Official 3D art thread - Warband

[shadowarcher]

Are those lips radioactive?, I don't think I've ever seen lips that glow like that.

 

[cwr]

Finally, I try to finish my model today !
What I got

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Note that I am not a 3d modeler, this criticism is just on aesthetics, and I have no idea how practical it will be to implement most of these changes.

-The ones noted by Volkonski and Somebody.
-She looks too perfectly molded, add wrinkles, (wrinkles are not unique to old people, young people do have wrinkles in their face, and more depending on their expressions) and make the one wrinkle already there a little less pronounced.
-The hair... Looks like it's plastic. Bannerlord's hair is a good inspiration. Make it look like it has individual strands of hair rather than a group of hair strands clumped together by gel.

It looks good otherwise, you have put a lot of extra details in, which is nice.

 

[rgcotl]

Finally, I try to finish my model today !
What I got

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well looks better
but we could only see it from a single perspective here so nothing much to say
to compare with the photo you showed us earlier

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[Romainoir]

thx guys for your comments !!!
finally redo the render and textures that were bad and I think she is prettier

 

[Kentucky 『 ＨＥＩＧＵＩ 』 James]

A lot better, starting to look a lot more "human" now. Main issues are that her eyes are a bit far apart, and her brow doesn't protrude from her nose at all.

 

[TomW426]

thx guys for your comments !!!
finally redo the render and textures that were bad and I think she is prettier

Her gaping smile reaches half a foot across her face.

Other than that, nice sculpt

Ps Under her eyes is as wrinkly as a dryed out ballsack

 

[PoisonCourtesan]

If you fix the enormous smile and the really wide eyes(from a horizontal viewpoint) it's gonna be awesome. Fix it and I'd even like it as an avatar. Give her eyebrows a bit more visibility and make them darker too.

 

[raca]

Eyes are too big and too far apart and mouth is slightly too large (see below)
One on right is a really quick improved version, its not perfect but looks more lifelike in my opinion. Hopefully gives you a bit of an idea 

 

[Austro]

I wish someone could fix her smile....

 

[Somebody]

I wish someone could fix her smile....

Spoiler: k

 

[SacredStoneHead]

 

[Pumpkin Lord]

I wish someone could fix her smile....

Spoiler: k

Haha

 

[Dusk Voyager]

Good idea. 

 

[Beobart]

http://p3d.in/IRKGD

 

[Antonis]

I have a problem. When I try to export a static mesh from Open BRF, nothing happens. I mean I select the mesh--> Right click--> Export static mesh-->choose location-->Nothing. The .obj file isn't there. Please help!

 

[Kentucky 『 ＨＥＩＧＵＩ 』 James]

http://p3d.in/IRKGD

For such a dark metal you might want to make the specular map correspond with the ambient occlusion a bit more, because at the moment there's no normalmap and the specular is just flat, even on the undersides.

Also on some of the curves you have hard edges where there shouldn't really be.

But other than that it's a nice texture, and the model isn't bad either.

 

[Beobart]

First of all thank you for your feedback.

http://p3d.in/IRKGD/spin

-Added a spec map
-Added a normal map

Also on some of the curves you have hard edges where there shouldn't really be.

I don't know exactly, which edges you mean... Can you please show them on a screen?

 

[Lumos]

http://p3d.in/IRKGD/spin

Pretty neat!

 

[Kentucky 『 ＨＥＩＧＵＩ 』 James]

http://p3d.in/IRKGD/spin

yeah, that's way better.

I don't know exactly, which edges you mean... Can you please show them on a screen?

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it's not as bad now, but all the curved edges are designated as hard instead of soft. i marked in yellow where they are, but the actual lines you'll need to change are the ones in green.

 

[Beobart]

I am not sure if p3D support soft edges, there is only a function to use flat shading (all edges are hard) or use only soft edges.