared and without warning attacked king Partatua, he had his barbarian mercenaries and hoplite mercenaries stand fast covered by sarmatian mercenaries and barbarian cavalry mercenaries. Whilst Scythian horse archers formed their so effective circle. As the amazons in their chariots charged at the Scythians, something odd happened, Partatua became enraged and got into a screaming frenzy and whilst screaming: “this is for every time I had to look at my children and wonder if they were really mine or not, you adulteress harlet” he charged the approaching Amazons head on. Without fear for his own life the king and his bodyguard unit managed to destroy 4 of the 5 chariot units of the Amazon armies but he wouldn’t stop and when his bodyguards were all dead he continued his charge and attacked the last chariots, the soldiers who were there at the battle stated: “the king went mad, and as we hurried to reach and assist him we saw him swing his sword at one of the chariots and miss it, after that an arrow hit him in the heart and he died there with an enraged look and tears of despair in his eyes. Screaming like a mad man: take the city and wipe them out!”

And so king Partatua who could not escape the shadow of his father and was robbed of any credibility by his wife, died in battle without ever taking the city of the amazons, he would be remembered as the king who could not manage his own household and did nothing when the kingdom was attacked by 2 nations, even the conquest of the Amazon city would never be his accomplishment as it was his soldiers that simply marched on, and took the city to fulfill a dying mans last wish and to add it to the kingdom of Scythia.

 
The reign of Madyes

A man stood leaning against a wall his arms crossed, watching the people in the settlement where he was stationed. His grandfather had united the Scythians, and fought battles and expanded the kingdom while securing alliances. And now his uncle Partatua was king, and had him stationed here far away from any battles, his brother Ara had recently defeated a huge Thracian army. While he was rotting away in some settlement! All these things were running through his mind as suddenly a rider that looked like a typical messenger came galloping from the distance, he looked like he had traveled a fair distance as his clothes looked very dusty and his horse seemed ready to give up any moment now.

As the rider entered the settlement he jumped of his horse with the kind of agility al the steppe people have and he ran towards this man who was starting to feel a sense of healthy curiosity.

Lord Madyes, Lord Madyes, king Partatua was slain in the battle against the amazons. And it has been decided that you and not Ara shall be our new king!

Madyes closed his eyes, remained silent for a short while and when he opened his eyes he gave the order: prepare the men we march for the Parthian city of Campus Sakae. And have the settlements near the Thracian border prepare to go to battle,! By the end of my reign we will have destroyed either the Thracians or the Parthians! The Scythians ride to battle! We will shower the enemy with arrows and crush them underneath the hooves of our horses!

And so the new king marched to Campus Sakae.

The battle for Campus Sakae

When king Madyes reached the city of Campus Sakae, he was immediately attacked by 2 armies led by the Parthian king Phraotes and captain Darius.

Madyes had decided to spread his horse archers so that he could inflict maximum damage from different sides to the Parthian infantry without them ever being able to harm his men and at the same time the king himself accompanied by his bodyguards and 1 unit of sarmatian mercenaries took a small detour and managed to surprise the Parthian king and charge his flank, and after a brief fight the Parthian king fell to the ground after being stabbed by a sword and the Madyes and the rest of the heavy cavalry surprised the Parthian infantry by appearing behind them and initiating a thunderous charge that killed all of the Parthian eastern infantry.

All this resulted in a heroic victory and King Madyes would be known as a great commander and a victor as of this day.

Without wasting any time, the king left the city and marched south, to crush the Parthian empire. While leaving 1 of his trusted generals behind to keep the peace in the recently conquered city.

War! the sad fate of the Scythians

All seemed to be going exactly the way it should be going, the campaign against the Parthians had begun, and Campus Scythii had been heavily fortified in order to repulse any Thracian attack, but then trouble came from an unexpected angle; the Germans launched a surprise attack on Vicus Vendae and it took 3 sallies to defeat them, King Madyes immediately ordered all settlements bordering on Germania to build up their armies and defenses and he already started to plan out his campaign against the Germans after he would have defeated Parthia and Thrace.

During a brief pause in his march towards the Parthian kingdom he looked at the sun and smiled, “oh great King Zipoetes” he said, “I have ordered our people to lay down the hammer and the plow and made them pick up the bow, the spear and the axe” you are known as the great King who brought us unity and wealth. Will I become known as the great conquering king who will bring glory to our people or will I fail?
My uncle tried to step out of your shadow, he lived for that and he died foolishly during his foolish campaign against the Amazons. I however have no intention to step out of your shadow, I merely want to earn my place in our peoples history. And defend what you have built, I will bring peace to our people by exterminating all those who are hostile towards us. I hope that you are watching me from the heavens and that you will smile upon me with pride. And if I die, oh grandfather, please welcome me with open arms into the next world and tell me that you are proud of your humble grandson’s efforts. Please give me a sign of your approval grandfather.”

When the king was finished speaking he looked down on the ground and seemed to be wandering off in unknown thoughts when suddenly a strong and proud looking eagle landed on a branch and stared intensely at the young king.

The young king lifted his head, smiled towards the eagle, and said to the bird: “I will never stop, as long as I am king, Scythia will fight her enemies and crush them” this is my promise to you grandfather” *



(* note: I hardly know anything about Scythian religion I looked up some things and found a story of a golden eagle telling the leader of the forefathers of the Scythians what their laws would be. And I found a text explaining that the Scythians were very superstitious and were a shaman culture. I added this small part for a dramatic effect. As you probably realized this story is based on my campaign in R:TW and I am adding these details to ad a dramatic and epic effect to make this a more interesting read. For example: Partatua had in his traits list: rumors of this mans wife’s adultery are spreading fast, I decided to use this to turn him into a very tragic figure and I actually made him focus on the battle with the amazons on purpose just as I made him do that foolish charge, I was expecting him to die a lot sooner during that battle tough. I did this to make my story better and I hope you are liking it so far)


Madyes the mighty!

Finally Madyes reached the Parthian empire and immediately he was attacked by a Parthian army blocking his way to the city of praaspha. Rather then fight however, the Parthian army retreated when they saw the mighty Scythian warriors prepare for battle, and Madyes marched and lay siege on the city of praaspha.

Then suddenly he was attacked by 2 armies simultaneously, many men would have chosen the path of the coward in this situation and fled. But not this young Scythian king! He had a promise to live up to after all. No instead of fleeing, the king took a quick look at the battlefield and decided to divide his armies, the heavy cavalry took up position on a hill together with 3 units of eastern mercenaries. Whilst the horse archers would stand on the foot of the hill. This way he could use his horse archers to weaken and lure the enemy in to an flankable position and slaughter him!

When the battle started, the first army that consisted of 1 unit of horse archers immediately advanced on the Scythian horse archers whilst the main Parthian army came marching from the east to reinforce them.

Madyes made his horse archers form a huge circle to unleash a never ending hail of arrows on the Parthian horse archers while he himself would lead the charge into the flank of the main Parthian army.

Everything went according to plan. And the battle turned from a battle into a massacre in only seconds. A Parthian survivor described it as following: “we where marching alongside the foot of a hill to reinforce the horse archers as suddenly a roaring sound seemed to come from our left. At first we thought it was the sound of thunder meaning a storm was coming, and we marched on knowing that in case of a sand storm the Scythian horse archers would lose their advantage. But as the sound grew stronger and stronger the man standing next to me looked to our left and I will never forget the look I saw on his face that day. His eyes were spread wide open, his face had turned pale and he could not produce a single sound as he stood there with pure terror on his face, as I looked to our left to find out what filled my comrade’s heart with fear, I noticed some strange figure growing larger and larger, and as I placed my hand on my forehead to block the sun so I could see better. I saw hundreds of screaming men riding fierce horses with their lances pointed towards us coming closer and closer. I remember thinking: these are not men, no man looks this terrifying, these must be demons send by zhoroaster to punish us for our sins! The last thing I remember is a huge shock and I remember I was thrown against a rock and as everything around me became dark and blurry I heard screams slowly fading away... when I woke up I was surrounded by the lifeless bodies of my comrades, and later I found out I was the only Parthian soldier that survived the battle of Praaspha.”

After this battle Madyes would be known as a legendary commander and from now on he was spoken of as: Madyes the mighty! In all of Scythia!


The siege of Arsakia

Knowing very well that all Parthian armies had been send to Praaspha. Madyes decided to immediately leave the city and march for the Parthian capital of Arsakia to deliver a crushing blow to the Parthian empire, so after massacring the population of Praaspha and burning down every standing building in the city to ensure no armies could be raised behind him he left for Arsakia.

One can only imagine the fear the citizens of Arsakia must have felt when Madyes the mighty’s army suddenly appeared on the horizon and some reports state that many Parthian citizens went to the steps of their kings palace screaming and crying: save us lord. And many citizens committed suicide even before the battle had begun. It is mentioned that the Parthian king Arses told his advisors: we saw an easy way to kill one wolf and now the pack has come to annihilate us, I should have never betrayed the Scythians and clearly we underestimated their military ability’s and blood thirst how can this be? How can these barbarians be this strong?

Madyes the mighty looked at the eagle that had accompanied him ever since he met it on that day he asked for his grandfathers approval and smiled. This would be the day he avenged the Parthian betrayal!

He split up his troops to attack the city from 2 sides. In the south he placed his infantry consisting of eastern mercenaries. And he placed his cavalry consisting of himself and his bodyguards, Scythian horse archers and Sarmatian mercenaries. And 1 unit of eastern mercenaries to man the battering ram.

The tactic he used next was another great example of his military genius witch compensated his lack of talent in governing.

The eastern mercenaries to the south advanced on the city’s south gate and at the same time the cavalry moved towards the eastern gate. The Parthian king knew that the greatest threat would come from the Scythian cavalry and placed only 1 unit of infantry at the south gate, 1 unit of infantry was stationed at the town center and the king himself protected by his catapracht guard and 5 units of infantry.

Madyes the genius commander that he was anticipated this and ordered the horse archers to move closer to the wall and unleash volley after volley over it, knowing very well they would hit something.

After the gates had been smashed by the battering rams the eastern mercenaries unleashed their fearsome battle cry and charged the 1 unit of Parthian infantry responsible for the defense of the south gate. A fierce battle started as bodies, spears and shields clashed and slowly the Parthian defenders where being pushed back and the Scythian mercenary infantry slowly started surrounding the Parthian defenders.

The Parthian king knew the defenders of the south gate would be overrun and decided to quickly attack and annihilate them before the eastern gate would give in to the constant battering by the Scythian ram.

The Parthian king moved away from the eastern gate with his catapracht and 4 of the 5 units defending the east gate and as they where half way to reaching the south gate, the eastern gate was breached and Madyes the Mighty lifted his arm and charged the defenders of the eastern gate. In the first charge by Madyes and the sarmatians mercenaries the entire unit of Parthian infantry was killed and Madyes immediately ordered a charge to the rear of the Parthian king whilst the horse archers moved towards the city’s town square to unleash their deadly rain upon the Parthian troops that had been stationed there to serve as reserves.

Madyes reached the Parthian king and a fierce battle started. The lances killed many Parthians in the initial charge but now the lances had become useless and swords were drawn and this shifted the balance to the Parthians who had superior armor. A small glimmer of hope arose in the heart of the Parthian king. If he could kill Madyes the Scythians would rout and the city would be saved. So he fought many warriors to finally reach the Scythian king...

And as the 2 kings stood there face to face Madyes lifted his arm and unleashed a wolf like howl while galloping towards the Parthian king. A strange sense overcame the Parthian king and his vision became blurry as he said to himself: this is the end of my empire, none of my successors will be able to stop this storm! No army in the world will ever be able to stop this storm. A thrusting sound could be heard and a stinging pain shook the king out of his thoughts and as he opened his eyes he looked at the Scythian king and smiled before his lifeless body fell to the ground.

And so with the death of king Arses ended the siege of Arsakia! only 1 Parthian soldier survived that battle.

In the aftermath of this battle Madyes again massacred the population and burned all buildings in the settlement so that he would not have to worry about his rear after leaving the city. This would earn him the name of butcher! And as the Scythians called him Madyes the mighty, the rest of the world referred to him as Madyes the butcher. He had made the world notice Schtytia and diplomats from all over the world came with offers for an alliance with the Scythia nation, they came from far away lands such as Rome with gifts and kind words to persuade Scythia to ally with them. Knowing that this would render the much needed gold to raise more armies Madyes accepted all offers so he could prevent making more enemies and ease his mission of wiping out all his enemies.

Noticing that Parthia had been badly injured and was nothing more then a wounded and cornered beast the Egyptian Pharaoh decided to take advantage of this situation and declared war on the once mighty Parthian empire.

Mayes however wanted to destroy the Parthian empire all by himself to take revenge on their betrayal, he also knew that this would strike fear into the hearts of Thrace and Germania when he would start his campaign on them.

And so he marched for the city of seleucia that the Parthians had taken from the once mighty but now destroyed Seleucid Empire.


The siege of seleucia

Unlike the other city’s the mighty king had besieged, this city had stone walls instead of mere wooden walls. And it would be more difficult to take it. To make matters worse his scouts had reported that a large Parthian army outnumbering his own was headed straight for him.

During this war against the Parthians an eastern turncoat who lived by the rule: if you can not defeat them, join them had joined his army and told him that the more advanced nations used tools like siege towers to storm stone walls. A military genius not afraid to adapt Madyes ordered the build of siege towers and had all his infantry storm the wall.

After a fierce fight the infantry managed to secure the gate house and open the door. and whilst creating an enormous sandstorm the Scythian cavalry charged the city and the town square to leave no Parthian soldier alive.

After the battle Madyes and his warriors discovered something amazing. Here in the middle of the desert an enormous building stood before them with plants on top if it that seemed to hang down. Surely men could never have built such a thing and Madyes wondered if this city once used to be occupied by gods? After questioning the citizens about it he found out that a people called Babylonians built it long ago and called it: the hanging gardens.

Madyes would have loved to stay in this city to stare at this miracle that men had built and rest from the battles rather then going back into the hot desert and keep on fighting in this land where it was always hot and where hardly any plants grew. He missed the steppes and it’s grass, he missed the winter. But he knew he had no choice but to leave the city and march on for the next before the Parthian army that was coming for him would reach him. He would face them in battle when the time was right and this was not the right time, he discussed the matter with his officers and as they stated: but sir, the men are tired and we have a better chance of defeating the army that is coming our way if we stay in this city! Maybe so, Madyes replied, but the longer we linger here the stronger the enemy grows. If we wait too long we will find heavily defended city’s but if we hurry and keep surprising them we will only face poorly defended city’s as their armies are too busy chasing after us. We will take the city of susa next, my scouts reported that it is the Parthians new capital and there is a good chance we will find their new king there. Killing a king and his successors in 1 war will surely be a crushing blow to the enemies morale and this will give us a great advantage when we turn and face the army that is chasing us. When we fight them in the open they will remember that we killed their king and 2 of his successors in this war. This will strike them with fear even before the first arrow pierces one of their weak and cowardly soldiers.



The siege and battle of susa

Susa was just like seleucia a city with walls, so the same tactic as in the battle of seleucia was applied here. Unfortunately tough the new Parthian king had already left the city to leave prince Artaxerxes of spasini in charge of the defense. It’s almost needless to mention this was the last day of the prince’s life.

Even tough the new Parthian king had escaped him, Madyes decided that he would face the chasing Parthian army here nonetheless. He had a long march through the hot desert ahead of him and he could not afford to leave the threat of a huge Parthian army unresolved before this long march.

He decided he would allow the Parthians to lay siege on the city but he would fake a sally and retreat before the enemy could build any siege equipment. He gambled that the enemy would charge at the moment he would fake a retreat thus bringing them within range of the archery towers. he would then sally out from different gates and surround the Parthians between his horse archers and the towers of the city to deal as much damage as possible before the actual fighting would start.

He did not have much of his Sarmatian mercenaries left and he knew that if he did not win this battle with a minimum of casualties he would be forced to delay the campaign and wait for reinforcements that were on the way from Campus Alani, it would take at least 5 years before they would arrive tough and he really couldn’t afford to wait this long. The next battle would decide the fate of this campaign and his life, because if the enemy would not be annihilated there without losing too many men, he would be trapped and it would only be a matter of time before the city would be taken and the king executed.

And so the enemy army appeared in front of the walls and the great king Madyes spoke to his men: “the gods know we did not look for this war, the gods know our hearts and the gods know our enemies are doomed! So let your battle cry be: Death! Death! Death! And shame to our foes!!!

A terrifying roar could be heard from within the walls as Madyes men howled like wolves and screamed insults to the Parthian soldiers outside! And some Parthians started fleeing from the field before the battle had even begun!

And then, as both armies were ready to face each other suddenly an Egyptian army arrived that drove the Parthians away! Madyes looked at the skies and decided that this had to be an intervention by the great Zipoetes who had surely asked the great god Kolasky to drive away this thread to the campaign.

Madyes decided to reinforce his army with some Scythian nobles and as he embarked on his quest to destroy the 2 remaining Parthian city’s he was suddenly surprised in the desert by a second huge Parthian army ! there was no way around this and the outnumbered Scythian king was forced into another decisive battle.

The last violent flicker of a dying candle

And so captain Vayhavishdapaya attacked king Madyes who was known as such a great commander that it was said that at the sound of his voice, even the clouds in heaven changed their flight.

This reputation had already filled the hearts of the Parthian soldiers with terror and during the night before the battle confident and cheerful chanting and music could be heard from the Scythian camp while an eerie silence plagued the Parthian camp.

“Day has dawned! This will be a bloody day but we did not come to run at the site of blood! I believe we’ve come to pick a fight! Call out to the heavens! Call out to the gods and strike your foes hearts with fear!!!!!!!!!!!” king Madyes told his men and unearthly sounds reached the ears of the Parthian soldiers as the Scythian warriors slammed their spears against their shields and lifted their notorious bows and as if it was said by a single man they could hear all the Scythian warriors shout simultaneously: I’m going to slaughter you!!!!

The 6 Parthian survivors of that battle stated: at that point we saw water running out of many of our comrades trousers. And most soldiers started praying to the one god zhoroaster to save their lives. But zhoroaster must have been occupied that day because the onslaught that was about to follow was surely something that would please any Scythian god but not the great god Zhoroaster!

Madyes lived up to his name as a legendary commander, he stationed himself at the center of the battlefield and placed his infantry in front of him then he placed some of his horse archers a few miles in front of him so they could harass the advancing enemy. At the same time he had placed his heavy cavalry on the far left side of the battlefield and the rest of his horse archer on the far right of the battlefield.

As the Parthian army advanced their entire cavalry soon went after all the horse archers who immediately scattered and faked a retreat this resulted in a long chase by the Parthian cavalry witch totally forgot about the rest of the army and the battle! The Parthian infantry was still slowly advancing towards king Madyes who had ordered his heavy cavalry to make a detour and appear behind the Parthian infantry! The battlefield looked like this now:
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as soon as the Scythian heavy cavalry was in place king Madyes ordered his heavy cavalry and infantry to charge the Parthian infantry whilst he himself went to the right and attacked the Parthian cavalry in their rear. At this moment the Scythian horse archers turned around and charged the Parthian cavalry firing arrows as they approached and drawing swords when they reached their victims.

This resulted in a heroic victory and 1028 Parthians died that day whereas only 118 Scythians had lost their lives. The last standing army of Parthia had been annihilated and nothing stood in the way of kings Madyes conquest and destruction of the Parthian empire as he approached the last Parthian city of Hatra.

The battle of Hatra: the candle is put out

A man sat firm on the back of his horse as he overlooked the surroundings. Soon there would be battle here. A battle that would forever earn him his place in history he would become the great king Madyes crusher of the Parthian empire! All he had to do was win this battle. Egypt recent declaration of war against him had complicated things for him a large Egyptian army was on it’s way so he had to defeat the new Parthian king Achamenes before the Egyptians would arrive.

Both armies set up and before the battle king Madyes looked at his troops and addressed them: day has risen and many will not live to see the night! By nightfall many of our foes will never be able to see the sun rise again. Remember this above all: our forefathers are watching us! Make sure they are not ashamed!!!!!!!

The same roars and howling that the Scythians had produced in the previous battle rose up from their ranks and again a Parthian army was struck with fear.

King Madyes spread out his armies the same way as in the previous battle and again won a heroic victory killing 1124 men and losing only 90 warriors. Since this battle went allmost identical to the last one i shall not go in to detail about this battle.

The king could not forget his anger over the Parthian betrayal and so in the year 230 BC he ordered the destruction of anything that could even slightly remind someone of the existence of Parthia and it’s glorious empire and culture witch had been conquered and annihilated by the proud warriors from the steppes!
 
king madyes and his bodyguards
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The fearsome Scythian noble archers
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Schytian cavalry charging
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I was planning on writing a story that would follow my entire campaign as Scythia but I think the character development I gave king Madyes and the destruction of Parthia is the perfect ending of this story and I don’t see how continuing the story with my coming wars against Egypt, Thrace and Germania and the development of my country that this king has greatly neglected (he hasn’t build a single structure yet during his reign) will do this story any good! It will take many more years in the game. I have already reached 16 pages
 
You seem to be quite active.Good luck.I wrote a similar story of "Unnamed Chronicles",a dystopian Forgotten Realms of corrupt mankind and demons,with a revolutionary young man with a dead-magic area in his body rises to free a village from tyranny,and with the population allies with the last elves,dwarves and other magical benign races ans starts a war of purging across Faerun.But the Gods of Goodness stop him and say that it is enough and it is good to forgive enemies.Defying this,he also starts a campaign of destruction against all gods,effectively freeing Faerun from divinity and magic.

The Glowing part is not written,I just planned it.
 
sneakey pete said:
Woah. nice.

can you just give us an overall outline of the rest of the game?

I actually wrote a part II and posted that on TWC aswell, I was going to do a part III after, that but my pc got messed up and I lost the save file.

I waged war on thrace, and Egypt, crushing Thrace and pushing the Egyptians back to the Nile, I then blocked each Nile crossing to be able to focus on my wars against Thrace and then the greeks decided to go to war with me, I conquered some of their cities and desperately longed for an end of those wars so I could develop the empire and build up for a large scale invasion, when suddenly the Romans decided to go to war with me aswell
 
Dam, you think that they'd have learnt after the second nation that you crushed that they should ally with you, not fight.
 
Also you could make a next campaign of Sarmatians,as they are the children of intermarried Scythians and Amazons.And they go to battle in both sexes.
 
Chilly5 said:
Dude...where is your life?  :roll: That thing can spawn a novel!

(now i begin reading it...)

yeah, I know, it seems as if I have no life, but at the time I worte this, I didn't really have a life, I was still recovering from my accident (took me allmost 3 years to now finally walk with crutches) and I didn't get out much because of depression caused by the death of a person verry close to me) I kind of fled away from reality and into the world of roleplay, Rome total war, and Intense foruming.

I'm better now :smile: my presence here is only caused by vacation.

EDIT: I won't do this anymore, it's time consuming and sometimes frustratiing because the story develops during the campaign, and you can't predict everything in the campaign. I sometimes found myself writing something really good, and then suddenly in the campaign something happened and completely nulified whatever I was building up to.

unexpected death of familly member, army lost at sea, another war, etc....
 
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