PoP Knighthood Order Roleplay (Applications Only) (9-29-12)

[Diablodude]

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Also, keep in mind the secret Eventide-Griffon alliance to take over Pendor.

[Tairusiano]

Thats a honor lord knights can I join the griffon?

[Diablodude]

Sure, just send in an application.

If it passes inspection, you're in.

[Tairusiano]

Knight name Arya Mason born in Sarleon of a Lower noble family his father raised in to be a monk due to his weak health but the boy ever dreamed to be a knight he trained in the night with his friend thomas e read ever book about tactics and war time passed and Arya father decide to send the young men to a ermitage but in the journey the caravan are attacked by bandits the caravan master panicked and run but the youg boy picked a sword and with the rest of the caravan they repulsed the attack a litle convoy of the of the Griphon Knight come to help to see a young boy comand a bunch of peasants they are impressed and offered a place in the Griphon order the young men accepted

Arya is like a military book a warfare genius but not a charismatic man he is reclusive but honored a good oficer but a not so good warrior his sickness is impediment in his martial capabilits

Hope you like

[Extor]

They are probably going to want you to try harder than that

[Tairusiano]

I think you right i see a best history I new with RP this is my first

[Extor]

Ya dont worry, im new to it too my story could probably be better

[Tairusiano]

Arya Mason

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Son of a knight of the Lion order. Arya was born with a dicease his mother thinked thats is a curse for his father sins. but Arya father believed that the child had a future in his child time Arya lived in Sarleon until the time that the army of King Mordred atacked the city his father died fighting for the king with the rest of the Lyon order but the boy are spared by a unkonw man with a Griphon emblen the boy passed some time in a orphanage them a court officer adopted the boy, the man raised the Arya teach write an read and how to fight the time passed and the boy grew with the dream to become a knight but no one acepted Arya became more and more dissatisfied with the knight orders but he have a great respect for the king he became a mercenary in the merchant caravan not a good job but pay well fighting bandits an raiders Arya learned thar only the victory is important honor renowm glory this dont means nothing in a war the time passed and the caravan boy worked hard until the day that a large group of bandits attacked a caravan and killed all soon-enough a big number of caravans are attacked a group of merchant payed Arya and a old Knight Sir Thomas to hunt the bandits the pair an a gruop of mercenaries tracked the bandits to a litle village were Arya let the bandits attack the village and kill the people to found were the bandite base are lockated the group and attacked the bandits  Arya have a plan a frontal assault with a false retreat the bandits thinked that are wining and began a pursuit then Ser thomas and the others man attacked the flanks  the bandits are massacred but in the plain Sir thomas fall by a arrow the young Arya found the dying Thomas how give him a ring with the Griphon emblen the boy then began his new adventure to join the Griphon order with the Sir Thomas ring

Perk:good fighter with bow a sword very cunning likes to use the brain unorthodox loyal and unscrupulous but pragmatic

weak:uncharismatic not phisical strong unscrupulous reclusive not honorable
 

I think thats is very better

[DarkSoul]

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Also, keep in mind the secret Eventide-Griffon alliance to take over Pendor.

My sarcasm detector appears to be broken to i'll have to ask for confirmation. 

[Diablodude]

PM sent with details.

[iskar]

It's much better now, Tantius. Only thing is, that Singal isn't that openly corrupt as you depict it. As we fleshed it out in the RP its certainly more corrupt than the other cities, but in some kind of stable way, so the corruption lurks under a thin layer of order enforced by the mysterious leader of the city, the Shadow.

If you change that issue, I'll accept your application.

[Tantius]

I have modified it. Is it enough?

[iskar]

Yep, seems fine now. Just don't expect to find snakeys there in the RP. They have officially retreated elswhere, but that's really a miniscule issue.

Mind to sign up at the RP board and post your name, rank and order in "The den of iniquities --> Welcome Thread". Mordred will then give you access to the appropriate sections of the forum.

[Tantius]

As you command.

Do I get to choose the rank, or...?

[Extor]

As you command.

Do I get to choose the rank, or...?

The leader of your order usually decides that for you depending on your story