tmina32
Regular
Hello, I really like the mod and how much historically detailed and correct it is.
I do, however, have some suggestions regarding Croatia, due to the unavoidalby odd position the Kingdom is in because of the engine limitations.
So lets see what we have here.
1. "Croatian jobbagy" units
These units should atleast get a rename, since "jobbagy" is a Hungarian word and means nothing in Croatian.
I would suggest something like "pješadinac" (infantryman) or "ratnik" (warrior), or whatever the equivalent is called in the Bosnian or Serbian troop tree.
2. Živogošće?
Are there even any records that this place existed at the time? I couldn't find any, and compared to other villages like Gradec, Sisak or Nin, this one is pretty insignificant. I would much rather suggest that Ostrog (near today's Zaostrog), then a fortified port-village, be put in its place.
I'm not really sure about the population there being Serbian and Orthodox either, since Ston was an old diocese, and the Orthodox episcopus appointed there during Serbian rule (after 1200.) only remained for a couple of decades. But if that's something researchers have found, it's fine.
3. New Croatian castles and villages?
There are some emptier parts of the map, where new settlemens could be placed.
For instance, the town ofVukovo Vlkovo (today Vukovar) could be a castle, with it's village being Ilok.
The other big hole in the map is between Kaptol and Senj, which could be filled with the castle Modruš and the village of Slunj. They were ruled by the Krčki Lords, and Lord Bartol II. Krčki ruled it at the time. There is a "Lord Bartol Krčki" already in game, but is the lord of Senj. Senj was ruled by the Knights Templar in 1200., but if they are not going to be created, Senj could then go to a new lord Vid Krčki, Bartol's brother.
4. Croatian culture / Noble troop tree
This seems to be the big one. As far as I understand, there can't be 2 cultures and 2 noble troop trees in one faction.
If that is true, than the way to implement it must be through the Republic of Ragusa. Yes, it is a small faction, and it having merceneries instead of armed peasents as lowly troops is realistic. But it's noble troop tree is nonexistant, and when you click on "recruit nobles" in it's castles you just get Ragusan mercenaries as if you recruited them in a mercenary camp.
But even then you will still be recruiting "Young Hungarian nobles" in all castles held by Croatian nobles, which is weird.
The only way would then be to create a Croatian "subordinate faction", like some Spanish Orders were implemented. It could be a decent way to simulate a personal union ingame.
5. Relations of Croatian lords
The relations of Croatian lords could be improved between themselves, and their realtion with Hungarian nobles and the King could be decreased, to simulate the political rivalry and the cultural gap that existed.
6. Vira?
I couldn't find any historical data of settlement with this name on the island of Hvar. Same case as Živogošće. The village of the Hvar castle should be Stari grad, or Paiz, as it was called. It was the seat of the Hvar bishopric, and is the only old settlement on the island of Hvar besides the city of Hvar itself. Therefore, "Vira" should just be renamed to Paiz.
7. Mongoloid / Khergit "Croatian peasants"
I think I saw some of these. Anyway, this speaks for itself.
8. The Croatian faction project
WHY:
There are several reasons why I think this can be good thing. I already metioned the noble troop tree problem above.
The other reasons consist of the same reasons why the Banate of Bosnia was added as a faction, although being a vassal state of the King of Hungary. Culturally, it was completely different from the rest of the realm. Furthermore, as the only legal "kingdom" besides the Kingdom of Hungary itself, it carried a moderate amount of political and diplomatic weight, atleast in the power hierarchy of the Hungarian royal family. It's ruler was András, brother of king Imre and vicarius regis, a king's regent in Croatia. He became king himself in the coming years. Kingdom of Croatia, being politically separated from the rest of the realm as well, had András as a central ruling figure, where he ruled mostly independently. Hence, he is a very important argument for a separate faction.
With a ruler, lords, territory, cultural and political specialty, and a degree of independence, the pretext for this faction exists.
HOW:
The idea I had is that it could be implemented as a "subordinate faction" of the Kingdom of Hungary. On the wiki it says that the, for example, that the Order of Santiago is subordinate to the Kingom of Leon and that it will declare war on the factions at war with the Kingom of Leon. I have not yet tested if this works, but if it does, the same could be done for Croatia.
Implementing Croatia as a faction, but clearly subjecting it to Hungarian rule, both indirectly (faction ruler will be Hungarian) and , if possible, directly (making it the "subordinate faction" of the Kingdom of Hungary), is the way do it.
The faction would, therefore, be ruled by the Hungarian prince András, brother of the Hungarian King Imre. He is already present in-game with the title of "Duke of Croatia", and is the lord of Zadar (which is historically correct).
The faction could, however, also include Slavonia (marked on the map below), since András was both dux Dalmatiae et Croatiae (Duke of Croatia and Dalmatia) and dux totius Sclavoniae (Duke of Slavonia). That way almost all the in-game areas where you recruit Croatian units and where Croatian lords are present would be incorporated into the faction.
Now, here is a Hungarian map defining it's borders at the end of the 12th century, during the reign of Bela III. ("Kingdom of Croatia and Dalmatia" is in light green):
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/fb/Hungary%2C_Croatia%2C_Bosnia_and_Galicia_in_the_12th_century.jpg
With the possible creation of this faction, some historical political centers within it's borders should be introduced, such as Modruš and Slunj I suggested earlier, and the Bišće (or Bihać) with the village of Krupa, ruled by the Babonić lords.
Likewise, Split could perhaps be elevated to the city status, as it was the seat of an archbishopric.
Hvar would also be added to this faction, as Hvar was, at the time, part of the Kingdom of Croatia/Dalmatia.
I will continue to update and improve this post.
I do, however, have some suggestions regarding Croatia, due to the unavoidalby odd position the Kingdom is in because of the engine limitations.
So lets see what we have here.
1. "Croatian jobbagy" units
These units should atleast get a rename, since "jobbagy" is a Hungarian word and means nothing in Croatian.
I would suggest something like "pješadinac" (infantryman) or "ratnik" (warrior), or whatever the equivalent is called in the Bosnian or Serbian troop tree.
2. Živogošće?
Are there even any records that this place existed at the time? I couldn't find any, and compared to other villages like Gradec, Sisak or Nin, this one is pretty insignificant. I would much rather suggest that Ostrog (near today's Zaostrog), then a fortified port-village, be put in its place.
I'm not really sure about the population there being Serbian and Orthodox either, since Ston was an old diocese, and the Orthodox episcopus appointed there during Serbian rule (after 1200.) only remained for a couple of decades. But if that's something researchers have found, it's fine.
3. New Croatian castles and villages?
There are some emptier parts of the map, where new settlemens could be placed.
For instance, the town of
The other big hole in the map is between Kaptol and Senj, which could be filled with the castle Modruš and the village of Slunj. They were ruled by the Krčki Lords, and Lord Bartol II. Krčki ruled it at the time. There is a "Lord Bartol Krčki" already in game, but is the lord of Senj. Senj was ruled by the Knights Templar in 1200., but if they are not going to be created, Senj could then go to a new lord Vid Krčki, Bartol's brother.
4. Croatian culture / Noble troop tree
This seems to be the big one. As far as I understand, there can't be 2 cultures and 2 noble troop trees in one faction.
If that is true, than the way to implement it must be through the Republic of Ragusa. Yes, it is a small faction, and it having merceneries instead of armed peasents as lowly troops is realistic. But it's noble troop tree is nonexistant, and when you click on "recruit nobles" in it's castles you just get Ragusan mercenaries as if you recruited them in a mercenary camp.
But even then you will still be recruiting "Young Hungarian nobles" in all castles held by Croatian nobles, which is weird.
The only way would then be to create a Croatian "subordinate faction", like some Spanish Orders were implemented. It could be a decent way to simulate a personal union ingame.
5. Relations of Croatian lords
The relations of Croatian lords could be improved between themselves, and their realtion with Hungarian nobles and the King could be decreased, to simulate the political rivalry and the cultural gap that existed.
6. Vira?
I couldn't find any historical data of settlement with this name on the island of Hvar. Same case as Živogošće. The village of the Hvar castle should be Stari grad, or Paiz, as it was called. It was the seat of the Hvar bishopric, and is the only old settlement on the island of Hvar besides the city of Hvar itself. Therefore, "Vira" should just be renamed to Paiz.
7. Mongoloid / Khergit "Croatian peasants"
I think I saw some of these. Anyway, this speaks for itself.
8. The Croatian faction project
WHY:
There are several reasons why I think this can be good thing. I already metioned the noble troop tree problem above.
The other reasons consist of the same reasons why the Banate of Bosnia was added as a faction, although being a vassal state of the King of Hungary. Culturally, it was completely different from the rest of the realm. Furthermore, as the only legal "kingdom" besides the Kingdom of Hungary itself, it carried a moderate amount of political and diplomatic weight, atleast in the power hierarchy of the Hungarian royal family. It's ruler was András, brother of king Imre and vicarius regis, a king's regent in Croatia. He became king himself in the coming years. Kingdom of Croatia, being politically separated from the rest of the realm as well, had András as a central ruling figure, where he ruled mostly independently. Hence, he is a very important argument for a separate faction.
With a ruler, lords, territory, cultural and political specialty, and a degree of independence, the pretext for this faction exists.
HOW:
The idea I had is that it could be implemented as a "subordinate faction" of the Kingdom of Hungary. On the wiki it says that the, for example, that the Order of Santiago is subordinate to the Kingom of Leon and that it will declare war on the factions at war with the Kingom of Leon. I have not yet tested if this works, but if it does, the same could be done for Croatia.
Implementing Croatia as a faction, but clearly subjecting it to Hungarian rule, both indirectly (faction ruler will be Hungarian) and , if possible, directly (making it the "subordinate faction" of the Kingdom of Hungary), is the way do it.
The faction would, therefore, be ruled by the Hungarian prince András, brother of the Hungarian King Imre. He is already present in-game with the title of "Duke of Croatia", and is the lord of Zadar (which is historically correct).
The faction could, however, also include Slavonia (marked on the map below), since András was both dux Dalmatiae et Croatiae (Duke of Croatia and Dalmatia) and dux totius Sclavoniae (Duke of Slavonia). That way almost all the in-game areas where you recruit Croatian units and where Croatian lords are present would be incorporated into the faction.
Now, here is a Hungarian map defining it's borders at the end of the 12th century, during the reign of Bela III. ("Kingdom of Croatia and Dalmatia" is in light green):
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/f/fb/Hungary%2C_Croatia%2C_Bosnia_and_Galicia_in_the_12th_century.jpg
With the possible creation of this faction, some historical political centers within it's borders should be introduced, such as Modruš and Slunj I suggested earlier, and the Bišće (or Bihać) with the village of Krupa, ruled by the Babonić lords.
Likewise, Split could perhaps be elevated to the city status, as it was the seat of an archbishopric.
Hvar would also be added to this faction, as Hvar was, at the time, part of the Kingdom of Croatia/Dalmatia.
I will continue to update and improve this post.