"I shall remain your most ardent ardmirer."
"Well, I dare say that one like you could make lend a touch of feminity even to a mail hauberk."
In part beginning "Nobles are an odd lot," "warrior" should be singular, not plural "warriors"
Answer to aspire to be queen of this land:
Answer is "my lord" - there is no "my lady"
Discussing pledge to start council to overrule Queen:
you might have a look at Player's dialog with the farmer in the tavern:
"What are you blurbing about, peasant?" might be better as "rambling on about" or "babbliing about"
"blurbing" is not really a word - outdated English slang is "burbling", which might have been what was intended.