[AAR] - The Chronicles of Lady Myara

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well, took me a while to write up something worthy of being read (and to be comparable in awesomeness to vellarain's report (which inspires me) and the others on the AA thread)

there goes the first chapters of my odyssey through calradia, a true Sword of Damocles novel! (be humble revan.)

Chronicles of Lady Myara, Antarian survivor of Legate Marius bloody campaign:
Day 1: Long journey, sorrowful as well, for me, and for all my soldiers, survivors of whatever was left of our homeland, after the long lasting war that claimed everything we called life, we found ourselves stranded in this strange land called Calradia, in a region the locals called “Lower Khergit steppes”, next to a large fortified city called Narra, It seems war is also plaguing this land, what other use a people would have for such tall walls? Our party has named me leader, considering how I turned that last battle from another bloodshed, to a silver of hope, escape, exile, so here it begins, my journey, and that of 40 other hardened soldiers of the once-great Antarian Empire. Our first step, is to travel to this Narra, and find out about what goes on in this strange land.

Day 2: We reached Narra, so I gave all soldiers a leave, in order to each one to seek their own solace of the hardships we endured, and also in order to find our next steps into rebuilding the old empire, and returning, hoping to avenge my homeland, and all others touched by the scourge of the Imperial Legion.
Most of my men head over to the Tavern, of course, for men, mead, ale, and some food are the quickest way to forget sadness, I myself head over there, but to inquire as how this land offers opportunities, dangers, rewards and punishments, a simple man whose name escapes my memory tells me the kingdoms are at a long bloody war, no side ever gaining sway over another, and that no peace agreement lasts long, and they are usually means for the kings to regather their armies to launch themselves at the bloody conflict once more, and those same kings are seeking mercenary companies, both native and foreign, in order to gain the much needed upper hand. According to that man, after a tip of around 30 gold coins (thankfully antarian gold serves in this region as good as their own currency) the Kingdom of Swadia in the north is the best opportunity since their king is known to flaunt their great wealth at their great capital of Praven, so its Praven our next destination.

Day 5: We travel northward towards Praven,  my lieutenant affirms that the troops are concerned about food,  And so I remember that we lost most of our supplies in the escape from the legions, so we planned to stop at a nearby village of Saren which belonged to a entirely different nation, one that called itself Kingdom of Rhodoks, but the scout sent reported that the village was plagued by bandits that forced the already poor villagers to give up any kind of supplies they could produce, despite the fact that the village was close to a mighty castle.  I decide I wouldn’t stand up for such villainy, and order my troops to overtake the outlaws, and free the villagers. I hoped, as foolish as it may sound,  I wouldn’t ever need to shoot that crossbow again…

Day 6: The villagers were thankful that we freed them from the bandits, supplied us with the food we needed so much, and some of their younger offered to join us, I figured that we’d need more people in order to feel safer.

Day 8 : Praven at last, Mighty town indeed, great walls, twice as mighty as Narra’s , it appeared at every joint and corner that it was the capital of this Swadian kingdom,  as usual, we headed first for the tavern, which I met a very unusual madam as one of the patrons, she called herself Matheld, and was, to much chagrin of some men of this land, a soldier, and according to her own tale, born in the land of the Nords, and after seeing two of her sons killed in battles, decided herself to join a mercenary company, which coincidentally or not, I led, so I hired that woman to join me on our travels.
Headed to the castle in hopes of meeting the Monarch of this kingdom, one named Harlaus, but according to his men on the gates, he was in campaign against his enemies, and only a certain Lord Grainwad was present in the castle at the moment, who was in turn quick to offer me and my men (after a quite embarrassing meeting) a contract as a mercenary in service of the kingdom of Swadia, it appears that the lords of this land have more authority than in my old land, this would be interesting at least. Since Grainwad’s offer was exactly what I intended to seek with the King, I promptly accepted, and there I was. Lady Myara of the antarian empire, once a made a high lady of the emperor’s lineage, now found myself leader of a mercenary group, operating in a land we didn’t knew much about, working for a king I had yet to meet.

Day 9: Our first assignment! it appears that the news of this land travels quickly, as couriers bearing the news of my newly firmed contract run to the four corners of the swadian kingdom, and I was informed that currently the Kingdom of Swadia fought a war in two fronts, against the kingdom of Rhodoks, who apparently are rebels who separated themselves from swadian rule years ago, and the invading Kingdom of Nords, men from the seas of the north, bent on conquering and slaying whomever stands on their path,  “Invaders”, this description chilled me to the spine, since It reminded the fate of my own people, so I asked Lord Grainwad for an assignment around that region, he told me that caravans were being raided in a constant basis by the Nordic lords, seeking the riches and taking away many men, both prisoners and dead, Grainwad tasked me to the town of Dhirim, where I could find out more about those very same raids. After a quick stop at the local blacksmith for a better quality quiver of crossbow bolts, we started our travel towards Dhirim, a journey that would take several days.

Day 11: Half way through our journey, we stopped to camp for the night, I was awakened by a very dark nightmare, one involving the fate of my homeland, and more disturbingly, my family.

Day 12: We met a Swadian caravan on the way to Dhirim, since we shared the same destination, I agreed to help escort the merchant to his destiny, in exchange for some gold, I got to get used to these jobs, being a mercenary isn’t much like what I had planned, but the situation dictates the needs, or so the sages say.

 
(in a short note, the lack of screenshots is due to me writing this way after i started playing, and i added way more fluff to the story than it could be possible in the game, but i done my best to not stray too far from the core of SoD)
 
True true, i wrote up only to day 36 (So far) and it occupies around 8 pages on a .doc file =O


but i couldnt keep the story short, lest it would be like every other AA report so far, i wanted mine to have a special spice


ps. I want to ask for an apology up front for any grammar errors, altough I have a very good english lvl, im still not a native english speaker
 
JKRevan 说:
True true, i wrote up only to day 36 (So far) and it occupies around 8 pages on a .doc file =O


but i couldnt keep the story short, lest it would be like every other AA report so far, i wanted mine to have a special spice


ps. I want to ask for an apology up front for any grammar errors, altough I have a very good english lvl, im still not a native english speaker
Doesn't matter, as long as I can understand the meaning it's fine.
 
vonmistont 说:
You forced me to make another sticky  :roll:


And in turn you force me to keep up with the writing.. tomorrow i shall post a few more chapters
 
your writing is interesting, keep up the great work  :grin:
I tried to write AAR before for EB n MnB, but my English, which degraded horribly after mixing so many novels and economic lessions, proven to be un-suited to write an AAR, so I wil enjoy reading them instead
 
ok, like promised, if a little late, another day of the chronicles (and its a wall of text for ONE day xD)

Day 13:
Dhirim, another walled wall, although poorer than either Narra and Praven, maybe because of the recent raiding problem, or the proximity with the kingdom of nords, or a combination of all those factors, but strangely there were lots of people headed for the local arena, upon asking a local townsman I discovered that a tournament of arms was being held on the town, and the winner would be endowed with a great deal of renown on this land, as well as many riches, befitting the skill on a variated range of implements of war. Such tournament would be an excellent opportunity to raise funds to pay the troop’s wages, and start to make myself a name on this region, for better or worse.
    The rules were simple, each combatant was given a weapon, either a two handed sword, a single handed sword with a shield, a bow with 2 quivers of arrows, or a jousting lance, and some combatants could be lucky enough to earn the right to mount a horse during the match.
The combatants were also divided into four teams, the last team standing would see the remaining members advancing to the next tier of combats.  There were also a network of betting that would allow one to bet a large sum of gold on the victor, allowing their wealth to increase tenfold, should the betting be sucesseful, unfortunately, the competitors were unable to bet on themselves, but nobody said anything about asking someone else to make the bet for you.
The first tier was quite chaotic, I don’t remember much aside from the fact that there were 4 teams with 6 combatants each, and the ceremony master gave me a red padded shirt, a plumed helm and a large clumsy two handed sword, the battle was quick, I managed to knock down 5 opponents, one of which was mounted, until a short woman of a cadre which called themselves “Sword sisters” defeated the last member of the blue team, who stayed back sending arrows towards us.
    Before the second tier of combats, I found out I could send for another bet on myself, and I remembered to ask one of the peasants on the crowd the names of the combatants still in the tournament, two names came to my attention, one “Lord Mirchaud” and a quiet man named Kradus, apparently a local champion.
The second round was quick as well, but much clearer on my memory, I had been lucky enough to be granted a Sword, shield and a horse, so I could ride around and circle my opponents, while the rest of the combatants were destined to go into the melee where skill wouldn’t count as much as pure luck. As member of the yellow team I charged directly towards the two archers of the blue team, in order to take away their advantage of range, good thing those swords were wooden and dull edged, otherwise that blow would be one bloody decapitation strike, instead of a rolling head, I sent the poor archer several meters away, almost dragging him with me with my horse, then he fell unconscious, oblivious to the combat going on around him, and utterly denied of the chance of taking the glory. I didn’t counted however, with a blunt knock on my left shoulder, the other archer had enough reflexes to send an arrow towards me while I rode away from him, an arrow which hit my back with enough force to make me drop my shield, and almost fall out of the horse, I quickly turned my attention towards him, foolishly so, since a lancer from the red team charged towards me from my right, fortunately for me, my horse noticed the threat, but was able only to turn to save me, and the lance crashed fully upon the horse’s flank, sending me flying from the saddle, into the dusty ground. I tumbled for several meters, but wasn’t hurt badly, thankfully the boots granted by the ceremony master avoided me from breaking my ankle, so I got back up on my feet.
    I scooped around to see where my enemies were, where what was left of my teammates were fighting, and where I could engage someone. I saw 2 men from the green team heading towards me with short axes, and scrapped shields, seeing nowhere to run, my only option was to engage these odds, while lacking the protection of my own shield. The two of them were charging me with their axes held high, guard low, badly for them, I knew exactly how to act, and a quick stab sent the first man down with a winded wheeze, then parried a blow using my own sword, and proceeded to fight with the other man, we parried each other’s blows for a while, enough for both of us to notice that we were dealing with a skilled opponent, but the advantage was on my side, since my weapon had a longer reach, I could twist a overhead slash to disarm and knock him out with a blow to the head. The round was over, and we were victorious, once more.
    The next rounds were plain, nothing extraordinary enough to be reported, other than the fact I was able to raise the bets more and more, to the point I felt obligated to win, since otherwise I would have no money left to pay the wages, and a leader without the support of her troops, isn’t a leader at all.
In the final bout, it was a duel between me and Lord Mirchaud, what a way to introduce yourself to a lord, but we did come to blows, or to bows since the ceremony master thought it would appease the crowd to set us with the same set of weaponry, Bows and arrows, something I was not used to, back in Antaria, the warriors were trained in the use throwing spears, not bows and arrows, my own use of crossbows was seen as “exotic” by my peers. But apparently my opponent was not fond of the art of archery either, so I came out with the upper hand by placing a lucky shot to his knees, throwing him down, allowing me time to aim a arrow to his head to knock him senseless, the tournament was mine to claim victory, the reward in riches, and the glory, not to mention the bounty on bets my men placed for me, after I, of course, shared their part.
    Later that day I met with Dhirim’s guildmaster, in order to learn more about the caravan raids, the reason that brought me here in the first place, apparently, all caravans that depart Dhirim headed either to the Kingdom of Vaegirs, or the swadian town of Suno get raided by Nordic troops. The guildmaster knew that sending a full sized army to escort each caravan would be too costly, and a small mercenary band would be able to at least scare the raiders long enough for several caravan runs to be completed, and bring much needed supplies to other regions (not to mention the wealth brought by such successful commercial venture), the guildmaster sent me to accompany a caravan to the nearby town of Suno, to scare any raiders, and to estabilish a greater presence of the swadian army, even if in the form of an foreign mercenary company.



Small edit: guys, i dont know if that style of writing appease readers, i'd like some feedback, to encourage me to keep writing and posting =)
 
posting up a few more days:


Day 14: We depart Dhirim accompanying one of the merchant caravans, the caravan itself was composed of 25 guards plus around 25 men from the swadian army, plus my 43 men we formed a quite impressive column, I personally highly doubted we would be attacked, but that feeling lasted only until the scouts returned in the twilight hours, reporting that apparently, a party of 70 nordic men, led by one Lord Bulba were heading our way, apparently dismissing the fact that they were outnumbered, so I called out for a stand by on our ranks, we would meet that enemy head on.

Day 15: First hours of the morning: Bloody battle, I remember killing many, and seeing many friends fall as well, these nords are really hardened men, they were able to take out almost all of the caravan escorts, but they didn’t counted, nor knew how to, face antarian steel, thats surely one great advantage of fighting unknown enemies, we antarians can always count on superior training, and our finely forged weapons and armor over pure unrefined battle-lust, most nords were killed or severely wounded, a few escaped capture, but we had the greatest prize of all, their leader, a rugged man, who seemed absolutely disgusted of being captured by “pitiful mercenaries led by a fancy dress madam” as he politely put it. Apparently, the order to raid swadian caravans came from their king himself, in order to sow disorder on towns and allow the plundering of many villages in a rampage of carnage without equal, a tactic never waged before on calradian lands, hence its effectiveness. I ordered my men to chain that man and drag him as we made our way to Suno. Oh, and had him muffled few hours later, since he wouldn’t shut it.

Day 17: We reach Suno, another great town, the guildmaster was grateful of my help in escorting the caravan, and paid me 200 gold coins, (though he called them “denars”, well, new land, new culture I guess) and an extra 300 for having not only defeated a Nordic lord but managing to capture him as well, feat that was apparently great for a mercenary company, I must really be something special, because all I do apparently is superior to every other mercenary company in this land! On a side note, a quick stop by the tavern allows me to hire some Crossbowmen to my army.
I decided to go after King Harlaus, after all, he was my employer, and I had yet to meet him, so I had to make my way back to Praven through a pass on the mountains, close to the village of Elberl.

Day 20: The journey goes smooth, we reach Elberl, a small and quiet village on the mountain-side decide to spend the evening amongst  the villagers, after buying a few supplies, head to the forest-covered mountain side. Yet another nightmare haunts me on that night. I see a village burning, and men with red eyes happily striking down women and children.
 
hmm.. pretty nice AAR


JKRevan 说:

Small edit: guys, i dont know if that style of writing appease readers, i'd like some feedback, to encourage me to keep writing and posting =)


at least i like it  :wink:
 
Indeed, the worst point of my story (so far) is the lack of screenshots

thats due to the fact that i decided to write it up while my game is on day 300 already, so very few screenshots from that time would be found, and for me to take some screenshots now wouldnt fit..


worry not, the closer we get to the "present" the more imagery i'll post, i started taking some pictures of the battles and general scenery
 
I must confess that sience I started modding SoD I lost interest in gaming :sad: First version of SoD (it did not have a name then) was done for my personal purposes and was not meant to be released. I just wanted to enchance a game the way I wanted it to be... But a game is not much fun after You spend hours testing your code and since You now know almost everything about it (Matrix-like feeling when You don't see a nice girl but just bunch of code :sad: ).

But after reading this I really want to play :smile:
 
Well, making vonmist return to the faithful fold of gaming is an honor ^^

I shall dally no more, here goes another excerpt of the journal

Day 22: We travel towards Praven, but the thick forest force us to travel slower, in order to avoid ambushes, also some of the scouts report the presence of bandit groups, who apparently are shy of approaching men on steel armor, as much as I and my men would like, time is of the essence, and they know these woods far too well, we would spend days chasing them to no aval.

Day 25: We arrive at Praven once more, during the night, as I was headed for the tavern I got approached by a group of muggers, apparently intending to put a an end to my journey, they outnumbered me by four to one, but I wasn’t about to let petty thugs have my hard earned gold, so I drew my sword and charged them, despite their numeric advantage, they didn’t expected a simple lady to draw a two handed sword to fight them, and they would have ended up regretting their act, if their heads weren’t busy being several meters apart from the rest of the body, I had unleashed my fury upon those criminals, and a strange lust for blood surged upon my mind, those men paid the price dearly. Along with the bodies there was a small bag of gold coins, perhaps this wasn’t a simple mugging, but a assassination attempt, who or why I would never find out, but this was a problem for another day, as for the assassins? Well, they lost their heads on this.
I arrived at the tavern, the first thing I asked for was a mug of ale, and a room to spend the night to put my head in place, why had I slain those men with such ease? Haven’ t there been enough deaths on my life already? This time was a matter of either me or them, yet their deaths weighed my mind for some time.

Day 26: In the morning, putting the happenings of the night on the past, I set out to the castle, fortunately this time King Harlaus was home, so I ask for an audience in his royal chambers, in order to inquire what next step should we take. He acknowledges my victory over the nord raiding party, and pays my wages for the weeks I’m already under his service. He does have a task for me though, as I shall quote him “Well, it seems Grainwad actually did something useful and hired a skillful madam to serve the might of the swadian army, I need you to join me in a campaign against the rebellious Rhodoks, Graveth stood on my way for far too long, and you lady, are going to be pivotal in his downfall!” Pivotal, I wonder if why the so called mighty king thinks he needs a mercenary company to run a cattle drive to feed his troops, doesn’t he has, you know, peasant servants?
 
Day 28: So be it, let the king has his cows, I joined him in a skirmish against a rhodok caravan, a task I felt bad about, since I was tasked with defending one such caravan not long ago, the battle was brief, not worth mentioning, since we outnumbered the guards in 10 to 1 odds, a great cowardice, but at least I was granted my share of the loot, by the end of the day Harlaus decided to march towards the rhodok capital of Jelkala, cut the head of the snake and it’ll stop shaking, so sayeth the great king.

Day 30:
What a mess, Harlaus’ so called campaign of righteousness ended up on him getting locked up when he met Graveth and his entourage of lords, and the mighty kingdom of swadia ended up on losing 2 castles, Reindi Castle and Ryibelet castle were both in the hands of Rhodok forces, in the south the Nords have redoubled their offensive, and managed to overtake the swadians in Kelredan castle and Derchios. The time was right to jump out of a sinking boat, although I did felt bad about it , it wasn’t a honored thing to do to desert the army, but then again, I was a mercenary lady, not a regular military leader, as every swadian Man with a cottage to collect taxes from was so keen to point out.
 
Day 31: There goes a month since I arrived in calradia, and already so many things happened, I returned to Praven and met a pair of interesting men in the tavern, Artimenner was a engineer in trade, he helped build some of the finest walls on several of calradian castles, but after a run in with a corrupt lord, found himself needing work,  and Lezalit was a grumpy man with the scars of a few battles on him, and with an expertise on training soldiers, a skill that would help us so in the coming battles. After a night over some ale, I convinced them to join me and lend their expertise in building siege implements and the hardening youngsters into warriors, in hopes to put my lastest plan in motion, and help me rebuild a peaceful antarian land, in a side note, I also hired several Mercenaries, Crossbowmen and professional blades. Back into the mountain pass, towards the now Rhodok occupied castle of Ryibelet.

Day 32: A small nord envoy reaches our group, he expresses no ill intent, and desires to parlay with me, regarding Lord Bulba, whom, despite a few failed attempts of escape, was still a prisioner. The emissary presents an offer to me, coming from King Ragnar himself, it appears Bulba is an important member of Ragnar’s army, and he wishes him back at his side to continue his war, the emissary brought with him a Chest with 2500 denars, a ransom in exchange for the noble’s freedom, after pondering about it a bit, I decide to accept, since I needed some money, and a prisioner would only slow us, even more such an important one.

Day 34: Once more we found ourselves on Elberl, and the village elder appears to have recognized us, I sat down with him in order to ask him what he knew about the rhodok movements around Ryibelet castle, and if any swadian lords were in the vicinity. He recommended that I follow a group of his villagers that were headed to the village of Ryibelet and see the situation by myself, he promised he’d shelter my troops and feed them, but in return, I had to do him a favor, apparently, he had a son who lived in Ryibelet, he was afraid that he had been either conscripted into Rhodok army, or been killed during the siege or anything of the like. Mercenary, cattle driver, now baby sitter? These people are deeply annoying, but I had greater goals in mind, and that “favor” would help advance such goals.
We arrive at Ryibelet at dusk, the plains and small group favored a quick travel without incidents, the village seemed mostly unharmed, save for a few rhodok soldiers stationed nearby, nothing seemed to indicate a occupation by another nation, those people looked swadian enough. We did found Elberl’s elder son, he was fine, grumbling about some wound, and how his crops were all taken by the rhodoks, but in good health anyway, he refused to accompany us back to Elberl, I hope my word is good enough.
The fortifications were paltry, weakened since the lords were not willing to part with their troops to defend a castle that had yet to be assigned by Graveth, the time to strike was there right in front of us.





This is coming close to the 1st important battle i will have to describe... after that i promise that the novel will run a bit faster, as my memory of what happened begins to fade =O
 
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