Jorviks Return - Story AAR - Brytenwalda Mod - Now With PICTURES!

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Nice stories, but they are too long.
I like to read short stories and if possible with picture in it, or else I get bored and turn on TV or watch a nice movie on pc.
We live in the light century, all this life is a speed contest. Short time, little time, no time.
 
I'm just wondering if I'm playing a different game, I don't have such details and events :smile:
 
Vesku said:
I'm just wondering if I'm playing a different game, I don't have such details and events :smile:

Lol, yes it originally started as an AAR with pictures but I got somewhat carried away and re-wrote it as a story. I've updated the title so its more relevant to what it has actually become. 

EDIT: Well, having said that its now about six months since I wrote this post and now I've finally included pictures. Hooray for Edit Mode!
 
Mihai Bravul said:
Nice stories, but they are too long.
I like to read short stories and if possible with picture in it, or else I get bored and turn on TV or watch a nice movie on pc.
We live in the light century, all this life is a speed contest. Short time, little time, no time.

I favour a more text based story myself although I had hoped to include pictures. Problem was it became too time consuming trying to orchestrate the scene to fit the narrative when I'd completely made it up. In the future I will do another more traditional AAR as taking pictures is a doddle given they are relevant to what's actually happening on screen. Perhaps that would be more to your tastes? If you interested, below is how the first chapter originally looked like.

Brytenwalda AAR
28/09/2013

Jorviks Return
 
Chapter 1: Charity
 
As if rubbing rough gravel into a sore wound, Jorvik wiped the sand from his eyes. With his nose bitter from salt and both ears ringing he climbed to his feet making his best to ignore the icy gales as they whipped his naked body. “By the grace of Hlin, I am lucky this day.” He croaked aloud.
 
Only he had survived last nights storm which had thwarted his voyage from his native Norselands. Throwing both his companions and supplies into the swallowing sea the night before, the storm had left Jorvik weak, battered and alone on an Irish coast. Unlike his creaking longship however, he was not completely ruined.
 
Without any possessions, neither food or clothing he would have to make his way into an unknown land. A land which he had set sail to with the ambition of violent plundering. Now it would seem he would have to seek aid and kindness from these backward people before the biting winds finished what the sea could not. With one last look out towards the vast ocean that prevented his return to a welcoming home, Jorvik scurried up the sandy banks making headway towards any signs of sanctuary.

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Over grassy hills and into a thick forest Jorvik stumbled forward. The sun had risen to mid-day, peering through the forest canopy it gave warmth from the retreating winds. As time passed and Jorviks strength slowly withered he became aware that he was entering an area of habitation. Tracks appeared through the thickets with the occasional heap of boundary stones marking the edge of a farmers land. Eventually his perseverance paid off as the trees parted giving way to a heavily used track. In the squelching mud Jorvik could see the clear markings from horse and cart. By the direction of the horses hooves he was able to soon follow them towards a coastal village.

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Squinting beyond the trees Jorvik saw, to his surprise, a very well fortified village. The many residents to this safe haven were muling about. Listening closely Jorvik could hear their voices though not enough to understand what they were saying. Enough however to feel encouraged to approach. But Jorvik unfortunately was completely naked, shivering and generally having an appearance that would frighten the sturdiest of folk. He tried to wipe himself down, unmatt his red hair and find a bush thick enough to cover his cold stricken vitals. Their was in truth no way for him to improve his appearance. Even if he had, his ruined right eye, lost in battle years before would still remain a frightening look for the unsuspecting. He could only approach and hope for their charity.

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Now in open view Jorvik was quickly noticed. Some women dropped their baskets and ran towards the village stockade entrance. Small faces of children appeared from behind an outer hut looking both puzzled and fearful. Then as Jorvik came closer men came rushing out from the stockade walls. All wielding clubs.
 
“Who are you, stranger” an old  man yelled.
 
“An unfortunate soul. I need your aid” Jorvik replied knowing their language.
 
“Unfortunate indeed. How is it you arrive at our gates in such a way.”
 
“Shipwrecked. Last nights storm sunk my vessel with all my possessions. Can you give me aid?”
 
A brief silence arose as the old man, clearly the village elder, took thought. “What was your purpose sailing off these coasts?” He eventually replied.
 
Knowing his true intent was to burn and pillage these coastal villages with his lost companions, revealing that would most certainly not be helpful, Jorvik replied. “Looking for trade. I sailed from the north hoping to find fine furs to return home with. Alas, I am now stranded here. If you could spare just some clothing I will make my way towards the closest town.”
 
“Aileach is your closest town but you will have to pass around the mountains to reach it. Its a few days walk. Come, we will get you warm and fed. And clothed.” He said making one last disapproving look at Jorvik before signalling to the others to escort him inside the stockade walls.
 
They brought him up to their main community shelter. A thatched hut built beside a small cattle pen. Inside a warm fire flickered, a few occupants left as Jorvik was taken towards it. The village elder whom spoke to him outside handed him a rough woollen farmers tunic and a black hood. “We cannot spare any shoes I'm afraid. This clothing will help you none the less to keep you warm on your travel to Aileach.” Jorvik nodded gratefully and quickly dressed.
 
“Once you reach the town however you can only buy charity. Without coin you wont find much support.” He said handing Jorvik a bowl of hot leak stew. “I would suggest then that you stay here for a short while, any extra labour during the sowing season would be greatly appreciated."
 
Wiping away the stew he had quickly gulped down Jorvik looked up quite surprised. In his homeland he was a warrior raider, to be offered work as a lowly farmer should be taken as quite an offence. He could not object and decline this though, not without revealing his true profession. Given his current state of affairs, the chance to earn some gold would be a wise move. The thought however of performing such tasks irritated Jorvik. Begrudgingly he replied, “To work on a farm and help your labour would be, greatly appreciated.” The old man smiled and showed Jorvik to a room he could stay in. For the next couple of months Jorvik would have to work hard, for little coin and hope that when he eventually does arrive in Aileach he can find a way home.
 
The days passed slowly, weeks slower still. The month was February and sowing season was yet to start. For now Jorvik helped where he was asked to. Chopping fire wood, discarding refuge and even milking the cows. For a proud Viking raider this was most shameful. Should he return home safely, the one exploit of his time stranded here which he would not share is the milking of cows.
 
As February passed the weather showed signs of the approaching spring. How routine and mundane the life of a peasant was Jorvik said to himself. It was about mid March when Jorvik regretted his words. Late one night after having finished tending the cattle a panicked alarm was raised. Towards the stockade entrance a watchmen yelled. “Bandits, bandits are upon...” before he could finish his warning he was struck in the throat as a volley of arrows shot over the stockade landing with thuds in the interior grounds. Gurgling on his own blood the watchmen fell over the wall out of sight, a crack could be heard as a bandit finished him off. Indeed bandits were here and they had even been sly enough to fall upon the village whilst its gate were left open and unsecured.
 
Men rushed to defend it, women sought refuge inside their huts, children sat crying. Jorvik however looked quickly for a means of escape. His choices were through the entrance gate where the bandits poured in or by jumping the walls hoping not to break a leg. Frustratingly the ramp up to the walls was at the gate entrance. Either way Jorvik would have to get past the marauders.“Close the gate” a voice screamed, “To the walls another yelled.” In disarray the villagers fell quickly. Their makeshift clubs and spears no match against the attackers weapons of iron. Heads were cracked and bellies spilled. Jorvik trapped inside made his escape bid through the gate. But even a skilled warrior is useless with no weapon. He was not nimble enough to get past, instead he took two heavy blows to the face.

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As the morning frost began to recede and the birds ended their morning songs Jorvik stirred. It would seem he had survived the raiders assault. Around him lay butchered bodies and moaning survivors. Smoke swirled around making him cough, the raiders had looted and set the huts alight. Picking himself up Jorvik stumbled over to the gate he failed to get through. He had come to this land to do such a tragedy and was now a victim of one. Laying beside the entrance was a forgotten bundle of fine furs dropped by the departing bandits.
 
“Incompetent raiders” Jorvik said aloud as he thought how much better his own raid would have been. Grabbing the furs he also departed, following the bandit tracks.
 
Almost for my taste there...
Landscapes would be perfect and women in pictures, some Beyoncé or Angelina Jolie looking like.
But hey, its my taste we talk about here, maybe I am wrong and naked women in stories are absolete (?) ...
Like... a knight saves a top model from rape by some muscle outlaws and as reward the top model invite the knight in her tub... something like that.
I repeat, maybe I am too picky when it comes to literature in its pure form.
 
No, dont change anything. If you really should change something its the length of chapters, make them even longer! :grin:  I enjoy reading this and letting my imagination run wild. I do not agree on anything with Mihai Bravul. You're doing a great job sPOONz, and continue on doing it! I have to say this again, this is by far the best AAR I've ever read and will continue on reading.
 
Dont worry, this story is not going to change style. Anyway it sounds as though Mihai Bravul is after some erotica novel, lol. Once Jorviks Return is complete I will try another more traditional AAR. Im leaning towards basing it off a Paradox game this time, CK2 or Senguko most likely. The next chapter I'm writing by the way will actually conclude this story so i will jump straight into my next project soon after. I'll let you know where its posted if its not a Taleworlds game. The final chapter should be completed by late afternoon tomorrow, hopefully. 
 
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Final Chapter: War - Part One

The sun rose breaking the shroud left lingering behind the storm. The light reflected so brightly off the morning dew Jorvik was forced to look away. He rode with Bjarkis and Idibil at his side, following behind King Penda and his generals who led their finest warriors onwards to Gwent's border. Their ambition was to return Felix’s title to him, unjustly usurp off him by his younger brother. The hundreds of hardened men created a long column of glinting armour and sounded oppressive as their boots marched on the stone road with rhythmic discipline. Jorvik had fought often in small sized skirmishes but never amongst hundreds of so many well armed and well trained fighters. He was in private awe of this proud show of might. He recalled old tales spoken to him as a boy of a great clan that amassed armies of thousands. Legends claimed it was birthed by a mother wolf and drowned the battlefield in rivers of blood as it vanquished its enemies. Eventual to become an uncontested power that then rotted from the inside, collapsing inwards under the weight of its own decadence, finally giving birth to the fractured clans of today.

He questioned Bjarkis on the politics of their situation, trying to understand the rules of ownership regarding lands and titles. From what he could fathom this fight for Felix’s land would now cause a war between Mercia and Gwent who claimed vassalship over the lord who laid claim to Felix's place. There was meant to be a degree of legality to it all, though Bjarkis assured him most claims were simply concocted by perspicacious scholars. The war would be fought with ink and quil more so than with shield and axe he had told him. King Penda would have the lands title transferred onto Felix who would then serve under Mercian authority. Bjarkis told him that the Clans of Britannia and much of the world fought in this way.

As they marched onwards Jorvik had begun to feel unstoppable, at least until their path became blocked at a small river crossing. Despite their haste scouts from Gwent had alerted Felix’s rival lord their approach and had sent an army to stifle their advance. They sat stubbornly on a low hill across the river which granted them strategic control of the crossing. Their numbers were smaller than the Saxons but the Welsh, or Britons as they liked to call themselves, could easily bottle neck the Mercians should they attempt to cross. As Jorvik made amateur guesses as to what advanced tactic King Penda would employ to overcome this, he was surprised when the order came for an outright assault. Apparenntyl not shy of taking a gamble.

As the Saxons formed up the Welsh moved their heavy infantry to block their side of the bridge. Their skirmishers remained on top of the hill ready to pelt the Saxons with stones. The river was not too wide nor too deep but it would allow thesm to inflict harm on any who tried  to wade across. With a signal sounded from a rams horn the command was given for the fierce men to advance. Reaching the bridge they clashed noisily with their opponent beginning a bloody wrestle for control. Jorvik, Bjarkis and Idibil watched on as the grind of meat and bone spilt into the river. Jorvik was glad to not take part in this fight. It was too messy and linear, once on the bridge there was no where to go but forward into the waiting enemy.

Observing the progress of the battle Jorvik, Bjarkis and Idibil a band of brave Mercians try to wade through the river. They watched anxiously for the incoming barrage of flints to be flung from the slingers but it never came. Soon enough they had crossed unscathed and fell onto the Gwentish flank. They fled as their defence folded under the unexpected attack. King Penda turned in his saddle towards the three watching on and tossed a coin in his palm, Bjarkis laughed though the unspoken message was lost on Jorvik.

A few hours were dedicated for the recovery and aid of the wounded. Those incapable of fighting were sent back to Licidfelth whilst the able soon continued onwards. Without breaking for camp they marched through the night reaching the town of Caer Went as the sun began to rise. Their arrival was quite and undisturbed. The towns defence were well aware of their approach yet remained behind their walls. The Mercians set about establishing a perimeter with the bulk of their forces camped east of the town. In front of where Adorno had previously breached the walls could be seen a catapult built to launch rocks at the defenders. It was of no use to them however as the enemy lord had burnt it into a smouldering ruin. Yet the breached wall however had not been fully repaired and remained a weak point fior the Gwentish defenders.


Their base was established with most men to huddled around camp fires. Jorvik, Bjarkis and Idibil were granted use of their own tent, set up between the generals and the Kings own. The sun soon rose as they began their first day of seige, already a plan was being drawn for an assualt later at dusk. By the time Jorvik woke, hunters had brought a large boar in camp and had begun roasting it on a spit. As guests of King Penda jorvik and his companions were granted the same privallages as King Pendas generals and could feast on as much as they desired. King They sat eating soft bread with fine wine, chatting merrily until Penda revealed his plans. “When the men are well rested our assault will commence shortly after nightfall. I have had a ladder constructed already and with the cover off darkness we will bring it upon the breach left by Aldornos war machine. The defenders can not match our huscarls and will driven back into the town centre. Once surronded, they will surrender.”

The generals all nodded and agreed but a unexpected voice from behind spoke up. “Have you considered trying to replicate this siege weapon, my Lord? It could be of great value if we can reconstruct it.”

King Penda beckoned the stranger to come forward to meet Jorvik. “Ugljesa, my Spymaster. He is my eyes and ears for when I need to delve the cracks and crevisives of the land. With a particular ability also to bribe my enemies!” Now Jorvik understood the coin toss gesture Penda made at the bridge battle earlier. The Spymaster unconcerned with introductions spoke directly to the King.

“I come to inform you we have captured some prisoners. Most likely just scavengers getting too close but Ive detained them all the same if you wish to interrigate them. Should you have need of myself I will be taking notes on this catapult wreck. It seems its maker Adorno is knowledgeable of Byzantium siege engines.With that the shady man disappeared outside.

There discussions continued as the men feasted. Soon the sun began to set and anticipation grew throughout the camp at the impending attack. The ladder had been kept hidden in a woodlands behind their position but the enemy had reinforced the walls with more men regardless. It was certain they expected  the assault to take place at the breach but unlikely they could stop the huscurls from breaking through. Jorvik himself had noted the defenders that patrolled the walls with little to no armour, carring wooden clubs or staffs. It seemed the besiege Lord had conscripted the local peasents into his defence instead of investing in real soilders. A mistake that could cost him all despite his advantage up on the walls.

Camp fires were extinguished and orders for quiet given. The Mercian army lined up waiting as the large and heavy ladder was brought up to the front line. It was carried by daring men who removed their armour so as to not be hindered in their race to the wall. They needed to get the ladder in position and set it up quickly before the main assault tried to climb it, all the time dodging stones and arrows.

The order came to begin the attack and they darted off. The men ran bearing the heavy ladder on their shoulders, followed wave of armoured Mercians. Their success depended entirely on the ladder getting positioned correctly. Over the uneven ground they ran. Some tripped, some struck by stones or arrows. All kinds of objects were used as missiles but like nimble house mice they made it. Slamming the ladders into the earth they tilted it up and over into position. No sooner had they done so the thundering horde of Mercians scrambled up. The ladder had been built wide enough for two to climb to the top and into the fray. Great cheers came from the waiting Mercians before they took their turn to brave an attack up the ladder. Yet they keep being beaten by the defending ramble, fallen in heaps, some wounded others dead. Man after man fell back in failure. Jorvik watched from afar through the night ast he attack continued without success. Occasionally a small groups of Mercians claimed a patch on the wall but were soon over come and thrown back. This was worse than than the bridge assault Jorvik thought.

The fruitless attack continued. Hours passed yet no ground was gained. It seemed as though King Penda's confidence had been too, becoming infuriated at the lack of progress he demanded a general to find out why his hurscurls could not succeed. They waited watching more men fall, taking to the ladder again and risking death. Eventually the general returned to him with another, carrying the corspe of an enemy . Setting the body down and lifting back the cloth tunic he said. “This my King is why we cannot break through. They are not who we believed them to be.” Under the soft tunic the dead defender wore iron chainmail of a well known design. These were not Welsh peasants but Frankish warriors, the most elite of all fighting men.

They all waited for King Pendas response until finally he spoke. “Its seems as though this Lord has out-smarted us. Order an immediate withdrawal before we waste anymore men. We have lost this assault.”
 
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Final Chapter: War - Part Two

The nights sky shone bright as the moon watched on. The men beaten and bloodied had been forced to pull back from the impenetrable walls. Their mighty ladder fell as the cheering defenders cast it away like a felled oak. The enemy lord had won with pernicious trickery. Parading his defenders like peasant farmers along his walls King Penda had been duped into throwing his best against staunch Franks instead. Their losses were at least a third of their number.

Returning to camp an assembly was called immediately to re-strategize. Though their was little concern of a counter attacker from the defenders themselves all knew East Anglia would invade the moment they got new that Mercia was preoccupied in the west. Taking their seats inside the Royal Tent, Jorvik, Bjarkis and Idibil listened closely as the King and his generals discussed a means to amend their miscalculation. The loss of their ladder meant all entire efforts had been squandered. Penda wanted an assault that would leave a permanent breach made in case the Franks beat them back again. Whilst a remake of the catapult was desirable, without Adornos engineering skill to ensure its proper construction they settled on an old favorite means of forced entry. They were to build a battering ram and fall heavily upon the city gates. With the entrance beaten open they would gain an access point to repeatedly assault the defenders. As the enemies numbers dwindled theirs would be reinforced. If they they could not win by shield and sword perhaps they could win by attrition. So it was the orders were given to construct a ram without delay. By noon the following day they would be back to harass the defenders once again.

Jorvik laid on his fur bed as he looked down at his toes thinking of the long journey they had made. Time had passed as if only a few weeks yet since his arrival nearly six months gone by. He recalled his first difficult moments and how he thought he a quick trip to Ailreach would solve his misfortune. Should he have known he was to end up milking cows as slave, sleeping in caves with Wildmen and fighting off fisherman for being duped into stealing a fishing he would have probably tried swimming back home there and then. But depiste the journeys woes he had found himself somewhat enjoying the unexpected adventure. And now his final journey home was so close. All he needed was for this siege to succeed and he would be free to return. Thinking of this and his beloved homelands he fell asleep.

He woke to loud bustling sounds outside his tent. Men were yelling as they pushed the weight of the heavy ram over the soft earth. Through the night the army regained its strength and whilst engineers  franticly built the ram. Now joining Bjarkis and Idibil, Jorvik stood in the morning sun watching as soldier pushed the promising machine onwards with stalwart efforts. The weather was warm and sunny, seemingly out of place for the coming battle. The fight was to be at Caer Wents main gates where the stone gate house bore the huge oak doors that blocked their way inside. The Franks made no attempt to hide their identity now and stood menacingly upon the walls with iron axes and long spears, dazzaling in the sun.

As the battering ram slowly rolled through the long grass the defenders began to fire their many arrows. The Franks were not concerned with reserving any ammunition, only with preventing the rams approach. Many brave warriors were willing to take up the challenge of driving the ram forward, and with each lost to an arrow another took his place to push the ram onwards. There was great hope it would succeed for it was built with great skill and bumped along unstoppable with a great tree trunk swining at its center. With the presence of their King and the cheers from fellow warriors its drivers courage held firm until the ram stood poised at the gates. Swinging its weight, the crafted log came crashing into the doors sending huge splinters into the air. Other men ran up eager to offer shelter with shields for those that operated it, smashing the trunk against the threshold again and again. Each strike sounded like a mountain cracking apart, the defenders desperately hurling stones with many more insults. The onlookers watched, gripped by anticipation.

Jorvik observed from outside his tent. He saw the Franks running too and fro on top the walls. His eyes caught sight of a small number who carried a large clay pot. What they were doing was only revealed when they above the ram and poured a thick black substance down onto it and the beneath. Those caught beneath slipped and stumbled as they ran from the noxious soup, unhurt until a flaming torch was thrown amongst them. The siege weapon and all who were unlucky enough to be caught by it were engulfed in a red hot flame. It burst alight fiercely, rising high above the walls before falling back into itself where it cooked its victims. Not knowing what he had just witnessed Jorvik turned to Bjarkis who walk away muttering. “Greek fire.”

The battering ram blazed yellow burning into ruin, receiving the same fate as Adornos catapult. With its destruction they had lost the battle again and failed to create the desired enrty point. The potential threat of East Anglia hearing of their failure and attacked as the number of spectators increased. Jorvik waited anxiously outside the Royal tent as the King and his generals once again debated their strategy. Dusk arrived as the camp fell silent with the demoralized Mercians huddling around camp fires. Jorvik wandered what Felix and Adorno must be thinking, stuck down in their dungeon listening for sounds of their captures being attacked. Yet news of the sieges next step was not as he had hoped for. Idibil brought word from the Royal Tent that King Penda had decided to abandon the attack altogether. The army was to withdraw the next day as ambassadors remained to buy peace with Gwent. The threat from East Anglia was too great for the King to ignore.

Jorvik felt his stomach knot inside. He was so close to freeing his friend and returning home. He walked outside frustrated, forced to endure the sounds of celebrations echoing from within Caer Went. He sighed and walked away, heading into the woodlands that had been used for the construction of the destroyed ram. He stood in the dark and closed his eyes, desparate for any idea that would convince the King to stay.

“I understand you have much depending on this Jorvik.” Startled he turnt to the unexpected voice. It was the Spymaster. “We have been defeated today and it shall be unlikely King Penda will return here. Not at least until East Anglia has been dealt with. As the Spymaster continued Jorvik felt he was getting at something. “It was a daring raid you made on King Annan, capturing him the way you did. I guess it's as they say, desperate times call for desperate measures.”

“Ugljesa is your name if I recall correctly. The man who King Penda turns to when he requires a more un-orthordox approach. I have a feeling you are going to propose one.”

“You really are quick for a farmer. I do have a potential avenue to explore before the King and his army departs. One of the prisoners I detained last night has some interesting information. But he says he will only tell me if I bring him his friends. And apparently that’s you and Bjarkis.”

Jorvik went to reply but he was stumped. For the life of him he could not think who would claim to know him. Bjarkis perhaps but for himself the only friends he had were either locked in a dungeon or laid resting a broken leg. He followed the Spymaster back to camp where restrained together were several men. No torches had been lit so it was hard to make out their faces. As he approached a small shape jumped up.

“Not that one!” It shouted. “I said bring me Bjarkis who may be with this one-eyed fool.” Jorvik had to appraoch close to the little man in the dark before he saw it was suprisingly the little hermit.

“What are you doing here? Have you been following us?” Jorvik said leaning forward.

“Don't you poke your nose into my business. I maybe a small hermit but I have big eyes and bigger ears and know when a chance to earn coin is to be taken. You want a way into the town, I can give you away in. For a reward of course! There is a forgotten sewer that I can lead you through. From there you can get to the gates and open them for your Kings men.”

The Spymaster clearly pleased had already began to untie the hermit. “Prove yourself true and you will be greatly rewarded but there is no time to lose, if there is a way into Caer Went then take us now.”

With that they quickly set off. There was no chance to get the plan approved by King Penda so Ugljesa sent word to him as they headed for the sewer. Bjarkis had laughed when he heard of the hermits presence and reminded Jorvik how he would make a good tracker. Keeping silent they let the hermit lead them on quietly around walls. He hopped and skipped so fast the others had trouble keeping up with him. The hermit had spoken truthfully as an old iron grate lay hidden behind bushes. The way was cramped, only enough room for one at a time. Crawling without light Jorvik blinked and bumped his way through the dark unlit he air became clear and they passed through into an ally within the walls. The sounds of celebration could be heard from the defenders. With the Franks preoccupied they separated. Ugljesa made for Adorno and Felix who were held with all those that had gotten caught whilst Bjarkis, Jorvik and Idibil sought out the gate. The hermit soon disappeared back down the tunnel before he could be assigned a role. They darted of down the streets avoiding some townsfolk who lurked around despite the late hour. Peering out of alleyways and from behind crates they eventually made it to the front gates. But despite their daring deed  their luck ran short as behind the gate were stacked many stones and wooden supports to prevent the rams entry. It would take the three of them hours to clear it all.

The cheers and laughs continued from the Franks as the three of them stood silent, unable to open the gate. As guards patrolling above came with thier torches they retreated back into a dark ally. Once they passed Jorvik noticed black drips running down the gates left from the substance that had been poured above. Following its sticky trail back up the stone walls Jorvik saw another clay pot used to hold the flamable liquid. “Greek fire!” He exclaimed. “We burn this sodden doors down.” Indeed it was possible and so they frantically scurried up the stone steps to the pot. With an effort they pushed it over letting the black contents spill down the gates and into the barriers behind it. The large pot clanged loudly as it hit the foor, guards alerted and came back to investigate. As two came into view Idibil and Bjarkis pounced onto them out of the dark. In the confusion a lit torch rolled of the edge and into the black substance.


For a time Jorvik lay on his back unaware there had been a great burst of flame sending himself and his companions flying off the wall. His ears rang painfully. Quickly he came too, seeing how he had been blasted down the alley and landing on Idibil. Bjarkis grabbed them both up, helping Idibil to put out his burning beard. “I think that did the trick.” Bjarkis said coughing and rubbing his watery eyes. The plan had worked better than expected as the gates lay burst apart, landing almost twenty feet from where they had been hinged. The way was now clear even if everything seemed to be on fire. Collecting their wits they ran back to the sewer. The cheers of celebration continued but now from the Saxons, not the Franks. As they crept into hiding they heard an almighty clash of iron as King Penda charged his men through the breach. Wheezing and sniffling they waited patiently for signs of Ugljesa.

As the Mercians piled into the unprepared defenders the streets flooded with fighting men, clashing together like opposing waves. The battle was intense. Men roared warcrys, other yelled in pain. Axes obliterated skulls and swords opened bellies. The stink of burning sulphur mixed with the clinging waft of severed flesh and running blood. Jorvik's mind spun as he heard more cries raised from another charge. Each of their blackened faces peered out from the sewers entrance to witness the other clash but instead were startled by the reappearance of Ugljesa. He wore a smile bigger than Jorvik thought his face could hold. “Its done.” Ugljesa said. “The captives are free and are attacking the Franks also. Come, you three have done enough for tonight.”

Ushering them down the sewer Ugljesa led them back into the fresh air beyond the walls exterior. Scuttling back across the way they came they soon return to the safety of their tents. Exhausted and with hearts pounding still they sat slumped on their fur beds. Too tired to speak they simply sat together smiling in silence.

By dawn the battle had been won. The Franks had soon surrendered and handed control of Caer Went over to King Penda. They were escorted back into the town by maids to meet the King and their rescued friends. The way had been cleared of corpses but thickening blood remained sticky underfoot. At the base of the town hall steps sat the King amongst his generals, cleaning his war axe. “Welcome again my brave hero’s. I congratulate you on blowing apart the door and not yourselves as well.” He said observing the missing portion of Idibil's beard. “I've heard of this Greek Fire but never knew of its potency. Ugljesa, as soon as we are done you are to acquire as much of it as you can find.” Speaking to Jorvik he said, “My new vassal, Felix is on his way. I must once again forgo any celebrations however. I hear East Anglia have already begun to regroup after the loss of King Annan and so my duties take me to battle on in the east.”

The King expressed further gratitude and requested they visit him in Licidfelth to receive a just reward. As he left Jorvik saw Felix and Adorno approach. Felix had managed to keep himself well pampered by the looks of it, despite his recent accommodation. Seeing Jorvik he called out. “My brave farmer. Hero of Hibernia and Lord of the Cows. It does please me to see you again. I here they have opened the fabled tavern Whores Hole especially for us. Come, lets get merry on ale and fat on roasted hog.”

Jorvik, Bjarkis, Idibil, Adorno and Felix sat down at last inside the tavern Felix had spoken so much about. Jorvik was surprised to see it was far more pleasant than the grotty back ally drinking hole he'd expected. When he questioned Felix on its name and lack of pleasure women Felix seemed shocked that he had even thought of such a thing. It would be later he discoverer Felix could not read and the Tavern was in fact called the Horse Hovel.

As they joyfully shared tales and exploits, Jorvik for the first time on his journey felt it coming to an end. He had made friends and enjoyed the adventure along side them but now it was time for his return home. He would miss them, even Felix. Yet he knew by now his destiny here was doomed to always fall into difficulties. Difficulties generally brought on by Felix's mischief. As the others gossiped amongst themselves Jorvik lent back in his chair chatting with his troublesome friend, asking about his plans now he had re-claimed his land back. Felix laughed and said he wasn’t shore of what he would do with it. After all, he had never owned such a claim. “You what!?” Jorvik almost fell out of his chair. “Felix, tell me you haven't been pretending to have had a claim on this town.”

“Yes. Terribly funny don’t you think?” Felix said asking a maid for more ale.

“Funny? Your mad Felix! What about King Penda?”

“Don’t worry about him, he's too busy fighting everybody.”

“But what will you do now? You cant stay here.”

“Exactly my good farmer friend. That’s why in short time we are going to sneak away. I have boats prepared but we need Bjarkis and his men.”

“You need them? What on earth makes you think they will want to be apart of this idiocy?”

“This town is famous not just for the Whores Hole, Jorvik. But for its wealthy mines too. The boats are all ready full of gold and silver. Everyone gets a share of course.”

“Oh, and you think Ugljesa the Spymaster isn’t onto you?”

“Onto me? He organized the boats, Jorvik. Keep up. He's coming with us.”

Jorvik sat back down staring at the ceiling. Felix he thought, really must be mad. King Penda's wrath would be unflinching as he sought to catch those who made a mockery of him. Never would this embarrassment leave his court. Jorvik felt it best if he forfeit his reward at Licidfelth and made his return home instead.” Drinking down his jug of ale all in one he stood up ready to leave. “I'm sorry Felix but I’m retuning home.” He said feeling content with his decision to depart alone.

“I know Jorvik.” Felix said patting him on the shoulder. “I'm coming with you.”
 
For those interested, I am updating this story with a re-write and I'm including pictures also so its a much nicer read. As of today, I have re-worked up to Chapter 5 with the rest hopefully completed in about a week.
 
sPOONz said:
For those interested, I am updating this story with a re-write and I'm including pictures also so its a much nicer read. As of today, I have re-worked up to Chapter 5 with the rest hopefully completed in about a week.

Great! Nice story and pictures! I liked it very much!
 
Idibil said:
Great! Nice story and pictures! I liked it very much!

Hello Idibil,

Glad to hear you've enjoyed it. I have certainly enjoyed your mod for both playing and writing in!

Update on Story: I've complete the entire story after a marathon writing session. I have posted up to Chapter 10 as I still need to get pictures for the rest which should be tomorrow. Whoop! 
 
@ Kekke,

Hey, sorry I didn't notify the thread but the story is effectively finished (again!). Unfortunately I got offered a full time job which meant I ran out of time and could not finish the pictures for the last few chapters, the re-write of the story is complete, although I had to rush it a bit. I have however been busy doing lots of studying on creative writing so that I can write another story that reads much nicer. My plan is to write Story AARs for lots of games, I really wish I could quit this job so I can have all the free time again, lol. But realistically my work hours wont lighten up until the end of the year so until then I'm stuck in creative-purgatory. I cant even play games at the moment. :sad:

Setting myself some practise exercises however I did manage to write a test AAR on Baldurs Gate, just a few paragraphs. If you care to read it, I shall post it below.

Baldur's Gate Test Screenshot LP

Chapter One:

Seated upon a crooked finger of rock, jutting out into the bitter seas of the Sword Coast stood the old and venerated sanctum of Candlekeep. Within its dusty halls hooded monks carefully sifted between the pages of ancient scrolls and texts as they sought forgotten knowledge, great or small. Amongst these resident Avowed came others seeking the writings of wisdom. Great wizards, solemn sages or the fortunate wealthy, all coming westwards down the winding Way Of The Lion bearing a book or scroll of great value, such is the price of admission. Among these distinguished figures mingles the lesser dwellers of Candlekeep. The rough hands who grease the portcullis chains, endure the red-hot kitchen coals and the frosty mornings to milk the cows. The guards, the cooks and the cotters. Living with the serfs and present in all their labours is Abdel. A young man beginning his twenties and a life-time resident of the keep, yet neither an Avowed, visitor or serf. A ward of the esteemed sage Gorion who by his decree lives quietly helping here or there, pleasantly free to go where he pleases but never beyond the curtain walls.

Abdel is deeply fond of Candlekeep and its archaic residents yet it is, as he is well aware, a boundray to both the outer-world and his inner-mind. Such great knowledge lays nestled upon the long library shelves yet the Avowed delight little in sharing their teachings, save for Parda who will welcomingly sit to speak of the great tales from Faeruns long history. Yet that is all they are, stories and fables which Parda rarely finishes, often dropping off to sleep long before they have ended. Abdel urges for more than this. To bring justice hard upon those that flaunt it. To bring light back into lost ruins and return their great treasures to the fearful. To learn from the library’s enigmatic texts himself and expand his own knowledge and wisdom. Yet, his dear father Gorion will not permit it. “The monks have too much to learn and too little time to do so.” He says softly whenever Abdel expresses these desires.  “Be content my child. You are safe here within the walls. If I can spare the time I shall help you in your studies. But beyond our gates are brewing concerns I must attend to.”

Gorion has always been concerned, and secretive as to why. Abdel knows little about his adoptive father other than he had once concerned himself deeply in the matters of the Sword Coast. The world was suffering from the repercussions of the Time of Troubles, as it had been called. A dark time when the very Gods themselves had come to walk amongst the mortals. In their wake, great harm and chaos ensued before their ascent back into the heavens.  It was regarding this turmoil Gorion had focused his concern, yet little more did Abdel know about it. He has however a deepening sense of foreboding each time he see Gorions weary gaze. It is a look that Abdel recognises only from his earliest childhood memorizes.

In recent days these worries  seem to weigh heavier on Gorion. Abdel often sees him arrive speedily at the gatehouse, collecting mail off a courier and returning to his chambers and his chosen solitude. Abdel dare not pry or even presume to speculate on the matter, though the worried whispers and fretted gossips of the Candlekeep Inn' s guests were perhaps a clue as to what concerns his beloved father. The Sword Coast is in the grip of an iron shortage. The southern Nashkel mines now produce only tainted ore which splits and splinters when put between hammer an anvil. Becoming such a precious commodity bandits  frequently raid trade routes both north and south.  Baldur's Gates forces are stretched far too thinly to secure the Coast Way and are now relying on the Flamming Fist mercenaries to do so. With the Iron Crisis swelling sorley, alarmed rumours are spreading that the Grand Dukes are pointing their accusing fingers at Amn, their southern neighbour. War was coming the rumours said.
Going even further off topic, fans of MnB may be interested in http://legionsofashworld.com/ I just bought it but have not played it yet. Its similar to the old game Lords of Midnight.

But anyway, to answer your question... the story is complete but just lacking pictures for the final few chapters. So feel free to finish reading it.
 
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