Tales of Calradia (Formerly Warband story and literature thread)

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Alright guys, I hope this thread isn't dead because I just spent an hour or so writing another story...unfortunately, this on is not related to any of my previous stories...never-the-less, enjoy!
It was a bright, clear, sunny day in early spring. The trees had just begun to put forth their buds, and the very first flowers we forcing their way up through the newly warmed earth.  The grass was no longer dull and flattened; it grew straight and tall and green once more.

A young village boy, who was out pulling pails of water from a well, looked up from his work to see a dot appear on the horizon.  He paused for a minute, watching the dot move slowly closer.  It was quite easy to see that it was a horseman, which was not a terribly odd sight...but the boy needed little excuse to avoid his work for a bit.  Then the figure was joined by others.  First by just a few, but then by scores, not only mounted but on foot as well.

The boy stepped back, nearly knocking over one of his buckets, before turning and running back towards the heart of the village.
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William let his gaze fall lazily on the rolling hills that seemed to extend forever in all directions.  He felt only a gentle breeze and the muscles of his horse rolling beneath him as it plodded through the landscape. 
To either side of him, and slightly behind, rode his two most trusted men:  Firentis, his second in command, and Jeremus, his lead healer.  Still further behind was the bulk of William's band, comprised of many archers and foot-soldiers, as well as a strong corp of knights.
A small group of building in the distance caught William's eye.
“Firentis, come, tell me...what village is that?”
“It is Yalibe, my lord...we are nearing the southern border of great Swadia”
“Very good...we shall stop there to refill our supplies,” said William.
“I shall make the preparations,” Firentis replied.  And with that, he wheeled his horse around and began to ride back along the columns of men, shouting out orders.

Yalibe's village elder, an old man named John, stood on the village green.  Behind him he heard the murmurings of the many people gathered there.  They were all very nervous, and they had every right to be.  To the common people, the sight of a large military force was usually a very bad sign...too many times had their village been raided.
But the main force had actually stopped almost a mile away from the village, and only a half dozen riders had kept moving towards the village...they had, in fact, almost reached the first few buildings.  At this point, all but one rider reigned in their horses.  The final one was dressed in a red surcoat, and he wore a long sword on his side.  His horse was a large black charger, although it was not dressed in it's armor.
John sighed, cleared his tired throat, and asked, “What brings you to my humble village milord?”
The rider smiled warmly and replied, “Please, call me William...I come only to buy some supplies for my men.”  William surveryed the villagers assembled and saw that many were showing signs of a hard winter and continued “I will pay double the normal rate for them.”  William had the pleasure of seeing the old man's mouth drop open.
“Thank you my lord, thank you indeed.”

William and his men staid camped outside the village that night, but they were on the move again by the following morning.  They headed south and west from the village, and had soon crossed into Rhodok territory.
In the late afternoon, one of William's scouts reported a that a Rhodok army was on the move, and that the two forces would meet within an hour.
William called a meeting with Firentis and several of his more experienced soldiers.
“As you all know, last autumn the Rhodok slime we are about to face besieged, sacked, and looted our great city of Uxhaul...today, we take our revenge,” he began. “We will wait here for them, giving our soldiers a chance to rest.  We will begin our attack when they enter this valley.”

Christian was a veteran Rhodok solider who had fought and survived many campaigns.  His captain had told him that there was a Swadian force in the area, and he was eager to prove once more that he was a capable soldier.  He was a second rank spearman, meaning he carried a board shield and a long, bladed glaive, which he used to stab and hack into enemies from relative safety.  If an enemy got too close to use his polearm, he also carried a Rhodok special:  a small cleaver, perfect for brutal close up combat.

Christian and more than two hundred fellows marched forward tirelessly, until finally the reached a small valley.  After a short debate, it was decided that the fastest route was the most direct: straight through the valley.  As a precaution, the Rhodok soldiers were command to march in their battle lines.  Christian took up his position, and then began advancing.  They were halfway through the valley when all hell broke loose.

Arrows stormed down from the hills to either side of the Rhodok force.  At first, the effect was dampened by the large shields carried by nearly every soldier.  But after the first few moments, arrows started to find the gaps between these shields.  Men started falling, opening holes in the tight Rhodok formations.  The soldiers tried to retaliate with their own crossbowmen, but the Swadians were too well placed, and very few of the bolts made it to the tops of the hills where the archers were.  Death continued to rain down.

William watched from the main Swadian position as his archers tore into the Rhodok lines.  He knew that the soldiers below couldn't take much more punishment before their discipline broke, and when it did...it was all over.  There, the Rhodok soldiers could no longer stand still while they were mercilessly slaughtered.  They broke their formations and began charging up the hill towards the Swadians.  At this moment, William looked over to his infantry and yelled “Charge!”

Christian was reluctant to break ranks, but he knew the consequences of staying in the open with so many arrows flying.  He joined a large mass of Rhodok infantry as they charged uphill towards the Swadians.  As they reached the hill's slopes, the arrows began to come less frequently.  Christian soon saw why.  A mass of Swadian infantry was counter-charging downhill, swords at the ready.  The Rhodoks had no time to form their formations, and so they were stuck in single combat with the Swadians...they stood no chance.  Christian fought ferociously with his cleaver, but all the while he was being pushed back down the hill.

After ordering the charge, William had donned his own armor and readied his sword and lance before joining his knights on the opposite hill.  Now was the time.  With a simple nod and a slight motion with his lance, the began crashing downhill towards the melee below.

Christian turned just in time to see the mass of Swadian cavalry come galloping down the hill behind him and crash into what was left of the Rhodok forces.  As he turned, he felt a something hit his stomach. He looked down to see the end of a Swadian lance embedded there, blood gushing from the sides.  He saw the owner of the lance, a man dressed in a red surcoat bearing the symbol of Swadia, sitting astride a black charger, then Christian fell to the ground, and died.

I probably won't be writing many more, as school is in full swing and I'm not playing much M&B right now.
 
Nice to have it brought to the fore once again - some great stories in this thread. Tempted to start new ones for Giacomo taking place about a year after the earliers ones I put up in this thread.
 
@RangersFury        Hurray! A new story! Very nicely written and kept my attention well. You brought new life to this (almost) dead thread, and for that I congratulate you. Ah, filthy Rhodocks. I must play now and destroy them.  :mrgreen:

@Rapier        You totally should. Those stories were great and ended on such a cliffhanger.

I'll probably write something this weekend or something. Hopefully this revival lasts for a while.
 
Well, because of the positive response I think I will be writing another one this weekend, and I may plan it out a little more...look forward to seeing more stories from you guys!
 
Rangers Fury 说:
Well, because of the positive response I think I will be writing another one this weekend, and I may plan it out a little more...look forward to seeing more stories from you guys!
Good choice  :mrgreen:. Can't wait to see what you come out with
 
The one they call Hawkeye smiled in a sick way when he heard the Swadia army was approaching, the last of their kingdom. All of their castles were seized from them by the uprising kingdom of Galdren. The infamous kingdom that is now threatening the very world has many commanders, Hawkeye is one of them.
  The messenger had trotted up and reported that over eight-hundred swadians were heading out way, against our weak number of 500. The messenger had seemed worried but Hawkeye seemed undisturbed by the news.
"King Harlaus the Fat is getting overconfident." he claimed loudly so his many men could hear him. "How long until they are here?"
"Sadly, in twenty minutes" the messenger answered sheepishly.
"TWENTY MINUTES?" Hawkeye seemed a little worried now, no time to prepare a heavy assault. He started explaining what his men were to do...
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"I cannot believe these fools captured every single fief of ours!" King Harlaus shouted to Count Haringoth.
"Well... it did appear they were prepared..." Haringoth suggested. The thought had come up before, it was nothing new. Harlaus looked like he was about to say something else when multiple arrows flew around him and many screams were heard. Harlaus looked to where the bows came from but there was no one there. Arrows came from a different direction, more screams. Now the men understood that they were under attack and the momentary shock was over. Shields pointed in the air, aimed to block other arrows on the way... but this time they came from behind. Harlaus started to shout orders, but whistle the chaos started the men of Galdren charged at the enemies, and all attention turned the them. The advantage for Galdren did not last long, and soon we were overcome. The Swadians started to swell with pride when suddenly an arrow whizzed from behind them, and on top of the final hill Hawkeye stood, behind him a hundred men wrapped in cloaks with the sparkle of armor glistening underneath. All of them let loose an arrow, multiple finding their mark, and they charged. The blood-curtling scream of the Swadians as the Galdren smashed into their lines. Harlaus fought every man that came at him, and suddenly Harlaus and Hawkeye crossed eyes. Two daggers were drawn from Hawkeye's belt, and he lunged at Harlaus. Blade flashed on blade, as the battle wore on, the clash of battle soon turned to a whisper as the two superior forces fought, it felt like for centuries. Finally, Hawkeye sliced Harlaus's arm, which led to the weakened man to surrender. The victory was short lived... out of nowhere arrows rained down on Hawkeye's men. They scrambled to position but were too slow. Hawkeye sliced and dodged arrow after arrow, but before long they were too much. After an arrow stuck in his leg and he collapsed, the firing stopped. King Yaroglek walked up to Hawkeye.
"That was interesting... a shame your army died," He forced Hawkeye to look at all of the bodies. "But then again, neither will you... Your power must be vanquished, or we will all be finished." Yaroglek took another breath "And thank you for finishing off Harlaus for me" A blade was drawn, and was stabbed through Hawkeye. Blood splattered on the ground, the blade was withdrawn, then stuck through him once more. Hawkeye knew he was going to die now, so he spat one more thing in the king's face.
"I...will see you in Hell!"
  With those words Hawkeye died.
 
Got this story together in the past few hours. Enjoy!

Ganbaatar's horse rode hard for Praven, dodging trees, bodies, and arrows. Firentis, Lezalit, Bunduk, Baheshtur, Alayen, and thirty Swadian knights rode with Ganbaatar. His men had won a battle with the Geroians, but at a terrible cost. Only these thirty-five out of 600 of his men survived the onslaught. Almost the moment the battle ended, Borcha arrived with a message from Harlaus: somehow the Geroians had assembled a massive fleet and attacked Praven from the sea. Ganbaatar rallied his men and rode as fast as he could for Praven, but was ambushed by another massive force of Geroians.

Ganbaatar and his men now rode through a storm of Geroian arrows. The road they rode on was covered with bodies, those men probably ambushed as they rode to the defense of Praven as well. Ganbaatar heard a scream behind him, and then a thud. Ganbaatar drew his bow and started firing shot after shot into the black forest, hoping to his gods that he hit something. Baheshtur was doing the same thing, but his quiver soon ran dry. Firentis pushed his horse harder and rode level with Ganbaatar. He yelled over the wind and the screams, “Sir, we've lost eight of the knights. How much further until we reach Praven?”

“Another mile, I think,” yelled back Ganbaatar. Suddenly he heard the sound of arrow piercing flesh, and then a whinny. He turned and, to his horror, saw Firentis' horse fall with an arrow through it's throat. He watched as Firentis rose from the wreckage, sword drawn, and wildly charged into the blackness, the unknown. Ganbaatar tore his gaze back to the road in front of him and the smoke rising in the distance. He felt as if a part of him had just died. Firentis, Lezalit, and Baheshtur had been the first men to join him and had been with him for years. He began to weep but kept going, hellbent on extracting revenge from these barbarians.

After several minutes, Ganbaatar's posse burst out of the forest and pushed their horses that last leg with the enemy hot on their heels. The gates slammed the second Ganbaatar entered, keeping the horde Geroians out. They entered the city with only thirteen men left. Ganbaatar and his men dismounted and ran through the streets. The walls were still well-manned, but there was fighting everywhere, down every street, every alley, and in every building. Flames seemed to engulf the city, smoke everywhere, yet somehow the battle went on. Ganbaatar ordered his eight remaining Swadian knights to help the battle in the streets, but he kept Alayen, Baheshtur, Bunduk, and Lezalit with him. The five men soon arrived at the walls nearest to the ports. They climbed them to find corpses strewn everywhere, the walls completely devoid of life. As they searched to aid the wounded, Ganbaatar heard a blast as loud as thunder, followed by an explosion. The staircase was blown to pieces by some massive metal ball, sending Ganbaatar and his companions crashing to the ground thirty feet below. Then the world went black...

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Ganbaatar's eyes burst open, reality and his senses flooding back into him. He tried to stand, but he felt a pang of pain shoot through his body. After lying on the stone ground for several minutes, Ganbaatar struggled to his feet. Dust and smoke filled the air, but he was still able to see the horror on the ground. Three bodies lay on the ground, motionless and horribly mutilated. The scene he gazed upon made his stomach flip upside down, too gruesome to describe. Somehow he was able to recognize Alayen, Bunduk, and Baheshtur. He fell to his knees and wept. He might have wept for hours or maybe mere minutes, sense of time completely lost to Ganbaatar as he mourned the loss of his loyal comrades.

He finally regained control of himself, drew his sword, and began walking towards the keep, hoping to find someone to kill. Through the smoke he saw a figure limping towards him, whom he soon recognized as Lezalit. Ganbaatar felt a wave of relief pass through him: at least one of his comrades had survived. But Lezalit was not as unscathed as Ganbaatar had thought: Lezalit had a gash  across his chest that blood streamed from, he had a dagger stuck in his thigh, he had a strip of bloody cloth covering his right eye, and his sword was broken in half and covered in blood. “My friend,” he said, “we must hurry to the keep! We have fought back the first wave, but the next wave is on the way. King Harlaus is preparing a last stand in the courtyard of the keep.”

“Now we can show those Geroian bastards that conquering this land will not be as easy as they think,” was Ganbaatar's reply. They soon arrived at the keep. Once they had entered, the gates were shut and barricaded. King Harlaus began to form a shield wall out of the 200 men he had left. Harlaus gladly welcomed Ganbaatar and Lezalit, saying that they were the only nobles left. Once they were in position, they waited.

Ganbaatar could hear the sound of thousands of boots marching on stone, then coming to a sudden stop. Tension built on both sides of the gate, both armies prepared themselves for the final leg of the race. Then one massive BOOM was heard, followed by a massive metal ball shattering the wooden gate, sending wooden and metallic shards into the Swadians. There was complete silence, finally broken by the Swadian war-cry: “For God, glory, and Swadia!” Then the Swadians charged blindly into the dusty breach, making their final stand.
 
Wow, nice! I hope you are going to continue that one!
My new one:

The siege had gone on for weeks now, and for once the food supplies were low. Solsetur sighed as he ran out of arrows, and picked up another quiver from his fallen comrade, sad to see the body, but eager to stay alive. The Rhodoks were getting closer, and more and more Nords were falling by the day. Of the six hundred that started, only two hundred remained... and more enemies coming with each week.
Solsetur ducked as another wave of bolts flew by, and returned the attack with 3 arrows shot in rapid succession. He had to keep defending the castle, Ragnar was trapped aswell.
Solsetur despaired when he heard the creaking of a siege tower coming out of the forest. He lit an arrow on a torch and shot, but it was no luck, the siege tower was drenched with water. He turned to Deshavi.
"Keep men away from that tower! I will go warn the king." She nodded, and started peppering off the enemies troops.
  Ragnar turned pale when he heard the news.
"A siege tower? Bah! We allowed them this long?" Ragnar was pacing back and forth, finally, he sighed. "I will have to escape." Solsetur's face contorted with rage.
"You would leave all of your loyal men behind? Leave them cannon fodder? We fought for you, we protected you and you are going to desert us?"
"I have to. If I go down, the whole kingdom will crumble." Ragnar was right... but there had to be another way, but the more he thought about it, the more he knew there was no other way.
"Fine, King" He spit out the word like venom "We will die while you take men to protect your sorry a-" The ending was cut off by a slam. The siege tower had landed. "Go! Now!" The king bolted, and escaped out of a secret passage with some of his royal guard. Deshavi came up the stairs with Firentis close behind. They opened their mouths to explain what happened, but Solsetur held up his hand to silence them. As he opened the door to assess the situation, he saw the Nords fighting to keep the Rhodoks off the walls. Blades crossed, and it came to brute strength. Solsetur started shooting men from the wall, trying to assist his comrades. He ran out of arrows quickly, and selected a sword and shield from another corpse. and charged to help his men.
  The fight continued, cries of pain filling the air for hours on end. Finally, they realized both their men were tired, and flew a flag of truce, for the night, no fighting ensured.
  That changed in the morning, while it was night, some of the men had put oil all over the siege tower and lit it, a subtle attack for a good cause. As the arrow fire continued, another soldier came up to Solsetur.
"Are we going to survive this?" Solsetur didn't answer at first, the looked at the man. He was young, at around the age of twenty, and fit, but at a close inspection you could see he had a limp in his right leg.
"We are, Knudarr is a tough nut to crack." The man grinned and went back to his position and started firing again. Solsetur sighed, all of these men were counting on his leadership skills... yet he was as confused as anyone else. They were almost out of food, soon they might have to kill the horses, they had to end this battle soon. An earsplitting scream was heard, and he looked over to see the young man clutching his shoulder, a bolt sticking out of the location. Solsetur helped the man and helped him to the medicine room. This had to end, and now.
  The following night, there was no moon, perfect for the plan. Solsetur looked over at the fellow warriors next to him, and felt more brave. The gate opened silently, and the men charged silently at the Rhodoks. Most of the men finished their opponents before they even had the chance to yell, by the time they were alerted the silent renegade had taken down fifty men at the cost of none. They retreated to the castle and shut the gate quickly.
  Bang! Solsetur woke from a sound sleep. He headed to the door. Bang! Once again it rang through the castle. -the gate- the thought came suddenly to him and he sprinted to where men were lined up in a shield wall. They were ramming down the gate. Crash! The massive gate could not stand anymore hits. A massive hole appeared and some bolts flew through landing on the men's shields. They had to hold this spot, the enemies entrance would be limited. Solsetur gestured for the archers to be behind the shield-men. As the enemies broke through they were greeted by arrows. If they survived the arrows they were cut down by the Nords, but they kept on coming, as if knowing no fear. The attack continued, no stopping the endless horde. A cheer was heard and Solsetur looked to his right, a breach in the shield wall! The enemies that poured through were struck down by the arrows,but once again, they kept on coming. Solsetur and his men retreated to the main keep. He counted everyone that made it. Sixteen men remained. As the door to the keep was being beat down, they made their last stand. Fighting bravely, they were able to kill many of the enemies, but no one survived that night, and the attackers were angered there was no Ragnar.

The men's efforts paid off, though. Ragnar came back to save his men 2 days after the fall, and was saddened he was too late. A memorial was built in the courtyard of Knudarr, dedicated to all of those that stopped the Rhodoks from getting a foothold in the Nordic Land.
 
I return with something to show for my efforts. Giacomo  & Rosewitha return almost a year after their earlier adventure (to be found on pages 2 & 5). This is just a short part, the very beginning, as there are six more pages at the current moment for me to edit and work on.
Anyway I give you the start of;

Unbent. Unbowed. Unbroken.

Ragged shoes, the leather torn and poorly mended, flopped at the mud slick cobblestones. Rain poured down on to the street, turning the dried mud and rubbish into an oozing sludge, the stench mingling with the sweet wood smoke that poured from chimneys. The owner of the shoes, his faded and patched clothing denoting his state of affairs, pressed on along the street, familiar with the intimidating overhang of the buildings that rose high above him, close on either side. At places high above windows were less than an arms length from their compatriots across the street, towering above the cobblestones below.

At the end of the street the person stopped at the junction and pushed his soaked hair away from his eyes. Fingers, with long nails, scraped at the grime on his face, leaving long streaks of pale skin. His beard was ragged and unkempt, like a dark brown cloth draped over his jaw and chin. Despite his appearance the man's eyes were clear, their grey colour matching the clouds overhead.

Picking a turning almost at random, he set off along its soaked pathway with the same shambling stride, ambling along without a care in the world. Self consciously he picked at a piece of dirt embedded on the blue tunic, his knees bashing the excess leather that hung from his belt.
Abruptly he turned and ducked through a doorway, above which hung a sign painted with a hand clutching a cockerel.

Less than a minute later he was propelled out of the door by a pair of large hands. As he crashed into the filth strewn street an obscenity leapt from his lips. A bull of a man, with an apron covering his tunic, stepped into the doorway.

“That so? Well you can stay out of this place you stinking maggot. I've warned you enough times.”

The door slammed shut, cutting off the warmth and noise that had radiated from the place. Picking himself up from the garbage strewn street, Giacomo resumed his ambling, rubbing his bruised leg.

Praven. His home for seven months, living life day by day as a beggar, cutpurse or thief. The contrast between now and eight months ago? Then he'd had a Company of mercenaries, prized crossbowmen and horsemen, employed in Rhodok service for enough money to make a King blush. They'd crushed the Knights and Men-at-Arms of Swadia in a battle near Veluca, ripping the pride of Swadia to pieces with crossbow and lance. Then Count Talbar had insisted on a pursuit, leading his army and the mercenaries to ruin as the foot soldiers of the Swadian army ambushed them in woodland. Giacomo had been forced to surrender after Talbar fled the field, trading his men's lives for his own. Count Delinard had brought him as a prisoner to Praven and left him in the charge of the Master-at-Arms at the arena. For two weeks he had been forced to fight for food and lodging until he took a sharp blow to his head.

The month it took to recover had left him weak. They'd thrown him out on the street with nothing. He would have died, he was certain, except for the help of a few others, vagrants and beggars who'd taken him in as one of their own. Over the winter months some had died, the cold robbing them of their will to live, numbing minds and bodies. Unceremoniously their lifeless bodies had been thrown into waiting carts by town guard and tossed into large pits that served as graves for the homeless and the scum of Praven's streets.

A cry ahead snatched the mans attention and, by instinct, he ducked into a tiny alley. The lone scream was joined by others. The wails were cut off suddenly, replaced by groans and crying. The thump of hobnailed boots echoed on cobblestones. Soldiers. They were sweeping the streets of beggars and vagrants, kicking as many of them as they could from the city in preparation for the tournament. Without waiting for the town guard to reach the alley, Giacomo turned and ran as hard as he could.
 
rapier17 说:
I return with something to show for my efforts. Giacomo  & Rosewitha return almost a year after their earlier adventure (to be found on pages 2 & 5). This is just a short part, the very beginning, as there are six more pages at the current moment for me to edit and work on.
Anyway I give you the start of;

Unbent. Unbowed. Unbroken.

Ragged shoes, the leather torn and poorly mended, flopped at the mud slick cobblestones. Rain poured down on to the street, turning the dried mud and rubbish into an oozing sludge, the stench mingling with the sweet wood smoke that poured from chimneys. The owner of the shoes, his faded and patched clothing denoting his state of affairs, pressed on along the street, familiar with the intimidating overhang of the buildings that rose high above him, close on either side. At places high above windows were less than an arms length from their compatriots across the street, towering above the cobblestones below.

At the end of the street the person stopped at the junction and pushed his soaked hair away from his eyes. Fingers, with long nails, scraped at the grime on his face, leaving long streaks of pale skin. His beard was ragged and unkempt, like a dark brown cloth draped over his jaw and chin. Despite his appearance the man's eyes were clear, their grey colour matching the clouds overhead.

Picking a turning almost at random, he set off along its soaked pathway with the same shambling stride, ambling along without a care in the world. Self consciously he picked at a piece of dirt embedded on the blue tunic, his knees bashing the excess leather that hung from his belt.
Abruptly he turned and ducked through a doorway, above which hung a sign painted with a hand clutching a cockerel.

Less than a minute later he was propelled out of the door by a pair of large hands. As he crashed into the filth strewn street an obscenity leapt from his lips. A bull of a man, with an apron covering his tunic, stepped into the doorway.

“That so? Well you can stay out of this place you stinking maggot. I've warned you enough times.”

The door slammed shut, cutting off the warmth and noise that had radiated from the place. Picking himself up from the garbage strewn street, Giacomo resumed his ambling, rubbing his bruised leg.

Praven. His home for seven months, living life day by day as a beggar, cutpurse or thief. The contrast between now and eight months ago? Then he'd had a Company of mercenaries, prized crossbowmen and horsemen, employed in Rhodok service for enough money to make a King blush. They'd crushed the Knights and Men-at-Arms of Swadia in a battle near Veluca, ripping the pride of Swadia to pieces with crossbow and lance. Then Count Talbar had insisted on a pursuit, leading his army and the mercenaries to ruin as the foot soldiers of the Swadian army ambushed them in woodland. Giacomo had been forced to surrender after Talbar fled the field, trading his men's lives for his own. Count Delinard had brought him as a prisoner to Praven and left him in the charge of the Master-at-Arms at the arena. For two weeks he had been forced to fight for food and lodging until he took a sharp blow to his head.

The month it took to recover had left him weak. They'd thrown him out on the street with nothing. He would have died, he was certain, except for the help of a few others, vagrants and beggars who'd taken him in as one of their own. Over the winter months some had died, the cold robbing them of their will to live, numbing minds and bodies. Unceremoniously their lifeless bodies had been thrown into waiting carts by town guard and tossed into large pits that served as graves for the homeless and the scum of Praven's streets.

A cry ahead snatched the mans attention and, by instinct, he ducked into a tiny alley. The lone scream was joined by others. The wails were cut off suddenly, replaced by groans and crying. The thump of hobnailed boots echoed on cobblestones. Soldiers. They were sweeping the streets of beggars and vagrants, kicking as many of them as they could from the city in preparation for the tournament. Without waiting for the town guard to reach the alley, Giacomo turned and ran as hard as he could.

Nice! I am jealous that you can write that well. :razz:
Thrilling work of literature.
 
wow! Great stuff everyone! Here is a riddle for you: what does a rhodok do when he has to fight but his weapons are missing?
 
Savage Prince

Prince Sharif stood looking out the window of his keep at the town of Veluca. His mind wandered back to the very beginnings of his time served with Sultan Hakim, little did the Sultan know that Prince Sharif would rise from his humble beginnings as a game poacher  to one of the mighty powers to fight for the ownership of the lands of Calradia.

His wanderings ceased when he heard movement behind him, without turning he said "Yes my wife?"

Lady Ruwa curtsied and spoke "My Lord, the ambassador of the Rhodoks is here to see you as requested."

The Prince turned with a smile on his face dark face, "So, the ruse worked?"

"Yes my Lord"

"Now, now my lady no need for such formalities when we are alone."

Lady Ruwa smiled with affection, here was a worthy man she thought, one who could put the end to the killing and unite the lands under a strong ruler. Lady Ruwa only wished her father Emir Ghawana was here to see it, sent into exile by the vile Sanjar Khan never to return. It took Omar Sharif, as he was called back then, many months to convince her father to court her, not long after, they were married and she moved to Veluca, Prince Sharif's first town. There was still much to do before she could exact revenge on the Sultan and the Khan, and with Prince Sharif as her instrument revenge would be severe.

"Ah Lezalit" said the prince interupting Lady Ruwa's musing's "A fine fellow indeed, for a noble born he doesn't mind getting his hands dirty"

"That is true my husband, but he needs to be watched, there is something untrustworthy about him"

"Do not fear my love, I have everyone watched."

A week before the emissaries arrival, the Prince had dispatched Lezalit and a dozen loyal soldiers to raid the village of Viede, near Praven, disguised as Rhodok soldiers. Naturally the village asked for the Prince's protection and now they would get it. Praven was held by the Principality of Omar before the war with the Rhodoks, it was now the Rhodok's last refuge, and there they would burn.

"Very well let's not keep him waiting" said the prince as he walked towards the great hall.

As he entered, the emissary bowed nervously and waited for the prince to speak. The emissary was a portly fellow long used to drinking and eating at other Lord's halls, the last couple of days riding back and forth between Veluca and Praven must of taken a few inches of his girth. Lezalit was also there off to one side below the throne with a look of contempt for the emissary.

"And what word from King Graveth?"asked Prince Sharif.

"My Lord, King Graveth sends his greetings and that the Princedom and the Rhodoks shall for ever be at peace."

"And of the petition from Viede, what do I tell the headman?"

"I assure you my Prince that King Graveth will look into the matter and punish those responsible, it must of been the work of marauders or deserters, no true servant of King Graveth would go against his word"

"Well emmisary I wish to send a clear message to King Graveth that no former village of the Principality of Omar will ever be mistreated by their new overlords. Lord Rolf was a fool to lose Praven to such a rabble that King Graveth calls an army."

The emissary looked up and blanched "You... you declare war on the Kingdom of Rhodoks?"

"I do and more, when I am finished with King Graveth any Lord still in his service will be hunted down and hung like a dog for the crows to feast on."

The emissary stood tall and looked the Prince square in the face. "King Graveth will defend his rightful lands and uphold the tenants of honour bestowed upon him by the peoples of Rhodok. I will prepare your message and leave at once to inform King Graveth."

"No need emissary I already have one prepared" Prince Omar looked at Lezalit who stepped forward and swiftly drew his sword and beheaded the emissary in one stroke. The head rolled to a stop at the feet of one of the guards. Prince Sharif looked at the head on the floor and then at the guard "Pick that up, bag it and give to Lord Rolf to deliver." Turning to Lezalit "Gather the other Lord's tell them we ride, the one to deliver me King Graveth's head will receive Praven."

"Aye, my lord." As Lezalit turned to leave he allowed himself a small smile in the direction of Lady Ruwa, who acknowledge it with the slightest bow of her head. In time my plans will come to fruition she thought, in time.
 
huh, just found this thread. Got a little story going on in Zendar Town Square. The link's in my sig, anyone wanna check it out feel free to do so.(it's set in Warband actually)
 
Thanks for the comments, just finished editting down the next part (whilst reading Herald's 'Savage Prince' - both thumbs up there), so here  we go with the second part of Unbent. Unbowed. Unbroken.:


Lady Bennecia Rosewitha applauded as the unseated horseman climbed unsteadily to his feet, his gauntlet gripped in his hand, raised in surrender. Baron Rochaberth, broken lance still in hand, thrust his fist into the air in victory. The peasantry cheered him hoarse whilst those in the stands and Royal box applauded politely. As the two warriors left the field, the announcer took up his place in front of the Royal box and raised his arms for quiet. Eager to watch the next contest, the crowd hushed expectantly.

“Ladies and Gentlemen, the King gives you the victor of the bout, Baron Rochaberth!” Rampant applause followed the words, which died away as the announcer raised his arms once again.
“The victor of this next bout shall be named Champion of the Tournament. The bout will take place between Baron Devlian, eldest son of Lord Clais. He shall match his lance against that of the Lord Delinard, Lord of Uxkhal. My Lord King, Lords and Ladies, will you please welcome your champions to the field!”

From the end of the field Baron Devlian rode his destrier on to the tilting ground, past the large crowds, waving and smiling to all. Confidence radiated from the man, his golden locks flowing from beneath an arming cap, his beardless cheeks flushed with excitement. His shield, emblazoned with a red lion rampant, hung from his shoulder by its leather strap. As he made his circuit, Devlian halted his mount by the Royal box.

“My Lord King, Lords, Ladies. Lady Rosewitha, could I humbly beg you for your favor?” Eyes swung to Bennecia who smiled at the handsome, golden haired Knight. “Of course sir.” Leaning forward she passed her favor, a red and white ribbon, over to the Baron who took it and pressed it briefly to his lips. With a bow, Devlian turned his mount whilst Delinard, a broad grin on his face, sat waiting at the far end of the field.

“He took just a little bit of a liking to you. I'd work on him if I were in your place. His family has a fortune!” Bennecia turned to look at her friend Lady Gaeta, whose head dress framed her face to give her an almost cherbuic look. “What have you got to lose? Let him woo you. Who knows what gifts he'll give you.”
“If he wishes to pursue me then that is up to him. I won't encourage him in any way.”
“Giving him your favor is not encouraging him? Look how handsome he is. He might be two years younger than you but he's a fine catch.”
“His father might object. Clais and I never saw eye to eye and I doubt he'd wish to see his son marry me.”
“Oh hush, what has he got to do with it? You'd be marrying his son.”
Lady Bennecia turned her attention away from Gaeta and looked to the opposing end of the field where Lord Delinard's destrier stood, unmounted. Holding the reins stood a manservant in the Lords livery, whilst another held lance and shield uncertainly.
The crowd fell silent, watching the still horse and its attendants. The whispers began to circulate. Where was Lord Delinard?

Hidden from the crowd in a horse stall, Lord Delinard leant his head back against a wooden post, his unarmoured body motionless. His eyes blinked rapidly, a rasping cough mewled its way from his lips, sweat rolled down his cheeks. His squire, a chinless boy with blonde hair, vainly fanned at his Lords face with a length of cloth, fear and panic in his eyes. He started suddenly as a hand firmly clamped itself on his shoulder. His pale blue eyes stared up at a man with a rough beard and long hair gathered and pleated down his back. Grey eyes met his and the man smiled.
“What's the matter with your Lord lad? Looks like he's either eaten something that disagreed with him or he's not liking the sun.”
“He's not well sir, he took a fall a momen' ago when he was warming up an' he just collapsed 'fore I could get his armour on him. His horse is standin' out there waitin' for him along with the crowd and he ain't going to be there. He's can't not joust, sir, he can't! He won the last six an' he was so eager to win this 'un.”
The boy fell quiet as he ran out of air. Before he could suck in more air continue, the stranger squeezed the lads shoulder. “Sounds like he's not going to be able to take part. This is the final tilt, isn't it? Look if it will get you both out of trouble, how about I ride in his place?”
Panic and alarm flashed over the youths features. “No sir, you couldn't do that, see, you're not him. He'll have to withdraw and-”
“Which will mean you lose your share of the prize money. Look there's little time. Just arm me with his gambeson and helm and I'll ride it. Trust me, I've tilted before, was almost born in the saddle.”

The indecision in the boys eyes almost made Giacomo feel guilty. Having stolen a pair of shears from a barber, he had carefully tried to repair his beard. He'd done his best to wash and reluctantly had taken his best tunic from its hiding place and that, along with a pair of boots he had stolen, gave him the appearance of a manservant at the least. Maintaining the guise of a menial servant, he'd managed to sneak into the holding grounds of the tournament. Once inside no-one had questioned his reason to be there, they merely assumed he was just another menial amongst many. Now, emboldened by a sudden idea, he had the chance to reverse his fortunes. Win the tilt for Delinard, be discretely rewarded by either him or his idiot Squire and he'd be able to sneak out with a job well done and Delinard with the tournament won and his prize in hand.
Eventually the boy nodded and ducked inside a large white and blue striped tent, emerging moments later clutching a gambeson, padded armour for the legs and an elaborate tilting helm. Tucked into his belt were a long pair of leather gauntlets. In silence he pulled the gambeson onto Giacomo's wiry frame and the buckled the garment tightly. Padded cloth was buckled about his legs whilst Giacomo pulled the large leather gauntlets over his hands. They were huge, almost falling from Giacomo's hands, forcing him to clench his fists to keep them on. An arming cap was placed over his hair and tied firmly beneath his chin, followed by the helm. Instantly light and sound were cut out, the darkness of the helm battling it out with the sudden glare of bright light that filtered through the eyeslits. There was a sharpness on his chin as the leather strap was buckled firmly whilst his ears began to pick out sound once more. His eyes accustoming to the restricted vision, Giacomo nodded to the Squire, who looked as if he was having second thoughts, and quickly Giacomo turned from him, making for the lists.
The last three days he had watched the jousts, bemused at the men who rode at each other with sticks, their dramatic flailing falls to the ground. There wasn't much to it, he was sure, after all he'd been tilting up until the age of fourteen.

He walked between the two fences that led to the lists, the Squire trailing behind him, muttering and moaning to himself. Ahead Giacomo could see the destrier and the two manservants whose relief at his appearance was betrayed by their backs straightening. He emerged from the corridor into the lists and as the crowds saw him he raised his right hand to them and waved. They roared back at him. Some, noting the lack of plate armour, began chanting. Champion! Champion! Champion! Here was a man so sure of his victory that he was not even dressed in plate.

Watching Delinard mount the destrier, Harlaus leant over to Lord Clais who sat by his side.
“Delinard's eager to make up his dallying. Lacks armour and already has his helm on. Hah! Bet he can't wait to lance Devlian off his horse.” He twisted round in his throne and raised a hand. One of the  servants moved forward. “Find out what took Delinard so long. Be discreet.”

Giacomo slipped his left arm through the leather loops of the square jousting shield and reached down to take the proferred lance. He hefted it, groaning inwardly at its weight and lack of balance. He'd forgotten how heavy these things were! It had been months since he properly used a weapon and now his bold, brazen idea was going to become unstuck because he couldn't handle the lances weight.
The blunt tip of the lance began to fallforward and quickly Giacomo righted it, grunting at the effort. Through the eyeslits he could see his opponent comfortably holding his lance upright, his warhorse on the left of the tilting yard, which meant Giacomo would be charging down the right hand side. He needed to unseat Devlian or keep his own lance intact for two bouts. If it led to a bout with swords to decide the winner he'd be in trouble – without the helm he'd be arrested for impersonating a Lord of the Realm and at best he'd be thrown into jail. Fear fluttered inside him, his left hand shaking whilst his legs trembled.
The crowd suddenly hushed, the receding sound like a wave recoiling from a beach, having expended its fury upon the sand and stones. A horn blared its challenge to the sky and beneath him, without any urging from Giacomo, the destrier plunged forward.
Adrenalin surged through Giacomo's veins, cool and refreshing, washing over him. His sudden fear forgotten, the lance now a mere trifle as his body found it's rhythm with the horse beneath him. Automatically he raised the shield and lowered the lance, tucking the excess wood against his body, trapping it. The distance rapidly closed, hooves pounding beneath him, dust spewed up into a cloud. His heart beat pounded in his head, excitement fighting it out with anticipation, his eyes watching Devlian until the last moment.
Fragments of both lances exploded skyward. Giacomo was thrown back in the saddle, his knees pressing against the destriers flanks, grimly gripping on to keep him mounted. His left arm felt numb, as though it had been kicked by a mule. His right arm felt lighter, clutching a severely shortened lance.
The crowd erupted into noise as both men turned their horses and walked back to their respective ends, the mob cheering as the two men raised their broken lances to each other in salute.

Lady Rosewitha applauded along with the rest of the Royal box. To her eye both had been a little undisciplined with their lances, both striking each others shields. Leaning forward she looked at Devlian who was taking another lance from his servants. He raised the weapon towards the Royal box and with a smile Bennecia waved back though she doubted he could see her with the helms restriction.
The crowd fell silent as the trumpet sounded once again. Both mounts raced alongside the fence, trappers flaring, as their riders hunched behind their shields, lances lowered. There seemed to be silence, broken only by hoof beats, as the crowd held it's breath. Again the lances shattered, their fragments flickering and twirling light silver embers. Both knights reached the opposing ends of the lists still mounted. Delinard seemed to be having some trouble staying mounted. He was swaying slightly, but managed to turn his mount, raising the broken lance in salute to his opponent once again.
She turned as Harlaus' servant returned from his errand and leant down to whisper into Harlaus' ear. The servant waited, hovering as though expecting a response from the King, who merely waved the man away. The King leant over to Lord Clais and the two exchanged quiet words, until Harlaus straightened, chuckling.

“You need to unseat him or we're done for! Soon as they find out you're not 'im we'll be killed!” The Squire's whines were fully justified and soon to come true Giacomo realised. What had he been thinking? He had only come to watch, as he had the previous two days, and now he'd thrown himself into the deepest trouble he'd ever imagined. He'd thought it would be easy but years of fighting on foot with sword & shield had distorted his memories of tilting. In honesty with himself, the last time he'd tilted he had been fourteen and that had been with a shorter lance but on a horse to match this one. The impact of the lances had been astonishing! He was learning a grudging new respect for Knights and Nobles who would gladly put themselves up to this willingly. Best to dive from the horse after impact, let the other man win. Then he could be pulled from the field and Delinard's condition could be explained by the fall but...there was the Squire. He'd tell all and, even though he did not know his name, he'd definitely pick him out for the soldiers before he was taken away to prison.
Then by damnation he'd unseat the prinked up bastard on the other horse. He'd unseat him at all costs, or he'd ride out of the other end of the lists and keep on going, out of the Castle and out of Praven. He straightened and looked at the opposing end. His heart sank. Soldiers were blocking the corridors, long spears held upright. He'd never make it past them and he could never force the horse through the stands, to crush women and children beneath the iron shod hooves. Trust in fate and damn everything else.

As the horn blew, he rammed his heels back and screamed.
 
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