Renaissance: A Kings Age- DEAD

[Mahisa]

NEWS THIS WEEK: HIRING

Lets start.
its my first mod so dont think it will be good.

FACTIONS
Kingdom of Swanland
Kaiserdom of Osterich
Salh-Ah-Mi Sultanate
Kingdom of Pravezia
Kingdom of Valsegarde

FEATURES
Formations
Morale
Shield Bash
Same map of calradia but better and more cooler
Much new items

TEAM
Sanduril-Moddeler

the map by Obywatel:
http://www.mypicx.com/06012009/om/


CREDITS
I would like to thanks D,Sparil and Nikephoros for some stuff from EATRC
I would like to thanks Pants, Mirathei and Chel for the Formations Complication
I would like to thanks obywatel for the map(https://www.mbrepository.com/file.php?cid=10&id=1304)
I would like to thanks Maw for OSP stuff
I ts all for now

If you want to support the mod heres a signiture

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SCREENIES and MODELS


Models to be maked
ARMOR

Spoiler

WEAPONS

Spoiler

 

[Almalexia]

imperial state
kaischerdom valsegarde
symbjuk sultanate
kingdom of sumbero
monarchy

Okay, okay, first off, what? The Imperial State? Blatently ripped off from TEATRC. The Kaiserdom? Might as well put the imperial state up again. I'll skip over the sultanate thing, which looks suspciously like 'symbol'. Next, your naming the kingdom after a hat? And lastly... monarchy? So your establishing a country named a government?

Okay, for the first two, I know you are using EATRC as a base, or at least drawing from it, but come on, at least use your own creativity instead of blatantly ripping off the names of a well known faction. You could have at least called it the "Leviathon State', which is what D'sparil based the IS off of. For the next one, how about a more pronouncable name, for example, a favorite of mine: Pala-ha-din. Yes, obviously based of the word 'Paladin', yet still creative and prouncable. Heck, there are even spaces in-between the words to help with pronounciation! Now for the Sombrero kingdom or whatever you call it, I assume it is a Spanish based kingdom. Try something less like a hat, and more creative; Perveza, for instance, another favorite of mine. And lastly, at least try and give the monarchy a name if you wan't anyone to even remotely wan't to join it.

Now, I may seem harsh, but understand this: I have nothing against you or your mod. All I ask, is a little more creativity and effort, especially if your making a mod. It often helps if you write the land's background first, before you start modding, so you have something to base your factions off of, and the attentive audience knows something to expect from the mod, because there could be dozens of Rennaissance: A Kings Age mods, so they wan't to know what it's all about, and what sets it apart from the others.

 

[Mahisa]

ok i`l find out something



Edit 1: FIXED hope u like it tiberius

 

[Almalexia]

Better, but you probably just wan't to go on a quick run-through on the spelling check and the like. But don't forget to get crackin on the background!

 

[Mahisa]

ok

 

[eragoen]

imperial state
kaischerdom valsegarde
symbjuk sultanate
kingdom of sumbero
monarchy

Okay, okay, first off, what? The Imperial State? Blatently ripped off from TEATRC. The Kaiserdom? Might as well put the imperial state up again. I'll skip over the sultanate thing, which looks suspciously like 'symbol'. Next, your naming the kingdom after a hat? And lastly... monarchy? So your establishing a country named a government?

Okay, for the first two, I know you are using EATRC as a base, or at least drawing from it, but come on, at least use your own creativity instead of blatantly ripping off the names of a well known faction. You could have at least called it the "Leviathon State', which is what D'sparil based the IS off of. For the next one, how about a more pronouncable name, for example, a favorite of mine: Pala-ha-din. Yes, obviously based of the word 'Paladin', yet still creative and prouncable. Heck, there are even spaces in-between the words to help with pronounciation! Now for the Sombrero kingdom or whatever you call it, I assume it is a Spanish based kingdom. Try something less like a hat, and more creative; Perveza, for instance, another favorite of mine. And lastly, at least try and give the monarchy a name if you wan't anyone to even remotely wan't to join it.

Now, I may seem harsh, but understand this: I have nothing against you or your mod. All I ask, is a little more creativity and effort, especially if your making a mod. It often helps if you write the land's background first, before you start modding, so you have something to base your factions off of, and the attentive audience knows something to expect from the mod, because there could be dozens of Rennaissance: A Kings Age mods, so they wan't to know what it's all about, and what sets it apart from the others.

Lol just shut up. Perveza? and you make fun of him? cmon perveza sounds like perverted/pervert so its worse. Just leave him to make his mod - who cares.

Salhami sultanate? cool

 

[Almalexia]

Well thats a pretty ****ty thing to say if you say no one cares about his mod.

 

[Mahisa]

hehe i dont think he ment it like he said it

Salhami sultanate? cool

hehe i was thining on a salami and camed up with that name ;P

 

[Cookie Eating Huskarl]

kindom of sagland

Gotta be very saggy

 

[Mahisa]

kindom of sagland

Gotta be very saggy

hehe

changed

 

[eragoen]

Well thats a pretty ****ty thing to say if you say no one cares about his mod.

No - no one cares about the names its superficial your making a deal about it when its not the important thing - its the content that is.

 

[Mahisa]

Sanduril heres models you need to make
ARMOR

Spoiler

WEAPONS

Spoiler

More to come

 

[Mahisa]

And i HIRING

 

[Venitius]

Most of the stuff you want is in the OSP packs.

 

[Mahisa]

ok

 

[shalictar]

looks cool so far.
and
the armor & stuff to be made looks very cool

 

[Mahisa]

looks cool so far.
and
the armor & stuff to be made looks very cool

Thanks.


But its one thing will ask you other members before i`l start modding, should i add Formations Complications or should it be Animations Complications?

 

[Ladias]

Well, first of all, I would suggest thinking of names bit more...
Even if they're fictional factions, they must sound somewhat believable...

For example: Kaischerdom Valsegarde

First of all it's Kaiserdom, not Kaischerdom (that word just doesn't make sense), and second, Valsegarde sounds somewhat spanish/italian/latin while Kaiserdom is clearly with germanic roots... mixing them together and you get some weird state with unbelievable name, even for the fictional faction...

Other than that, good luck

 

[Mahisa]

Well, first of all, I would suggest thinking of names bit more...
Even if they're fictional factions, they must sound somewhat believable...

For example: Kaischerdom Valsegarde

First of all it's Kaiserdom, not Kaischerdom (that word just doesn't make sense), and second, Valsegarde sounds somewhat spanish/italian/latin while Kaiserdom is clearly with germanic roots... mixing them together and you get some weird state with unbelievable name, even for the fictional faction...

Other than that, good luck

changed. thanks

 

[Ladias]

changed. thanks

You're welcome...
Yep, now it sounds more apropriate...

Though there actually already IS state named Osterreich (Austria)... So, now it is TOO real 
And Osterreich means Eastern Empire (Oster = Eastern; Reich=Empire) And the word Kaiserdom also somewhat means Empire (from word Kaiser, that means Emperor), so now your name sounds like: Empire of Eastern Empire 

Sorry if I am toooo annoying!