Tell me what you think of the book I'm writing. =O

[Heafodban]

I have not heard them, but I have heard of them.

I am aware Myrsky means storm in Finnish, too. Is it a very popular last name in Finland?

Huh? Are you asking me? I wouldn't know, I'm American!

 

[Vulkan]

What's your excuse for poor grammar than?

 

[FrisianDude]

Maybe you could have landscrapers built in the sky. 

 

[Rabid Potatoe]

Now that is a cool image.

 

[ecto_plasm]

It isn't too long so far, only a few pages on Microsoft Word. It is a parody by the way, if you don't like stupidity then you're not going to like this at all...

Do you think the dialog is too cliché? (The dialog I insert, not the characters, cliché as in too overused in "internet comedy")
Use of the word sky too overdone as to the point of just being annoying?

General impressions?