AAR: Viktor - The Ruthless

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Cao_Monk

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Hi just thought I would let you guys know at the moment I have all the settings increased to hardest the difficulty is at 300% because my battle sizer is up at 1000 troops. So Viktor (which I have no control over of course...) might fail from time to time. This only fuels the fire which burns within him.
 
Son of a veteran warrior, page at a court, squire to a noble. Who would have thought being forced out of his home could have turned him into a ruthless villain. Hearing of the vast wealth yielded by Caladria and the countless wars Viktor set sail from his faraway homeland with a small vessel and few sailors. After a sea sick filled voyage Viktor swore that this soil upon which he stand will be his home. He found himself at a Swadian town called Praven, a coastal town where the king of Swadia, Harlaus resides. By the time he had wandered around Praven it had fallen dark so Viktor made good use out of his sailors pay, which he took from their warm dead hands after slaying each one with his rusted sword. All crew members bar one lay dead before him. Suddenly a bolt flies past him missing his head by an inch. "hah boy you could have poked my eye out with that thing" taunted Viktor, the squire who was 17 years of age did not reply but instead tried to reload the crossbow. Viktor seeing the boy was fast at reloading ran to one of the slain sailors diving behind him to dodge a bolt, while the boy reloads a second time Viktor sprints off to some tree cover. As Viktor just males it behind a tree as the bolt strikes the front of the cover, Viktor vanish into the night as the boy gives chase crossbow loaded and at the ready. As soon as the boy reaches the tree cover a dagger | Kinda of guessed the wrong way there Joe :grin:| whirls towards the young lad and finds its home in his heart.
Viktor hands over the money to the tavern owner without regrets of his sins for he has no sympathy or honor.
 
Cao_Monk 说:
As soon as the boy reachs the tree cover a dagger
flies towards him. It misses, and Victor is killed by a shot in the face from a 17-year old boy... :???:

Short sentences. Little story. Maybe telling less in telegram style makes your story look better. Maybe tell the begin 'settings' (veteran-warrior, page, squire) before you start the story, telling us where Victor comes from (if you don't want to reveal that (yet), don't do it then), what he does, why is he so 'ruthless' etc..

Anyway, good luck!
 
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Viktor falls asleep in no time, for what seemed to be minutes sleeping he awoke to the next morning. As Viktor left the Inn to explore the surrounding villages he saw a man who looked like the local robber and thought a good way for his name to spread would be to beat the toughest bandit in town. Catching onto Viktor's intentions the bandit quickly drew his sword and shield and ran straight towards Viktor. Viktor pulled out his newly acquired crossbow and fired a bolt straight into the bandits right shin, to his surprise the bandit kept charging and managing to get a quick jab off on Viktor. Viktor quickly regained his form and sliced the bandits face with his rusty sword felling the bandit. A nearby merchant runs to Viktors aid and offers him a job, Viktor accepts all the merchants missions out of knowing he will need some income before he can start looting the land. Collect some troops to rescue the merchants brother. Viktor was starting to like this place but he knew he couldn't fight bandits for long, he yearned for greater riches and to strike fear into the hearts of the nobles in this land. At the local village of Azgad he managed to hire 3 recruits to his army, spotting some passing looters he took advantage of them. 3 soldiers and himself were enough to drop the 8 looters. Traveling to Iyindah he acquired 3 more troops and another 3 at Veidar, he was ready to hunt the bandits. The robbers didn't stand a change against him and his 9 Swadian recruits, making a deal with the leader: his life for the hideout locations. Assaulting the looters hideout Viktor stood back and watched his recruits charge, after knocking out 3 and killing one looter 4 of the recruits guts were split over the valley floor. Viktor disgusted in his troops lack of skills joined the fight and finished the last few looters off. Upon gaining his brother back the merchant offered one last job for Viktor which was to lead a small party of the merchants troops in a fight against looters within the walls on the account of some corrupt blah blah Viktor stopped listening and said he would do it. Viktor stormed out of the tavern shouted out slaughter the looters and the battle took place, Viktor took out his crossbow and bolted 6 looters in the head and finished the last one off with his pick axe he found at the hideout. The merchant was told to pack up shop after the king heard of what transpired when he was outside the castle. Pathetic lot those kings are, never taking responsibility for their mistakes but soon Viktor would change that. After finishing his business with the merchant he met someone called Firentis and heard his story, amused by it Viktor asked him if he wanted to join his band to right wrong and all that rubbish, Firentis saw it as salvation and joined without pay which Viktor found astonishing. Viktor looked back and remembered the poor fighting skills showed at the hideout by his recruits so he took them to a nearby training field to show them the ropes. The trainer there said he could only train if he could beat all his fighters in sparring, so he accepted the one on ones. The novice fighters dropped without landing a hit, the regular weren't much different, so called veteran and champion fighters dropped one by one, at the end of these fights Viktor stand there untouched by the trainers fighters. Only one managed to block his attack a so called champion. The trainer was impressed and allowed him to train with his troops in his field. He continued to duel Firentis and taunted him that if he did not get better soon he would not find salvation for he will fall on the battlefield before he can correct his wrongs. Confident in himself Viktor took on 4 recruits at once and downed them all taunting them "Your grandmother fought harder then that when your granddad raped her" among other lovely little comments.
 
There's really an inflation of AARs lately. But that's never a bad thing. Also, if you want to post pictures using imageshack and you want them to appear in your post, instead of the link you should use the forum code, like this:



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Anyway, keep going and good luck.
 
Hi Paraipan just wondering how you do it I can't seem to figure it out yet
Sorry Joe I will get back to culling those Swadian villages (poor Swadians have enough problems as it is)

And finishing a AAR in a single player role playing game like mount&blade warband seems a tad difficult :grin: any who back to it :grin:
 
Cao, you started this today. How can you talk so soon about "stopping because of 'lack of enthusiasm'"? I'm disappointed. :???:
Please continue with this AAR. It won't be good if we drown in 1000's of never-finisher AAR's in this section. And there are some good things in your story.
And if you lack enthusiasm, please don't start an AAR.
 
These words of "encouragement seemed to spur up the recruits and in no time they advanced into militia, ready to raid the own villages they were recruited from. Azgad was the first to be set alight followed by Veidar neither of which tried to fight the party of 5 footmen and 25 militia. Iyindah is between Praven and Suno, Viktor decided that would be the next target to loot due to Praven's merchants were a little bit low on cash after buying in all his legally acquired items so Suno could substitute for a little while. However in the final hours of gathering up the villages and preparing to take them for all they have on the horizon Viktor sees an all too familiar banner, that of the king of Swadia, Harlaus. riding in with his 200 strong and the additional 30 peasants the small party of Viktors didn't stand a chance, they fought viciously and managed to take out 60 of peasants and Harlaus's men combined all 29 of Viktors troops were slain, Viktor and Firentis dragged off to Praven as prisoners but prison could not hold Viktor for long and within a week Viktor had escaped his Swadian bonds and the very same day of escaping Viktor went back to Iyindah to force peasants to give him supplies, they fought for it and he couldn't quite take out all 35 of them for his horse took too much of a beating. After slaying 20 of the peasants Viktor was knocked unconscious. When Viktor came to he saw a group of peasants heading off to Suno to sell their goods, he intercepted them and killed all 10 with his crossbow, after selling their goods at Suno he acquired the company of some watchmen and went hunting for peasants trying to offload their villages stock. After many successful hunts Viktor managed to get 15 watchmen and raided a village, the dreaded Iyindah. The villages fought back and fought to the teeth, 10 out of the 40 villagers left and one flanked Viktors party and managed to knock Viktor out with a stray rock. Forced to retreat once again Viktor managed to save 4 Mercenary Crossbows from the villages grip and decided to build up his party to at least 15 strong before advancing on Iyindah again.
 
Viktor managed to sneak back into Suno with his 4 Mercenary Crossbowmen and hires 5 Mercenary Cavalry, now he tries to loot and burn Iyindah which peasants seeing the band of 10 soldiers decided to stand and fight again, who will win : 10 against 42? Alas Viktors revenge on Iyindah is complete and with no casualties and plenty of loot, maybe he will pay the ransom broker for Firentis's freedom HAH! yeah right. After making over 6000 gold in Suno Viktor searchers for more mercenaries to build up his force strong enough to take on Swadian lords. After pillaging Veidar again Viktor decided to head down to the Rhodocks to reinforce his unit with some anti cavalry troops and to offload his newly acquired stock of course. Clashing several times with mountain bandits who continue to over estimated their ability, mercenary cavalry and horsemen crushing them with the initial charges. After selling off the items and buying a new horse and some armor, Viktor travels to some Rhodock villages and recruits a total of 28 soldiers, heading back into Swadian territory to raid another villages when he comes past an interesting sight, Count Beranz at the village of Nemeja, chasing him along the coastline to the east too slow to catch up chasing him into hiding in the castle Tevarin. So Viktor instead raids Balanli the village close by to Tevarin, while doing this Beranz raises 10 more troops before riding out to the village to take on Viktor with the aid of the villagers. 42 against 93, 43 of the 93 being Beranz troops. 23 killer 15 wounded, 89 killed 1 wounded as Viktor was knocked unconscious feeling just strong enough to lead the final charge, Viktor's 5 against 3. Viktors 3 Mercenary Crossbowmen and 1 Rhodock tribesmen dropped the 3 enemies with ease, Beranz however managed to escape. After rebuilding his force to 54 troops a mix of Mercenary Cavalry and Crossbowmen and Rhodock Spear men Viktor headed off to Dhirim to take part in the liberation, Nords were in the middle of fighting the Swadian occupants and Viktor having met the Nords briefly before decided he would rather be on their good side for now. Viktor is about to march when he sees a army of 40 strong under Count Montewar's command and Viktor is fully aware he cannot take on such a foe at the moment, even with an extra 14 men. Once reaching Dhirim he sees that the battle has finished and the Nords are waiting for reinforcements before trying to attack again, but the time wasted on the battle Swadian forces have come to aid Dhirim and have Nord troops running all over the place. Viktor missing the opportunity decides to change direction and attack the oncoming trade caravan instead.
 
Cao_Monk 说:
Hi Paraipan just wondering how you do it I can't seem to figure it out yet
Sorry Joe I will get back to culling those Swadian villages (poor Swadians have enough problems as it is)

And finishing a AAR in a single player role playing game like mount&blade warband seems a tad difficult :grin: any who back to it :grin:

After you upload a picture don't copy and paste the direct link but the "forum code". Like this:



or this:

 
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