Lord Crown
im interested in poems and I do not study poems, well you can always make a masterpiece without learning it, and I just wanted to make a thread like this,
and please,this is not the thread for critics artisans too spread critics for poems that people made just because they dont like it, so please this a thread for people that likes poems and are not smartass, thank you
this is my poem
Cursed be upon us!, foul beings.
We close our heart,
We seal our soul
But still,what is goodness if for badness
And what is light,if are for darkness
We forbid ourself for sins
And still we closed our hearts to commit what is good
What is law if are to protect what is strong, whilst the weak suffer
Then what it is that is wrong, if what is that is right are mentioned as lies
Do thee beg for forgiveness? what is the lie of begging? to hide the sins that Thee commited to God?
Beware, to lie to God, is to lie to yourself
To commit cruelness to others, one needs the strenght to suffer from the cruelness of Another,
But what is again justice? if to kill another who kills another is called a goodness
i made it cause i have a thought like this a few hours ago, so, this is not a good poem,I know,but still, its worth it
and please,this is not the thread for critics artisans too spread critics for poems that people made just because they dont like it, so please this a thread for people that likes poems and are not smartass, thank you
this is my poem
Cursed be upon us!, foul beings.
We close our heart,
We seal our soul
But still,what is goodness if for badness
And what is light,if are for darkness
We forbid ourself for sins
And still we closed our hearts to commit what is good
What is law if are to protect what is strong, whilst the weak suffer
Then what it is that is wrong, if what is that is right are mentioned as lies
Do thee beg for forgiveness? what is the lie of begging? to hide the sins that Thee commited to God?
Beware, to lie to God, is to lie to yourself
To commit cruelness to others, one needs the strenght to suffer from the cruelness of Another,
But what is again justice? if to kill another who kills another is called a goodness
i made it cause i have a thought like this a few hours ago, so, this is not a good poem,I know,but still, its worth it
, kay thread done,useless,LOCK!
