Ive only recently discovered Floris, so I am still re-reading some of the previous chapters. Its good to see how the AAR has grown over time, as has your writing ability. When reading the early chapters, my initial reaction was
"how is this AAR so famous?" - it wasnt bad, but it certainly wasnt epic. By the time I got to the mid 30s, I fully understood why it was so famous. By the late 40s, the AAR was indeed deserving of the title "one of the best written". But in these last 5 chapters you have stepped up your game another notch, its brilliant stuff to read. Keep up the good work!
Well no one has made the obligatory impatient jerk post yet, so I guess Im going to have to step up to the mark and fill in...
"OMG Y U NO RITE NXT BIT DUDE??!!1/ ITS BIN 3 DAYS!!1!"