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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #870 on: April 08, 2012, 02:00:35 AM »
Expect to be a regular knight at first.

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #871 on: April 08, 2012, 04:49:00 AM »
As you command.

Do I get to choose the rank, or...?

The leader of your order usually decides that for you depending on your story

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #872 on: April 08, 2012, 05:13:38 AM »
Son of a knight of the Lion order. Arya was born with a dicease his mother thinked thats is a curse for his father sins. but Arya father believed that the child had a future in his child time Arya lived in Sarleon until the time that the army of King Mordred atacked the city his father died fighting for the king with the rest of the Lyon order but the boy are spared by a unkonw man with a Griphon emblen the boy passed some time in a orphanage them a court officer adopted the boy, the man raised the Arya teach write an read and how to fight the time passed and the boy grew with the dream to become a knight but no one acepted Arya became more and more dissatisfied with the knight orders but he have a great respect for the king he became a mercenary in the merchant caravan not a good job but pay well fighting bandits an raiders Arya learned thar only the victory is important honor renowm glory this dont means nothing in a war the time passed and the caravan boy worked hard until the day that a large group of bandits attacked a caravan and killed all soon-enough a big number of caravans are attacked a group of merchant payed Arya and a old Knight Sir Thomas to hunt the bandits the pair an a gruop of mercenaries tracked the bandits to a litle village were Arya let the bandits attack the village and kill the people to found were the bandite base are lockated the group and attacked the bandits  Arya have a plan a frontal assault with a false retreat the bandits thinked that are wining and began a pursuit then Ser thomas and the others man attacked the flanks  the bandits are massacred but in the plain Sir thomas fall by a arrow the young Arya found the dying Thomas how give him a ring with the Griphon emblen the boy then began his new adventure to join the Griphon order with the Sir Thomas ring

Perk:good fighter with bow a sword very cunning likes to use the brain unorthodox loyal and unscrupulous but pragmatic

weak:uncharismatic not phisical strong unscrupulous reclusive not honorable

Is english a second/other language? Everyone is pretty lax about not bieng word perfect, but you will need to have checked your story so that it can be understood and spelt properly, dont worry about rushing out the story, there is no time limit, take your time and get something well written and meaningful done.

A good character structure is to have one really good trait in your character, say he is a superb lance wielder and one really bad flaw, either an enemy of one of the orders or main races (many eventide knights fanatically despise the dawn) or he has some physical condition (is weak/sickly/very stupid).
-also, dont note a good trait as something you yourself will have to think of, don't say he is a master planner, just have him come up with superb plans.

Remember the enjoyment of roleplaying comes from having your character clash with others ideologically and by having your character emotionally grow and change over the Roleplay, so its a good idea to make a very thought out character in the beginning, with a structured personality and motive, so that then you can change and grow on that as you see fit.

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #873 on: April 08, 2012, 12:08:25 PM »
I don't want to be an ***, but I find it hard to understand your RP without commas.

Furthermore, be aware that psychological traits like charismatic, cunning, unscrupulous and honorable must be roleplayed, as DrSane already mentioned. Description of a character's perks and weakenesses should contain only physical and martial expertise, as well as other relevant stuff for your story (blind, wooden leg, scars, education, etc.).

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #874 on: April 08, 2012, 01:19:45 PM »
PPlease follow the first page default set up on how to present your character. To roleplay you must read, clearly you didnt read the first page. Please set up your story in that format, otherwise its just a bundle up paragraph. Also do take criticism as a good thing, as we have lost roleplayers who gave not taken this seriously and quit randomly so we want the most effort possible, and you need to show that. Thanks.

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #875 on: April 23, 2012, 01:40:25 PM »
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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #876 on: April 23, 2012, 03:01:34 PM »
Order of Choice:Order Of the ebony Gauntlet
Name of Person: Veztos
What is your story of how you came to be with an order: Having Worked for almost Every kingdom As A mercenary not only for money  but for the lust of blood , Veztos was spending his money in the local tavern and he overheard two mercenaries talking about the ebony gauntlet order and how much they hate Noldors, then instantly he remembered the day when he was fighting for sarleon against the empire beside his beloved brother , he and his brother Semoz were cutting through the enemy lines Heavy infantries and Gladiators fell beneath them then suddenly.... he heard His beloved brother screaming from the pain an arrow have caused , he looked up and saw an archer aiming at him , he pulled a small knife from his boot and threw it the archer was hit in the chest and fell down bleeding and screaming , then he looked at his brother and saw the arrow in the knee. He knew it was the end. After 10 minutes of brainstorming the tavern keeper was going to close and he "woke" him up. Many years had passed since that day when he first begun searching For the order of the ebony gauntlet ,He was now A knight and proud of it, He had to fight to earn his money but that was "more" fun as he kept saying,"this and killing noldors".

Perks:Can Fight with 2-handed and 1 handed weapons (better at 2-h),, Tall and strong,He can quickly react and addapt in any situation in battle,war frenzy (when he gets injured in battle he often charges foolishly but His strength doubles from the frenzy   :mrgreen: :mrgreen:.
Weaknesses:Throwing skills low(stood lucky in story),Stubborn , Is common born and always looked down upon by nobles,War frenzy,Bad in terms with politics,communicating etc..,Can't ride a horse


Equipment: Heavy Maul, Tempered knight sword ,  thick knight shield

Small story but meh...
 roughly written
« Last Edit: April 23, 2012, 03:04:38 PM by Rical »



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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #877 on: April 23, 2012, 03:01:39 PM »
dito :)

@ applicants-to-be: If you're considering to join, do give the latest posts in the "Crown and Fang"-sticky-thread a read, so you get the picture of what is going on in Pendor at the moment.

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #878 on: April 23, 2012, 03:09:07 PM »
@rical: How did the Noldo turn up in a battle between Sarleon and the Empire? Usually the Noldor were at latent war with the Empire and generally stayed in the surrounding of the eastern forests.

A simple change, like having your character and his brother be enlisted by the Empire, then having their border patrol be attacked by Noldor rangers, would solve the problem quickly.

Another small issue: It is highly unlikely that your character would have been able to kill or even hit a Noldo by throwing a knife. (If a Noldo is already aiming at you, there is not enough time to get the knife out and throw it, let alone that the Noldor would most likely be able to dodge it.)

PS: sry for double-posting

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #879 on: April 23, 2012, 03:17:54 PM »
@rical: How did the Noldo turn up in a battle between Sarleon and the Empire? Usually the Noldor were at latent war with the Empire and generally stayed in the surrounding of the eastern forests.

A simple change, like having your character and his brother be enlisted by the Empire, then having their border patrol be attacked by Noldor rangers, would solve the problem quickly.

Another small issue: It is highly unlikely that your character would have been able to kill or even hit a Noldo by throwing a knife. (If a Noldo is already aiming at you, there is not enough time to get the knife out and throw it, let alone that the Noldor would most likely be able to dodge it.)

PS: sry for double-posting

They helped empire troops for unkown reasons.. maybe because we attacked a village and the empire came to defend it plus the odds were like 3:1   :mrgreen: who knows   :twisted:

He took his knife out the moment he saw his brother down  just before the noldor drew his arrow (100% luck there  :mrgreen: :mrgreen: )



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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #880 on: April 23, 2012, 05:44:41 PM »
An inexperienced man has to reach back to muster all the strength needed to throw it accurately at an enemy, especially at a noldor archer who can draw his bow in a second, letting the arrow loose as the 2nd second passes by, killing your brother on the dawn of the third second. Did I make myself clear? XD

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #881 on: April 23, 2012, 05:51:07 PM »
Seeing as the both factions bordering the forest (the Empire especially) frequently skirmished in, fighting the Noldor a lot, being attacked by the Noldor, it just wouldn't happen. If Noldor did turn up in the battle, both armies would probably fight them as well.
Iskar's suggestion is a good one, and the lore here is fairly established, so don't just handwave issues we have, please.

As usual, please don't put personality info in the application, it needs to come out in your actual RPing.

Your story is very short, and this seems to have become par for the course, but I would like it to be a bit longer. You do need to put some actual thought into this, rather than just sticking skyrim memes into a random battle. If you can sit down and think of/write a good introduction, then maybe you will stick with the RP. I don't exactly have the luxury of turning away recruits when there are... not very many... of us, so please have another go.
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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #882 on: April 23, 2012, 06:05:56 PM »
Ill give the advice i gave before, the joy of Roleplaying is reacting to things as your character, in an emotionally engaging way primarily with you. Its not gonna be fun saying i killed the dude, but for example if your noble, racing to stop an injustice, or if your more moraly ambigous killing innocents for a greater cause and then arguing with other players about your actions or chastising them for thiers. You'll want a really good starting character with a clear ambition, spot on the scale of good and evil, a basic personality that you can grow into. If all this is supremely overwhelming, base his personality and moral standing on yourself, and give yourself a bland goal that you can come to decide upon as ideas appear. - note you dont have to write that stuff down, just try and get it in your head is my strong suggestion if you want to have fun with this.

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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #883 on: April 28, 2012, 07:51:08 PM »
Hullo. Since the Legion is lacking a 2nd-in-command, I'm filling it up with Lucius Valerius Poplicola, a character of mine that I've developed a long ago during the events in PoP Aftermath RP.

Order of Choice: The Shadow Legion
Name of Person: Lucius Valerius Poplicola
What is your story of how you came to be with an order:

Being a peasant living in one of the villages that supplied Cez, Lucius always had the Legion in mind. Not that he particularly wanted to join them, but they had always been kind to the villagers. They weren't nearly as ruthless as the Knights of Lion up north; or as ruthless as they were told to be. Perhaps the rumours lied. That happened a lot back then, and in fact the situation hasn't changed an inch from what it was. His life, however, soon became meddled with the army. He was recruited from his village to serve in the Pendorian Royal Army, and due to his determination and courage especially against the Snake Cult, the officers saw his potential. They had been informed to tell the Shadow Legion if there were any potential young recruits in the army, and so it happened that Lucius received an invitation from Marcus Caldius Merula, Grandmaster of the Shadow Legion, to their headquarters in Cez. He was accepted to a trial period, which he passed excellently; he was just 21 years old back then - and already a legionary. A year after him joining the Legion, strange new began emerging from the Northwest. A great fleet had been spotted; a great war was about to begun. The recent acts of aggression by and against Madame Ursula had fueled the fires burning in the Veccavian hearts, and they had decided to land a fleet in Pendor and invade it with an army about as massive as the Royal Army was, if not a greater one. Pendor was in dire need of armies, but only three orders could be of any help; the Silvermist Rangers, the Knights of Eventide and the Shadow Legion. Lucius had to march to Stormcliff Cove, soon to be the site of the greatest battle ever seen in Pendor. Lucius had volunteered to impersonate the King during the battle, later acting as the Silvermist Constable's assistant during the battle and fighting with the Silvermist Rangers. From that day, the Legion and the Silvermists were bound by a friendship, which later escalated into an alliance. Lucius had had a major part in this friendship, and for that and all his valiant deeds Marcus had chosen him as his personal advisor. He was the second-in-command of the Legion now, raised in rank above all else quicker than one could've thought. In no more than one year and three weeks his life had turned from a peaceful agricultural life to leading an army.

Perks: Fast, professional, talented, (very) lucky.(He was one of the few to remain unscathed after the battle of Stormcliff Cove.)
Weaknesses: Loyal until death to Marcus.
Equipment: The customary Shadow Legion gear, plus a masterwork Empire Broadsword which goes well with a pack of Balanced Javelins. He is one of the most merited members of the Legion.

And, if I might include, a RP sample featuring the character. Call it fanfic if you wish.

Upon Calradia

Lucius comes from a distant continent called Pendor. The only thing that the others know about Lucius is that he is an official ambassador of Pendor sent by the King himself to expand relations with Calradia. Pendor has been united by it's king only recently, and many people call him a hero. However, Lucius is not directly related to the King, except that he once impersonated the King to draw the enemies' attention. Lucius, being young(he's only 25 years old, he has long brown hair and he's around 188 cm tall.) and full of enthusiatism, is very generous with information; he has told many things about himself and Pendor, for example that he fought against the Veccavians and the Amalan Snake Cultists who both invaded Pendor. He also told that his commander is Grandmaster Marcus Caldius Merula of Cez. Lucius doesn't have any bodyguards, since he is an excellent soldier and he carries his usual legionary equipment: A perfectly balanced strange-looking broadsword with a shield and a set of black metal armour. He also has fine suits with him that he prefers to use when in the court. He is always available for harmless chit-chat or more serious business. In short, he seems like the perfect man to become an ambassador.

Lucius had arrived at Sargoth a week earlier as the ambassador of Pendor sent by the King himself. There had been news of a great meeting of nobles in a small country called "Lowlands" in Calradia, and the King had finally decided to take action. Diplomatic relations were decided to be forged with the nations of Calradia and Lucius was sent there as an ambassador. Lucius's arrival to Lowlands was a rather dramatic sort, one that not many visitors get when they enter a new country. He was ambushed by three bandits, who demanded his money and weapon for him - they thought that Lucius was an easy one. They were all mounted, but Lucius tricked them to dismount. Then he scared the horses away and killed the bandits one by one, and his trusty blade spilled yet more blood - his first blood in a foreign country. And hopefully the last one too, he thought as he began climbing up a small road leading to a small hill. Lucius was rather exhausted by the week-long journey; his last stop had been two days ago and he could only sleep a few hours per day. That should hopefully change soon as the meeting would begin, and Lucius hung himself on this thought, urged himself to continue by simply thinking about the rewards.

(You may wonder why Lucius was so weary and tired after two days of riding, since many nobles and commoners commonly practise riding and are excellent horsemen. In order to answer this, we have to delve back into his background - he comes from Pendor, where fighting varies a lot. There are the infantry - and archer-based armies in the West, cavalry-based armies in the middle and balanced armies in the East. There are also the Noldor(who basically excel at everything), and the Jatu, who are expert horsemen. Then there is the Empire, remnants of the once great Baccus Empire which invaded Pendor long ago. Nowadays it is unified under one banner; under the true King's banner, and he rules the old lands of the Empire now. But all the knighthood orders survived, they kept on going despite of their setbacks. Only one of them was eradicated; the Order of the Lion, who died to the last man at the siege of Sarleon. But enough of the background. Lucius comes from the Shadow Legion, who have excellent infantry and cavalry, but there is a lot of infantry and only a few cavalrymen. Some legionaries also don't like horses, and thus join the infantry instead of the cavalry. And there is an another thing - you have to be a Centurion to receive one of the famed Ironbred Stallions. Many legionaries simply refused to train to become a horseman, because the chances of becoming one are slim. Lucius was one of these legionaries, and although he did not train to become a horseman, he still spent a large portion of his everyday life with horses due to his assignment. As time passed, he also began to develop some form of skill in riding, and although he never became an expert rider, he got closer than one would believe of a regular legionary like him. Although he was skilled in riding, he didn't have the endurance to spend long amounts of time on horseback - Lucius hates the stench of horses and the roads which hadn't been taken care of for years - it was even worse in Calradia, where they called a narrow line of dirt in the wastelands a road.)

A magnicifent sight was revealed to Lucius when he slowly climbed up the hill, reaching the top of it in a few seconds. The sun was shining high up in the sky and thousands of light reflections reflected from the lake surrounding a large town with a castle in it. The castle was on the right side of the town while the living areas, taverns and shops were on the right side. One large drawbridge connected the town to land, and it was currently down. Serfs, peasants and soldiers ran in and out of the great gates to complete their duties. Lucius chuckled; it was almost too mediocre for Lucius to stand without laughing. He neglected the urge to laugh out loud and continued to inspect the lands ahead of him. There were two castles, one on the each side of the town, protecting it from dangers. Many smaller outposts were scattered around the area.

This place however, as fair as it was, was not Lucius's final destination, for Lucius intended only to sleep and restock here.  His destination was "over the hills and far away", as someone famous had once said.


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Re: PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (1-18-12)
« Reply #884 on: April 28, 2012, 07:57:39 PM »
Why don't you just promote one of your knights?