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Tiedye

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There should be a comma between "cause" and "my lord". "my lord" is used to address someone, and therefore needs to be set off from the rest of the sentence. [edit]I'm not sure if this error appears in the game. I can't check until I get home.[/edit]


I know you've mentioned you're a little shaky on English grammatical rules, Armagan, even though you seem to have excellent knowledge of the language, so here's a couple of examples of the rule in action.

"Joe, I need that report on my desk by five."

"Stop playing that game, Joe, and get me that report."

"That's the last straw, Joe. You're fired!"

And so Joe lost his job because of M&B. But at least he suffered his downfall in a grammatically correct way. :wink:
 
I caught the same mistake when talking to the (newly christened?) slave trader, Ramun. When you put the cursor over him, it says "Ramun the slave trader". Should be "Ramun, the slave trader". Also when you talk to him, you say, "I have brought you a few prisoners Ramun." Should be, "I have brought you a few prisoners, Ramun."

I hope you don't mind me pointing these out. I just find that games with spelling and grammatical mistakes can look a little unprofessional.
 
Alright, doing a little more proofreading, asked Ramun to tell me about the whole prisoner thing again.

Ramun's first page:

Here's how the first sentence should look:
You don't have much experience there, have you?
Added a comma and a question mark.

The last sentence on this page should have a comma after "However".

Ramun's second page:

Add a comma after "Actually" in the first sentence.
Space missing after the period in "party.For" and "prisoners.But".

Ramun's third page:

Should be a comma after "sleep".

Player's respons after Ramun's third page:

Change "w'll" to "will".
 
Thanks a lot for all those corrections. Just one question:

You wouldn't want your prisoners to escape or stab you in your sleep now would you?

I changed that to:

You wouldn't want your prisoners to escape or stab you in your sleep now, would you?

I guess that's correct, right? (I feel I am using commas much better now. Thanks a lot :grin:)
 
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