Calradia: Over the Mountains

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Angaku

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Now if you hate RPs turn back now........other then that your welcome.


This is just a kind of test, This isn't a full fledged RP, but It will be a sign up/planning for it if enough people are interested.  I'll be off for a while after this so just think about the story and junk.

Calradia: Over the Mountains Backstory.

Only the Khergits truly know whats over them mountains, but only a few choice elders actually remember it.  It was supposed to be a much more peacful and well mixed land, there were no Swadians, Khergits, Rhodocks, or any of them.  Just one true happy place, but as that goes people became stir crazy and got into wars.  They forgot about the peace that once reigned over the land.  They fought, and some fled over mountains, others followed.  Until the land of the old was near empty few stayed behind.  Those that did formed there own factions and fought to keep peace.  But as it goes they began to war and fight.  They fought viciously and nearly destroyed the forests and land they had.  It destroyed everything left except for four small villages.  Its said that they transformed into small cities and lived off of the land.  Now a few handfuls of people in Calradia wanted to venture back into land of the old as it was called, but this would not be an easy task as the faction they knew were going to try to prevent them from going.  They banded together Rhodocks/Khergit Khanates, Swadia stayed solo, Nords/Veigers.  Thats how it went the wars continued, but anyone headed towards the mountains were attacked bay the alliances.  Which in turn made very few people want to go to the land of the old, but some still tried and failed.  Every rule gets broken someday, that day is today...



Hope you think good of this there may be some errors in there but that's the best I could do.  Tell me what you think and feel free to criticize, but don't get carried away please. :mrgreen:

P.S. Hopefully I can get some people to actually like it so I can turn it into an RP.  Thank you for your time.  :grin:
 
You can get a slightly earlier Therian as my character to go...

same stuff, Hethik and all, but you would have to incorporate the Battle for thir Prologue (AKA Swadia civil war/nords pushed out)

However, it would mean breaking up  the cross-culture bands... with is kinda special in it's own way.
 
Hmm...I'll have to think about that, but it could work, considering they all still war they are just have an alliance to keep every one from going over the mountains.
 
I'd consider going over the mountains as a pretty desperate move...

So they could be at war, and the refugees running over the hills.

Or I could come up with some other character....
 
I may revise it into something else later.  I'm gonna go ahead and say this now, it is kinda like a rough draft.  How about you help me re-write it?
 
Ok...

Lemmi see here; the draft about the outside land can be anything you want: I think it's fine the way it is...

re-write, but to what end? I'd just say that the endless wars of Calradia pushed people to leave for new lands---> going over the mountains to what you've made up. 
 
That seems to make for a better story so yeah.  I just wanted some of the in story stuff revised.
 
If you want, i can make up/give u a few characters, since the alliances u named, are the same 3 exact alliances i have in native expansion, Swads alone, Rhodok and Khergit, and Vaegir and Nords.
 
That is pretty freaky, but yeah I've been revising it very very SLOWLY...but should get a better one up within a few more days.  What do you mean by a few characters?  Like lords or what.
 
Angaku 说:
That is pretty freaky, but yeah I've been revising it very very SLOWLY...but should get a better one up within a few more days.  What do you mean by a few characters?  Like lords or what.

Like maybe merc partys for each faction or sutin ?
 
Yeah.  That would probably be a good idea.  I might lock this and repost it later with a revised story, but as for now I just need to collect some ideas.  I still want the same general story though.
 
Hmm... has a good concept. Good luck with it! :smile: Nothing for me to add to this though, everyone else has said what I would have said.
 
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