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  1. Lord Tristan

    Corrupt a wish

    Granted, but it collapses horribly tomorrow.

    I wish I had the money to go straight to Grad school instead of waiting a few years.

    Also, holy **** that is some necromancy. I didn't wake up this morning expecting that email.
  2. Lord Tristan

    Resolved Game Crash on Startup (SOLVED)

    Update: Tried the three of these links (Minus the first one due to using Windows 10) which didn't work, as well as tried the alternative launcher in Nexus.


    https://forums.taleworlds.com/index.php?threads/windows-7-not-launching-possible-workaround.403553/
    https://forums.taleworlds.com/index.php?threads/installing-missing-necessary-dependencies.407126/
    https://forums.taleworlds.com/index...rkaround-for-game-not-launching-issue.407128/

    EDIT 2: Validated game files in Steam and it worked!
  3. Lord Tristan

    Resolved Game Crash on Startup (SOLVED)

    Hey guys! So my game was working up until Sunday. On that day it would crash during the second loading screen after the opening cinematic would play for Taleworlds. I tried redownloading it a couple of times, and then decided to leave it until the Monday update (1.06). After this I went to the...
  4. Lord Tristan

    Mount & Blade II: Bannerlord Developer Blog 11 - Some Context

    Okay, this might sound ridiculous, but I am going to gush here.

    The Mount and Blade franchise has been such a large part of my teenage years. The first Mount & Blade blew my mind when I found it, and I gushed hundreds of hours into it with my cousin and always enjoyed the game an absurd amount. Then Warband came out and the game took control of my life. I have thousands of hours in Warband, and I enjoyed it. Out of any game out there, this simplistic yet addictive game has become my favorite and it is something that never goes away. The political intrigue, combat, empire and troop management... It is a unique and wonderful game. When Bannerlord was announced I was ecstatic and I continue to hang on to each update and new feature that comes out.
    It's pretty silly, when I think about it. This game has been there for me for years, and I just keep looking forward to Bannerlord, knowing that it will be spectacular and create so many more memories in the years to come.

    Calradia beckons.
  5. Lord Tristan

    Roll d100 to create Knighthood Order

    I am actually planning on using this for my next playthrough as having my character be a knight of the order and the mission is refounding it.

    Edit: Just did it. This is what I got:

    Order of the Primordial Codex

    Venerable - I will take this as around when Old Pendor stood or maybe right after it broke up. Ancient and well respected.

    Worships - Astraea

    Order Size - Major, around a thousand men.

    Strength about Pendor - Urban

    Knightly Virtue - Merit. I like this, and will probably take it as they as specialized in many aspects of war, seeking to become powerful in all aspects. Perhaps weaker than a specialized group, but all-around troops.

    Style of Warfare - Furious Revel. Now this is interesting. Maybe they don't heed orders for as long as other soldiers, refuse to retreat, and no prisoners. Routed enemies are hunted down and destroyed.

    Greatest Hero - Noble Preceptor. Influential leader who accomplished a great feat, perhaps for an emperor.

    Trusted Ally - Clarion Call

    Worst Enemy - Knight of the Dawn. Woo! This with Astraea might create substantial tension and some great lore. Might have to get Roland in on this.

    Wealth - Filthy and Stinking. High-tier knights.

    Venerated Object - Weighty tome. I am thinking that since this can't be applied gameplay-wise I could incorporate it into the name.


    Seeing as they are allies with the Clarion Call, I might shoot for a Sarleon culture when the player kingdom is founded.


    So, yeah. Interesting. Seems like a fun order and a fun character.
  6. Lord Tristan

    Those moments that make you proud of your men.

    Rpground 说:
    I'll just copy what I said from a previous threat.

    Rpground 说:
    OH MAN,I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT THIS.

    Ok so picture it. I'm bopping around the Laria forest hunting some noldor where this small band of like 10 noldor blindside me thinking they can take me and my 50 Huscarls. So in my party I don't have many troops that actually use blunt weapons besides myself, so when a unit doesn't have a blunt weapon and you tell them to charge they wont (interesting thing to keep in mind). So I charge taking the noldor down one by one and they manage to dehorse me, so I tell my men to charge with blunt weapons hopefully have them as meat shield while I finish off the last 3 noldor on the map.

    Well surprise surprise here come about 15 Huscarls frothing at the mouth no weapon equipped just a shield and screaming at the elves. I would imagine at this point the elves were like "Seriously...these human scum think they can take us with no weapons,pah our arrows shall make quick work of them!" They managed to kill most of them...except about 7. During this time I'm making my way to the noldor to take em out and they run out of arrows finally.

    Now the weaponless Huscarls are engaging Noldor 7 on 3 while the noldor are doing their fancy sword dancing spinny dervish thing. They ofcourse are getting slaughted...EXCEPT FOR ONE!

    During this time I've entered the fray and I'm now fighting. I take out one noldor then the last Huscarl that is now fighting 2 on 1 JUST KNOCKS OUT A NOLDOR...WITH HIS FIST! I see it clear as day,awe struck by the guy

    "Noldor Ranger knocked unconscious by Fierdsvain Huscarl." 

    and here I am like,mouth agape "...WHAT!? HOLY CRAP! I DIDN'T EVEN THINK THAT WAS POSSIBLE!"
    I pause and read it again...rub my eyes to make sure I'm not seeing things,again there it was:

    "Noldor Ranger knocked unconscious by Fierdsvain Huscarl."

    The best part was,he survived that engagement. I knocked out the last noldor and here is me and this lone Huscarl bloodied head to toe with the blood of his fallen comrades and the bloody of the elf's skull he just caved in...with is fist. I had to look at him for a second to have a moment,looked into his eyes and all that I felt was like this unquenchable thirst for battle. The fact that this even happened must of made quite the chit chat during captivity.

    Elf 1: "DUDE,DID YOU SEE WHAT HAPPENED STEVE!? HE GOT HIS HEAD CAVED IN BY ONE OF THE GUYS HERE IN THIS TROOP...WITH HIS BARE HAND!"
    Elf 2: "Well I'm not surprised some of us weren't wearing helmets..."
    Elf 1: "He was wearing a helmet...in fact they let him keep it as a memento!"
    *Sees said Huscarl playing with his new trophy*
    Elf 2: "What!? Is Steve at least ok?"
    Elf 1: "Well...see for yourself"
    *Both look over to Steve talking to the others that were taken out earlier in the battle*
    Steve the Elf: "IT WAS HORRIFYING,NOTHING I DID WOULD SLOW HIM DOWN! I could see my reflection in his eyes...oh the eyes..."


    The fact that I forgot this for a while until I got back into Pendor makes me a little sad inside...though I'm happy to have shared it with all of you now today!  :mrgreen:

    Pretty much that, it's why I love Huscarls and the Feirdsvain so damned much! P:
    I wish you could promote those guys or distinguish them somehow. Each time I have a soldier like that I want to remember who exactly it was and guard him with my life xD
  7. Lord Tristan

    Soundtracks

    I have been looking for this one song that normally plays in the Fierdsvain area, that involves a lot of drums and viking chants. I can't find it anywhere. :razz:

    NVM, right after I found it, it is called Jamaican Rum.
  8. Lord Tristan

    Couple of questions

    MitchyMatt 说:
    Don't trust any of these people. They'll steal your sweet roll.
    *Looks up with mouth stuffed full of sweet roll. Swallows* Nu-uh!
  9. Lord Tristan

    [MEDIA] Prophesy of Pendor Screenshots

    Oh god. How many vassals do you have?
  10. Lord Tristan

    [LEGACY] Quick Questions // Quick Answers

    What helmet does the Mettenheim wear?
  11. Lord Tristan

    [MEDIA] Prophesy of Pendor Screenshots

    Epicrules 说:
    robindelang2 说:
    Another knighthood in kingdom of ravernstern.. going bad for me

    Dont click if you dont want to.
    RmY1Eyo.jpg

    Yeah, Ravenstern has founded 3 out of the 4 minor orders in my game thus far.

    Also, this rumor has now prompted me to actually start reading the rumors in search of hilarity.
    UzGJBkE.jpg

    So far I've found the one about Fawzia, Saxondragon, and Madvader. I'm trying to collect them all.
    There's one with Noosers :razz:
  12. Lord Tristan

    Harrassing in a siege.

    Selvhan 说:
    There is no shame in strategic withdrawal. This tactic was used by lots of people and still being used. And since there is only one ladder to climb the wall, you have 10 guy hammering the poor 1st in line.

    So you guys never used horse archer ? Because they always ran away to pepper you. They should loose honour and renown !
    The honor and morale loss is to prevent people abusing archer-only or armies consisting of mostly archers. I see your point, but real people did not go into battle just for that (The Devs also implemented Sally Outs to archer armies for that reason too) and fleeing a battle would injure your men's pride, make you lose face, and allow the enemy to get more supplies. And the retreat is a thing abused in any mod.
  13. Lord Tristan

    [MEDIA] Prophesy of Pendor Screenshots

    Selvhan 说:

    This is my Char. I've reach lvl 29 as a Lord of the Sarleon faction. I think my next game will be with the Empire :smile:
    Never played with the empire. Only Faction I haven't had a character for.
  14. Lord Tristan

    Appreciation Thread

    Selvhan 说:
    I hope to see PoP if they ever release M&B 2. Would be awesome to play a campaign in multiplayer !
    If they do release M&B 2 and Prophesy of Pendor doesn't follow, well, I likely won't be spending much time on Bannerlord. Prophesy of Pendor is my home away from home and is a masterpiece. The back story to the game itself, the game, all of the unique stuff... no one can resist the temptation! No one can match it!
    Kudos, guys, on a job well done!
  15. Lord Tristan

    WARBAND & M&B Pendorian Stories

    Mariacello 说:
    I fixed it, after much tomfoolery... xD
    Better! More pleasing to the eye now.
  16. Lord Tristan

    WARBAND & M&B Pendorian Stories

    Mariacello 说:
    Hey everybody, I'm back from a long absence that I'm almost sure no one noted. I can't find the old stories thread for Pendor, so I thought I'd just leave this here. Tell me what you think, how to improve it, what's lacking, what's good. Open, for ze criticize c: The mercenaries have just arrived at Ravenstern to help defend it. The next bit will be some sort of combat scene, I think. Anyway, here's what I pulled out so far tonight.
    They would have raped her, no doubt, these three. They were soldiers, or smiths perhaps, bushy-bearded and low-browed, hands rough and bodies burly. Not pillars of intellect, to be sure. In their last moments of life their eyes had shown no recognition of their death approaching with swift step, only surprise and a sort of animal anger at being disturbed from their dirty pursuit. The girl in question was scrabbling back across the cobbles in a sit, making little panicked ah-ah-ah noises as she held up her ripped dress with her free hand. Her plain brown eyes flicked rapidly between the spectre standing before her and the three twisted corpses at his feet, seemingly trying to determine which scared her more. The black figure, limned in silver moonlight, turned its head to contemplate her. She stopped dead, gasping, as the figure quarter-turned to face her, some kind of feathered cloak swishing softly around him. The gleaming deadliness in his hand caught the moonlight as he turned, a long thin blade with slow drips of cooling blood running off the tip.
    Sigurd realized he must have cut quite a figure, appearing out of the night in his raven-cloak to slaughter three would-be rapists in the space of four heartbeats, and allowed himself a small smile. He hadn't intended it to be quite so cinematic, but the moon limned everything in sharp silvery relief, edging the shoulders of his armor in white and glinting off his Ravenstern longsword. Realizing the girl, a tavern server by the look of her, still wasn't breathing, he returned the long, slender blade to its place at his side and bowed slightly to her. When she resumed her frightened noises, Sigurd extended his hand.
    "Hush now, little bird. I will not hurt you." She swallowed hard, then took his hand and stood, staring at him in stark shock and disbelief. The wide brown eyes stared at him out of a plain, pale face that reminded him of the moon. She stammered for several moments, then suddenly dropped a deep curtsey.
    "M-m-my l-lord," she managed, head lowered.
    Sigurd laughed properly at that. "No, my dear, no lord am I. Lords sit in castles and write letters to get men to build bridges for them. We common folk must look out for one another," he said with more bitterness than he had intended. Fortunately, the serving girl did not seem to notice. "But we must get you home. Whoever let a pretty young lass like you run around at midnight in a town full of soldiers shall catch a slapping, I do declare," he said in a stuffy accent. She giggled, a high-pitched nervous sound. Still, a laugh nevertheless.
    "I work in the Crooked Cob, the tavern by Lorec's stall." Sigurd looked at her blankly. "Oh, not from round 'ere then. I'll show you, milord, er, ser."
    He delivered her safely to the warm, glowing bustle of the tavern, leaving her in the care of her (somewhat dithering) father, an old man who did not quite grasp the situation at first. When he realized what had happened, his profound white brows shot up and he began to shower Sigurd with praises and thanks, pouring out promises like they were going to spoil. Sigurd took his leave as quickly as he could once the inundation began; he had always been uncomfortable with gratitude as a whole, never knowing what he ought to say in return. He preferred the thanks of the man's son, holding his sister as she broke down and wept. He shook Sigurd's hand vigorously, palming him a gold coin at the same time. Sigurd left the gold with a wink. The look in the brother's eyes was all the thanks he needed.
    He was too sensitive to be a mercenary on some subjects, Sigurd pondered as he walked back down the moonlit street, the light of revelry behind him. He had a very low tolerance for criminals, rapists especially. They were ranked on a par with slavers in his mind, in terms of people he would kill on sight. Personally, and in a very painful way. Gorza the sellsword had explained it to him. "Sigurd is woman's name, ja? Woman's name, you feel for the womans." Gorza had furrowed his brow at that. "Not bad though. Sigurd is strong man. Stronger for knowing the woman-mind." Perhaps Gorza had the truth of it. In any event Sigurd had no patience for rapists, slavers, and others who preyed on the weak and those who wandered off the safe path. His company was unusual in that his men knew very well to avoid raping and pillaging as many of the more prominent adventuring companies did; offenders were stripped naked and presented to one of Sigurd's newer companions, a young common girl named Kaverra, known more readily by her nickname, the Castrator.
    Sigurd came back across the scene of his strike, the three men still sprawled and oozing blood onto the cobbles. Gorza was squatting between two of the bodies and Kaverra sat on a stoop nearby. "Morning, Sigurd. Making diplomacy easy as always, I see," Kaverra said, raising her eyebrows like an impatient mother. One of the reasons he'd hired her to fight was her refreshingly sharp wit. A commoner like himself, but possessed of a sort of casual genius that made her a joy to talk to and camp with. Wonderful lady, he thought to himself.
    A single shout and a sudden clamor of jingling mail heralded the coming of the late watch. "Speak of the devil, here come the diplomats," Sigurd grinned.
    "HOY! What's all this then, you three? Murderin' citizens in darkest night, in the very shadow of milord's castle?" The lead guardsman leered at him out of one good eye. A crew of the night watch stood behind him, spears at the ready, dressed in the blue-and-quilt of Ravenstern.
    "Citizens who thought they'd have a little fun with someone who didn't want to. I do hope these aren't your soldiers," Sigurd said calmly.
    "What's that meant to mean? Rapers, these three?"
    "Not quite, but they tried. I believe Blackbeard here was in the process of undoing his breeches when I undid his entrails." Sigurd toed the corpse nearest to him.
    "Who'd they try after? The young lass here?" The guardsman turned his leer to Kaverra until he saw her amused expression and the shining glaive rising prominently over her shoulder. "Eh, not her then. Who?"
    "A young serving girl from the Crooked Cob. I saw her home safe. Gods know what she was doing out here."
    The guardsman snorted and gazed down at the red ruin of the corpses, rolling over the man who'd made it furthest, about three steps. When he saw the dead rapist's rent face, he grimaced and straightened. "Did a bloody deed on these three, didn't ye? At least young Celine is safe."
    "I did indeed. They're lucky I caught them before it went any further, or I would have been angry." The guards reacted with varying degrees of discomfort, some raised eyebrows and muttered curses. Sigurd regarded them with very cool blue eyes, and smiled openly at them. "Will you fine fellows want help cleaning the filth off the floor, or are we finished here? I must sleep before tomorrow."
    "No, I don't know these wastrels. Or, these two I don't. Couldn't say for the one you hit in the face. They're no soldiers of ours, I don't think. Sellswords from the west or something, I imagine. You have our leave to..." the guard captain lifted his one good eye to find the three strangers vanished. "Well, bugger you too then." His men, bemused, laughed and began the unpleasant work of dragging the corpses away.
    It's a wall, sorry... once I continue I'll try and make that less ugly.
    Hello, it's me again, mate. Try to indent. it'll make it MUCH easier to read :smile:
  17. Lord Tristan

    Horseless Warrior - the People's Let's Play

    _Cooper_ 说:
    To be honest, i mostly watch people to see them fail. So do most people, the more you fail sometimes the funnier it is, then the audience is happier
    Especially if it is a horrible, horrible fail. I do not trust my ctrl+Space any more after my 21 men infantry party kept running into Jatu, Noldor, and Heretics. Not to mention lords... yeah. I need to learn to be patient.
  18. Lord Tristan

    The Start of Something

    Mariacello 说:
    Oh, it lives still? Excellent. Should I copy and paste this and delete the topic, or is there a forum function I'm unaware of?
    Lord Tristan 说:
    Mariacello 说:
    Hey everybody, I'm back from a long absence that I'm almost sure no one noted. I can't find the old stories thread for Pendor, so I thought I'd just leave this here. Tell me what you think, how to improve it, what's lacking, what's good. Open, for ze criticize c: The mercenaries have just arrived at Ravenstern to help defend it. The next bit will be some sort of combat scene, I think. Anyway, here's what I pulled out so far tonight.
    They would have raped her, no doubt, these three. They were soldiers, or smiths perhaps, bushy-bearded and low-browed, hands rough and bodies burly. Not pillars of intellect, to be sure. In their last moments of life their eyes had shown no recognition of their death approaching with swift step, only surprise and a sort of animal anger at being disturbed from their dirty pursuit. The girl in question was scrabbling back across the cobbles in a sit, making little panicked ah-ah-ah noises as she held up her ripped dress with her free hand. Her plain brown eyes flicked rapidly between the spectre standing before her and the three twisted corpses at his feet, seemingly trying to determine which scared her more. The black figure, limned in silver moonlight, turned its head to contemplate her. She stopped dead, gasping, as the figure quarter-turned to face her, some kind of feathered cloak swishing softly around him. The gleaming deadliness in his hand caught the moonlight as he turned, a long thin blade with slow drips of cooling blood running off the tip.
    Sigurd realized he must have cut quite a figure, appearing out of the night in his raven-cloak to slaughter three would-be rapists in the space of four heartbeats, and allowed himself a small smile. He hadn't intended it to be quite so cinematic, but the moon limned everything in sharp silvery relief, edging the shoulders of his armor in white and glinting off his Ravenstern longsword. Realizing the girl, a tavern server by the look of her, still wasn't breathing, he returned the long, slender blade to its place at his side and bowed slightly to her. When she resumed her frightened noises, Sigurd extended his hand.
    "Hush now, little bird. I will not hurt you." She swallowed hard, then took his hand and stood, staring at him in stark shock and disbelief. The wide brown eyes stared at him out of a plain, pale face that reminded him of the moon. She stammered for several moments, then suddenly dropped a deep curtsey.
    "M-m-my l-lord," she managed, head lowered.
    Sigurd laughed properly at that. "No, my dear, no lord am I. Lords sit in castles and write letters to get men to build bridges for them. We common folk must look out for one another," he said with more bitterness than he had intended. Fortunately, the serving girl did not seem to notice. "But we must get you home. Whoever let a pretty young lass like you run around at midnight in a town full of soldiers shall catch a slapping, I do declare," he said in a stuffy accent. She giggled, a high-pitched nervous sound. Still, a laugh nevertheless.
    "I work in the Crooked Cob, the tavern by Lorec's stall." Sigurd looked at her blankly. "Oh, not from round 'ere then. I'll show you, milord, er, ser."
    He delivered her safely to the warm, glowing bustle of the tavern, leaving her in the care of her (somewhat dithering) father, an old man who did not quite grasp the situation at first. When he realized what had happened, his profound white brows shot up and he began to shower Sigurd with praises and thanks, pouring out promises like they were going to spoil. Sigurd took his leave as quickly as he could once the inundation began; he had always been uncomfortable with gratitude as a whole, never knowing what he ought to say in return. He preferred the thanks of the man's son, holding his sister as she broke down and wept. He shook Sigurd's hand vigorously, palming him a gold coin at the same time. Sigurd left the gold with a wink. The look in the brother's eyes was all the thanks he needed.
    He was too sensitive to be a mercenary on some subjects, Sigurd pondered as he walked back down the moonlit street, the light of revelry behind him. He had a very low tolerance for criminals, rapists especially. They were ranked on a par with slavers in his mind, in terms of people he would kill on sight. Personally, and in a very painful way. Gorza the sellsword had explained it to him. "Sigurd is woman's name, ja? Woman's name, you feel for the womans." Gorza had furrowed his brow at that. "Not bad though. Sigurd is strong man. Stronger for knowing the woman-mind." Perhaps Gorza had the truth of it. In any event Sigurd had no patience for rapists, slavers, and others who preyed on the weak and those who wandered off the safe path. His company was unusual in that his men knew very well to avoid raping and pillaging as many of the more prominent adventuring companies did; offenders were stripped naked and presented to one of Sigurd's newer companions, a young common girl named Kaverra, known more readily by her nickname, the Castrator.
    Sigurd came back across the scene of his strike, the three men still sprawled and oozing blood onto the cobbles. Gorza was squatting between two of the bodies and Kaverra sat on a stoop nearby. "Morning, Sigurd. Making diplomacy easy as always, I see," Kaverra said, raising her eyebrows like an impatient mother. One of the reasons he'd hired her to fight was her refreshingly sharp wit. A commoner like himself, but possessed of a sort of casual genius that made her a joy to talk to and camp with. Wonderful lady, he thought to himself.
    A single shout and a sudden clamor of jingling mail heralded the coming of the late watch. "Speak of the devil, here come the diplomats," Sigurd grinned.
    "HOY! What's all this then, you three? Murderin' citizens in darkest night, in the very shadow of milord's castle?" The lead guardsman leered at him out of one good eye. A crew of the night watch stood behind him, spears at the ready, dressed in the blue-and-quilt of Ravenstern.
    "Citizens who thought they'd have a little fun with someone who didn't want to. I do hope these aren't your soldiers," Sigurd said calmly.
    "What's that meant to mean? Rapers, these three?"
    "Not quite, but they tried. I believe Blackbeard here was in the process of undoing his breeches when I undid his entrails." Sigurd toed the corpse nearest to him.
    "Who'd they try after? The young lass here?" The guardsman turned his leer to Kaverra until he saw her amused expression and the shining glaive rising prominently over her shoulder. "Eh, not her then. Who?"
    "A young serving girl from the Crooked Cob. I saw her home safe. Gods know what she was doing out here."
    The guardsman snorted and gazed down at the red ruin of the corpses, rolling over the man who'd made it furthest, about three steps. When he saw the dead rapist's rent face, he grimaced and straightened. "Did a bloody deed on these three, didn't ye? At least young Celine is safe."
    "I did indeed. They're lucky I caught them before it went any further, or I would have been angry." The guards reacted with varying degrees of discomfort, some raised eyebrows and muttered curses. Sigurd regarded them with very cool blue eyes, and smiled openly at them. "Will you fine fellows want help cleaning the filth off the floor, or are we finished here? I must sleep before tomorrow."
    "No, I don't know these wastrels. Or, these two I don't. Couldn't say for the one you hit in the face. They're no soldiers of ours, I don't think. Sellswords from the west or something, I imagine. You have our leave to..." the guard captain lifted his one good eye to find the three strangers vanished. "Well, bugger you too then." His men, bemused, laughed and began the unpleasant work of dragging the corpses away.
    I liked it quite a bit. Bravo! Caught the attention, and adds a new outlook different from the massive fights.
    Glad to hear. I like massive medieval battles as much as everybody else, but it's nice to talk about characters without having to do an Iliad-esque description of the precise manners of people's deaths :razz:
    I would say you should post it on the stories thread and lock this so this one fades. It might bring life to the Stories thread again. A lot of new players, and maybe they have some writing talent.
  19. Lord Tristan

    Tournaments and weapon.

    SilentK 说:
    out of pure testing i edited a character to 100 str and 100 agility and 300 wep prof, i still get mid charge, then enemy start charging his attack and hits first, unless he misses, or is distracted, its impossible for me... he never leaved me room..


    And i swear, half the time i get hit i get DOUBLE "knock back" instead of just one...like i get hit, then instantly i get a kick or something out of nowhere
    Block the first hit and instantly go in.
  20. Lord Tristan

    The Start of Something

    Mariacello 说:
    Hey everybody, I'm back from a long absence that I'm almost sure no one noted. I can't find the old stories thread for Pendor, so I thought I'd just leave this here. Tell me what you think, how to improve it, what's lacking, what's good. Open, for ze criticize c: The mercenaries have just arrived at Ravenstern to help defend it. The next bit will be some sort of combat scene, I think. Anyway, here's what I pulled out so far tonight.
    They would have raped her, no doubt, these three. They were soldiers, or smiths perhaps, bushy-bearded and low-browed, hands rough and bodies burly. Not pillars of intellect, to be sure. In their last moments of life their eyes had shown no recognition of their death approaching with swift step, only surprise and a sort of animal anger at being disturbed from their dirty pursuit. The girl in question was scrabbling back across the cobbles in a sit, making little panicked ah-ah-ah noises as she held up her ripped dress with her free hand. Her plain brown eyes flicked rapidly between the spectre standing before her and the three twisted corpses at his feet, seemingly trying to determine which scared her more. The black figure, limned in silver moonlight, turned its head to contemplate her. She stopped dead, gasping, as the figure quarter-turned to face her, some kind of feathered cloak swishing softly around him. The gleaming deadliness in his hand caught the moonlight as he turned, a long thin blade with slow drips of cooling blood running off the tip.
    Sigurd realized he must have cut quite a figure, appearing out of the night in his raven-cloak to slaughter three would-be rapists in the space of four heartbeats, and allowed himself a small smile. He hadn't intended it to be quite so cinematic, but the moon limned everything in sharp silvery relief, edging the shoulders of his armor in white and glinting off his Ravenstern longsword. Realizing the girl, a tavern server by the look of her, still wasn't breathing, he returned the long, slender blade to its place at his side and bowed slightly to her. When she resumed her frightened noises, Sigurd extended his hand.
    "Hush now, little bird. I will not hurt you." She swallowed hard, then took his hand and stood, staring at him in stark shock and disbelief. The wide brown eyes stared at him out of a plain, pale face that reminded him of the moon. She stammered for several moments, then suddenly dropped a deep curtsey.
    "M-m-my l-lord," she managed, head lowered.
    Sigurd laughed properly at that. "No, my dear, no lord am I. Lords sit in castles and write letters to get men to build bridges for them. We common folk must look out for one another," he said with more bitterness than he had intended. Fortunately, the serving girl did not seem to notice. "But we must get you home. Whoever let a pretty young lass like you run around at midnight in a town full of soldiers shall catch a slapping, I do declare," he said in a stuffy accent. She giggled, a high-pitched nervous sound. Still, a laugh nevertheless.
    "I work in the Crooked Cob, the tavern by Lorec's stall." Sigurd looked at her blankly. "Oh, not from round 'ere then. I'll show you, milord, er, ser."
    He delivered her safely to the warm, glowing bustle of the tavern, leaving her in the care of her (somewhat dithering) father, an old man who did not quite grasp the situation at first. When he realized what had happened, his profound white brows shot up and he began to shower Sigurd with praises and thanks, pouring out promises like they were going to spoil. Sigurd took his leave as quickly as he could once the inundation began; he had always been uncomfortable with gratitude as a whole, never knowing what he ought to say in return. He preferred the thanks of the man's son, holding his sister as she broke down and wept. He shook Sigurd's hand vigorously, palming him a gold coin at the same time. Sigurd left the gold with a wink. The look in the brother's eyes was all the thanks he needed.
    He was too sensitive to be a mercenary on some subjects, Sigurd pondered as he walked back down the moonlit street, the light of revelry behind him. He had a very low tolerance for criminals, rapists especially. They were ranked on a par with slavers in his mind, in terms of people he would kill on sight. Personally, and in a very painful way. Gorza the sellsword had explained it to him. "Sigurd is woman's name, ja? Woman's name, you feel for the womans." Gorza had furrowed his brow at that. "Not bad though. Sigurd is strong man. Stronger for knowing the woman-mind." Perhaps Gorza had the truth of it. In any event Sigurd had no patience for rapists, slavers, and others who preyed on the weak and those who wandered off the safe path. His company was unusual in that his men knew very well to avoid raping and pillaging as many of the more prominent adventuring companies did; offenders were stripped naked and presented to one of Sigurd's newer companions, a young common girl named Kaverra, known more readily by her nickname, the Castrator.
    Sigurd came back across the scene of his strike, the three men still sprawled and oozing blood onto the cobbles. Gorza was squatting between two of the bodies and Kaverra sat on a stoop nearby. "Morning, Sigurd. Making diplomacy easy as always, I see," Kaverra said, raising her eyebrows like an impatient mother. One of the reasons he'd hired her to fight was her refreshingly sharp wit. A commoner like himself, but possessed of a sort of casual genius that made her a joy to talk to and camp with. Wonderful lady, he thought to himself.
    A single shout and a sudden clamor of jingling mail heralded the coming of the late watch. "Speak of the devil, here come the diplomats," Sigurd grinned.
    "HOY! What's all this then, you three? Murderin' citizens in darkest night, in the very shadow of milord's castle?" The lead guardsman leered at him out of one good eye. A crew of the night watch stood behind him, spears at the ready, dressed in the blue-and-quilt of Ravenstern.
    "Citizens who thought they'd have a little fun with someone who didn't want to. I do hope these aren't your soldiers," Sigurd said calmly.
    "What's that meant to mean? Rapers, these three?"
    "Not quite, but they tried. I believe Blackbeard here was in the process of undoing his breeches when I undid his entrails." Sigurd toed the corpse nearest to him.
    "Who'd they try after? The young lass here?" The guardsman turned his leer to Kaverra until he saw her amused expression and the shining glaive rising prominently over her shoulder. "Eh, not her then. Who?"
    "A young serving girl from the Crooked Cob. I saw her home safe. Gods know what she was doing out here."
    The guardsman snorted and gazed down at the red ruin of the corpses, rolling over the man who'd made it furthest, about three steps. When he saw the dead rapist's rent face, he grimaced and straightened. "Did a bloody deed on these three, didn't ye? At least young Celine is safe."
    "I did indeed. They're lucky I caught them before it went any further, or I would have been angry." The guards reacted with varying degrees of discomfort, some raised eyebrows and muttered curses. Sigurd regarded them with very cool blue eyes, and smiled openly at them. "Will you fine fellows want help cleaning the filth off the floor, or are we finished here? I must sleep before tomorrow."
    "No, I don't know these wastrels. Or, these two I don't. Couldn't say for the one you hit in the face. They're no soldiers of ours, I don't think. Sellswords from the west or something, I imagine. You have our leave to..." the guard captain lifted his one good eye to find the three strangers vanished. "Well, bugger you too then." His men, bemused, laughed and began the unpleasant work of dragging the corpses away.
    I liked it quite a bit. Bravo! Caught the attention, and adds a new outlook different from the massive fights.
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