Everytime I create something I like to get constructive criticism so this is what I'll try to provide here:
- Turn off the chat (or actually the whole HUD for that matter) for videos like this one. It doesn't really fulfill any purpose for the trailer itself and only clutters up the screen.
- The pacing is a little off. When there's a crescendo in the music that's playing you should try to visualize that. It's hard to explain in writing but if you watch any movie trailers at all you'll surely know what I'm getting at.
- I was part of the event during which this trailer was shot and I would have liked it if it were organized a bit better. It felt very much random and all over the place, unstructured. Instructions should be given via Teamspeak, not in chat. Always plan events like this one and provide a Teamspeak server people can join. This way people can prepare for it and everything goes way smoother. No randoms hopping onto a server without knowing what's going on, choosing wrong outfits and not knowing whose orders to follow.
The trailer is ok, but I think we, the community can definitely do better. I'd say sometime in the future we properly organize this and try again!