Go Evangeline! Crush the ugly Khergits!
Evangeline, Nation-Breaker - An AAR (Chapter 37 Posted)
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All right, now cut the crap and get to it. 
Wow... beautiful screenshot.
I guess the corpse lying in the foreground is an unconscious Evangeline?
I guess the corpse lying in the foreground is an unconscious Evangeline?
With all those javelins sticking in the ground, I'm betting its a Khergit castle.Dalkar 说:Looks like an average assault on a Nord castle
And the Throwing-Axes?
Khergits are too uncool to have them.
Khergits are too uncool to have them.
In THAT color of yellow?! Ugh, no thank you. Even a murderous psychopath has standards. Besides, look at the health bar in the corner. No, I'm in first person with my weapons relaxed. I don't need a shield with that crap. 64 body armor and all those thrown weapons are from tier 2 and 3 units that can't throw hard enough to scratch me.Captured Joe 说:
I thought it was green. And I rather like the colour.Ogrecorps 说:
*tries to commit suicide with a throwing axe*
I agree with this.Cleomenes 说:
Medieval soldiers usually couldn't read nor write; that's why I keep my intellegenz below 7. But of course she's a woman, who tend to be a bit more civilised than men (althought I doubt that's the case with Evangeline).Cleomenes 说:
Cleomenes
Banned
Well, in Medieval times the Squires learned to write and read.
But great thing once more
I'm doing my own draft right now. Maybe soon it will be on.
P.S Whats this mod? Floris mod? Because I am on the day 563 in my campaign. I got lot of drafs that I can post but I got a question.
How do you post screenshots on taleworlds?[I know its dumb]
But great thing once more
I'm doing my own draft right now. Maybe soon it will be on.
P.S Whats this mod? Floris mod? Because I am on the day 563 in my campaign. I got lot of drafs that I can post but I got a question.
How do you post screenshots on taleworlds?[I know its dumb]
No worries, I had to check and can see how that could be a greenish color. However, if one can't tell if it is green or yellow the answer is no.Captured Joe 说:
Thank you very much!Cleomenes 说:
Just wait until I include dysentery from moose-piss water!First, upload them to some hosting site. I use ImageShack because it hasn't failed me yet and allows different resolution sizes. I use the 17-inch monitor setting. Once it is uploaded look for "Links to Share this image" Open that and find Direct Link, copy that. To post it on here you need to place that link in between [img.] and [/.img] but without the periods. You get those by hitting the little button that looks like a painting above the smiley faces on the far left. To then place all that behind a spoiler - a polite thing to do to prevent having to scroll through/load all at once a million pictures on one page - place all of that inside [spoiler.] and [/.spoiler] but again without the periods. To see this in action you can quote any post of mine that has a picture in it. It will display the code all in text so you can see how it all works.Cleomenes 说:Well, in Medieval times the Squires learned to write and read.
But great thing once more
I'm doing my own draft right now. Maybe soon it will be on.
P.S Whats this mod? Floris mod? Because I am on the day 563 in my campaign. I got lot of drafs that I can post but I got a question.
How do you post screenshots on taleworlds?[I know its dumb]
As for starting an AAR, you needn't have a plan for where it all goes or even really know who your character is, I find but then again, Evangeline is exactly what I would be like as a woman in medieval times - if I headed a mercenary band. That makes the writing easy and true because I just write what I think and come up with. That's why some of these chapters take on a life of their own and "write themselves." I just type out the violence and fury as it flows forth from the nether regions of my imagination. This keeps the writing fun for me where I have seen other writers falter because they THOUGHT it would be fun to write a certain character but it wasn't after a while of sticking to certain rules. So choose carefully and pick what seems natural would be my first piece of advice. My second is to never ever post something the same day you wrote it. Leave it for a bit and come back to read it again. Check to see if you included enough details and a setting, the sort of thing you had in your head as you wrote out the action but might not have gotten onto the page. Check for spelling and grammar and use a word processor so you can edit easily. Write down all the little ideas that come to you separate of context and review them often to see if you can use any of them. Nizar smelling like a camel? Random thought one day. I found a spot where I thought it worked well and a camel died for it. Lastly, don't rush yourself but also don't let the material you have yet to write about pile up. You'll forget and end up skipping stuff that adds a sense of depth and honesty to your work.
And yes, Floris Expanded Mod Pack
Is it OK if we insult you for such ****? Just askin'Cleomenes 说:
Thank you and you're welcome! I have a lot of fun writing it though sometimes I get a little scared... I seriously had no idea Evangeline had it in her to be so functionally bonkers! The funny thing is that I've been rereading it lately and can't help but react with shock and awe at this woman I made...Draka 说:
On a side note I added an author's note to chapter 7. I was going to do more but no, is nap time.
Dear Lord, Evangeline has escaped the bounds of Ogrecorp's mind and is on the loose in the world! None of us are safe.
