The Pope
Sergeant Knight

The screen describing the various towns, characters and the like is kind of bare in this version. I'd ask for a bit of fluff text, but Armagan has more important things to do. I wouldn't mind writing a few one paragraph descriptions of these things, and I'd say there are a fair few others who would also be willing. Instead of this:
Sanjar Khan
Money: A bajillion
Fief: Khergitovia
There would be this:
Sanjar Khan
Money: A bajillion
Fief: Khergitovia
Description: It took ruthlessness and brilliance to unify the squabbling khergit tribes, and Sanjar has both qualities in abundance. He is a harsh ruler for a harsh time, and his grim barbarism keeps the factitious khergit noblemen under his banner. However, his military strength belies the weakness of his position - the khergit are raiders, not conquerors and it remains to be seen whether he can hold the lands he has taken.
Sanjar Khan
Money: A bajillion
Fief: Khergitovia
There would be this:
Sanjar Khan
Money: A bajillion
Fief: Khergitovia
Description: It took ruthlessness and brilliance to unify the squabbling khergit tribes, and Sanjar has both qualities in abundance. He is a harsh ruler for a harsh time, and his grim barbarism keeps the factitious khergit noblemen under his banner. However, his military strength belies the weakness of his position - the khergit are raiders, not conquerors and it remains to be seen whether he can hold the lands he has taken.
