Looking for someone to help fix my lines

[Max.Pain]

I'm making a new video now and it's almost finished, but I found some trouble with those lines... anyway, I've wrote it down already, is there anyone who can help me out of those grammar mistakes and ackwark expressions?

Here they are:

In the last few years of the Han Dynasty, The Court was corrupted and the King was powerless, the authorities held by eunuches and thus the masses lived in dire poverty. As a result, heroes rose one by one, and all of them aimed to be the new ruler of China. A century full of steel and fire has begun. This era is called -- The Three Kingdoms.

 

[SharpFish]

With only slight changes to make it scan better:


In the last years of the Han dynasty, the peasantry toiled in the service of a powerless king and a corrupt court dominated by Eunuchs.  Heroes arose to throw of the yoke of tyranny, as each sought to establish a just rule.  A century of steel and fire has begun. This era is called -- The Three Kingdoms.

 

[Max.Pain]

Great! This is just what I need! Thank you very much!

 

[Lemonfield]

Just one thing - "throw of the yoke of tyranny" should be "throw off the yoke of tyranny".

 

[SaracenX]

Which mod will the video be based on?