Native speaker wanted

[nema]

Is there someone who will help me to clean up few dialogs?

 

[El Georgeo McFudge]

I am a native to english speaking if that's what your looking for...

 

[Markus II]

Chill out with the CAPITALS chief, some of us have hangovers...

 

[Elenmmare]

Hey. I'm a native speaker and you could call me a writer. I help with the dialogues for the A Medieval Adventure.

 

[nema]

I have some already written dialogs to repair. If you have some time it will be wonderful.

Also if we prepare interesting story it will be also fine, but first I'd like to make readable what I already have.

Please send me a message on nema418@yahoo.com and we can start. I hope that it will not be so hard?

Sorry for capitals, but till now it seems that it's hard to find someone, who is prepare to help.

If you are common with python dialogs, it will help to make work faster.

My only expectation is that we finish started work.

 

[HardCode]

Hey. I'm a native speaker and you could call me a writer. I help with the dialogues for the A Medieval Adventure.

With that run-on sentence? (just teasing ... but it IS a run-on sentence  )

Nema, I can help you out with your dialog to make sure it conforms to English spelling and grammar.

 

[Maethori]

Hey. I'm a native speaker and you could call me a writer. I help with the dialogues for the A Medieval Adventure.

With that run-on sentence? (just teasing ... but it IS a run-on sentence  )

Nema, I can help you out with your dialog to make sure it conforms to English spelling and grammar.

I hate to break it to you, but that's not a run-on sentence. The conjunction 'and' joins the two halves perfectly well.

 

[HardCode]

Not without a comma. The lack of a comma makes it a run-on sentence. If you remove the word "and" from the sentence, each is an independent clause. That is why you need a comma.

Run-on: "I like ice cream and I like cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream and cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream, and I like cake, too."

 

[CompanionCake]

Not without a comma. The lack of a comma makes it a run-on sentence. If you remove the word "and" from the sentence, each is an independent clause. That is why you need a comma.

Run-on: "I like ice cream and I like cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream and cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream, and I like cake, too."

I'm glad you like me.

Anyway, Native speaker of English?

 

[Maethori]

Not without a comma. The lack of a comma makes it a run-on sentence. If you remove the word "and" from the sentence, each is an independent clause. That is why you need a comma.

Run-on: "I like ice cream and I like cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream and cake, too."

Not a run-on: "I like ice cream, and I like cake, too."

Fine you win, but you have a nasty comma splice in there before each 'too'.... 

 

[HardCode]

The comma belongs. By the way, this is on topic because I've auditioned for the job of Editor, correct?

 

[Maethori]

Of course it's on topic, and I'm helping you prepare for editing. Therefore, I'm on topic too.

Also, the comma does not belong.
That comma puts a break where it should not be. The two phrases in the sentence are: I like ice cream. I like cake too.

If you had "I like cake, too" that would break up the sentence in an improper way, so when they are together there is no reason to put in a comma.

 

[Septa Scarabae]