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Venitius said:
Thinking of doing more stuff on Swadia or possibly a little Haelmar.

Ideas?
For Swadia:
"The Adventures of Aelffried Hershey, The Lunatic Lord of Mirth and how he departed from his father's house and took a different course in life than his brother, the famous Seargent Hershey, to become the Chief Jester of Emperor Sigismund Augustus, easing the sorrow of the poor monarch with laughter and pranks on his least favorite officers.
Every member of his family looks down upon him after he left to do what he wanted to do at the age of 14, but Aelffried couldn't be having a jollier time in life. It is indeed rare to see a Swadian face smiling so often in these Dark times.."

Sounds good, right? You could insert some cheese here and there in the story..

 
Venitius said:
Erm..

Seriously?

If you want..why not  :wink:
Yes it's something different than the constant war and death stories we hear about in Calradia, but then again you didn't ask for any specific type of story idea.

(as it's not a story request, but a suggestion)
 
While it is as inventive as Mondo and the Superfriends it is likely to be as strange as Mondo and the Superfriends.
 
Probably true, but this might be your chance to star as a competent entertainer of the eatrc community. Mondo and the Superfriends was great but very short. The more elaboration, the more fun+believability.
You know what they say: if you tell a sane guy that he's retarded often enough, he will eventually believe he's retarded.
So as long as you write a decent wall of text that also happens to be funny, it is entirely possible in our strange Swadia with our strange emperor.
Also, I'm sure Shrugger will give you a medal for it and do your dirty laundry and dishes, because that's what he likes to do most.

But ok, I'm not blunt enough to ignore the hints; the idea didn't suit you. Let us search for something more serious..

New story idea:
Random vaegir noble racist guy seeing the error of his racist ways and becoming a troubadour and joining a party of swadian mercenary landsknechts, where he sings about peace and love at the campfires. While this happens, situations force him to join the battles the mercenaries fight in and he ends up feeling the power of brotherhood and joins their quest for fame and fortune. His mercenary company catches the eye of Hengest the Elder and the cunning general becomes quite fond of this troubadour, until he catches him coming out of his daughters tent at night.
He was merely reciting poems to this honorable lady, but Hengest wouldn't take **** from him and he was almost going to be hanged for spying for the Vaegirs, but at the last moment(or a little earlier) something happens and.. [insert climax here]

What about this? We don't have much Vaegir stuff so you can combine the two nations with this kind of story.
 
Phew.... And I thought I could do this in half the time it took... T_T
I hope this rekindles my interest in writing

Anyway... hear yee here yee, its up to you codex boys and creators to see if this Lore will Pass... This is about the LT Auxiliaries:
3 for now... I'll do the GP and lowlanders later.

This is supposed to be a part of the canon lore, so please voice out concerns and criticism. And if inadequate, I can understand a veto.

Edit: This has discripancies in the geographies and thus the entire lore is considered non-canon.


Khara-Khita, Mylesia and Ptia

Khara-khita is a mountainous region that divides the great Malik Desert. To its northeast lies the Khergit Khanate, to its east lies the Sarranid Empire. For centuries the Khergits and Sarranids attempt to use the Khara-khitan mountain range its mountain pass as an easy detour towards the western Malik Desert, rather than take the circuitous route to war torn Calradia to the North or the inhospitable Arkay Jungles to the South. However for any expedition to get through they must first contend with the Khara-Khitans. The Khara-khitans are semi-Barbaric steppe people descendants of the Xi. They usually live either as nomads or in small towns or villages. They are expert trackers and use the bow as their principal weapon. Unlike most of their neighbors however, horses are very rare on the mountainous region. Khara-khitans believe in mysticism and have strong sense of tradition which involve brutal practices of sacrifice and self mutilation. They are divided into many factions and clans to which interclan warfare usually occurs, thus the average Khara-khitan is warlike.

There is no centralized form of government, power exists in factions on nomadic clans or small towns. This made them seem as prey to the bigger Khergits and Sarranids and throughout the centuries the two empires have attempted subjugation or extermination of these people.

However, the horse armies of the Khergits and Sarranids proved ineffective over the rough mountainous terrain which was unlike their steppes or deserts. The Khara-khitans however, whom usually unite together when faced with external treats are deadly at performing ambushes, sniping their enemies from afar. The Khara-khitan is skilled with the bow. Taught at a young age how to construct and use one.

To the west, at the foot of the mountains where the land once more bears similarity to steppe is the land of Mylesia. The People of Mylesia are descendants of Khara-khitan nomad clans whom have left the mountains, and Ptian travelers. The offshoots of these two races are the Mylesians. The Mylesian culture and tradition however is prevalently Khara-khitan. In the steppes, the Mylesians have inherited the Ptian’s horsemanship and thus throughout the ages, the Mylesians have transisted from foot bowmen to mounted light riders. Unlike their Khara-khitan cousins they have formed larger towns that made them appear as a civilization on its own right. Like their cousins, they are mystic and warlike, upholding bloody rituals that demand its warriors to seek battle.

And the scapegoat to these traditions is Mylesia’s neighbor to the West, the Ptians. The Land of Ptia is desert, and cities and towns are situated on oases. The Ptians are naturally peaceful, but are not afraid of fighting and defending their land. They are descendants of Khergits whom have come from Calradia during the time when the Khergits where still there. They are commercialistic and export their famed spices to their neighbors. Despite this booming trade, Ptia is young and has not fully developed into a power yet. Its trade caravans are usually raided by Mylesians, even the outlying towns are pillaged when a Mylesian Warband grows big enough. Due to this, the Ptian towns, decided to form a federation to protect each other. This federation’s first act was to have each town offer a part of its income and manpower to form a proper standing army that would protect its borders and its spice convoys. The Ptian Guard was formed. A mobile force of Horse Archers that divide into warbands each commanded by a Lord Guard.  They patrol the borders, protect merchant convoys and reinforce a besiege town if needed. This usually kept the Mylesians at bay, but not what comes at 1450.

Year 1450, the Army of the Lion enters the Malik Desert. Its leader, Pope Saldian spreads its religion with sword and fervor. Veterans of the Southern campaign, the Lion Throne invades Ptia. The Ptian Guard, whom were divided into autonomous warbands quickly engaged the Lion Throne army. Each warband employed harrassing tactics, engaging in skirmishes and avoiding main engagements and evacuating unwalled towns. The Ptian Guard recalled its warbands back together and reformed back into one army. The Ptian Guard staged itself on the capital city of Tarrakesh. There they awaited further warbands to arrive. There on the desert outside the city, they would face the Lion Throne Army. Unbeknownst to them, the Lion Throne army they have been facing is just a small part of the mighty host that Saldian commands. A month, after the first engagements with the Lion Throne, the Ptian Guard lined up outside the city of Tarrakesh, awaiting their enemy. What they saw next distraught them. On the entire horizon was filled with the outline of the vast army of the Lion numbering in the millions. It stretched from one end to another that it seemed that the enemy encircled the city outskirts.

The Lord Commander Temujin of the Ptian Guard knew they were doomed, pulling back to the city is pointless since his army would be better off on top of horses. So in an act of final defiance, he signaled his men to charge. His Ptian Guards followed without thinking, discipline doing its job. The Ptian Guard numbering thousands charged against a foe they could not hope to defeat. Temujin however, wanted to take the enemy leader to his grave. The Horde of Ptian Guards let loose a hail of arrows that seemed to block out the sun. But the Lion Throne were prepared, forming testudons that negated them. Instead of staying from a distance however, the guards charged right through the center with such momentum that it reached Pope Saldian in the center. There, to be ingraved in the murals of many chapels, happened Saldians greatest duel. The Ptian Guards rode through Saldian’s retinue isolating him from his frantic guard, the soldiers around him where trampled under the hooves of the Ptian’s steeds. Isolated he fought against Temujin and several of Temujin’s retinue all by himself.

Saldian’s newest pets from the newly conquered southern provinces came to the rescue. Massive beasts with howdahs filled with soldiers charged into the fray.  Ptians have never seens such monstrosities before and their horses recoil from the beasts’ smell and distinctive shriek. That broke the Ptian Guard, and soon they routed. By then, the rest of Saldian’s army has encircled them and butchered the guards to the last man. Saldian then proceeded to ransack the city of Tarrakesh. With the news of the loss of the Ptian Guards and the great city of Tarrakesh, the rest of the Ptian towns surrendered. Losing no time, Saldian quickly installed new governors under the leadership of a Kingpriest, and then quickly marched towards Mylesia after finding out of their existence.

The Mylesians were more stubborn and prepared. All of its clans have answered the call and have assembled to face the Lion Throne. But like the Ptians, they have misjudged the size of their foe. They were defeated by Saldian but not without inflicting a noticeable portion of casualties. To their credit and to Saldian’s surprise and woe, the Mylesians are fearless and were the first ever to defeat his Elephant Brigade. Saldian subjugates the established Mylesian towns, installed another batch of governors and a Kingpriest then pressed on to secure the Khara-khitan mountain range.

The Khara-khitans for the first time, have engaged a non-mounted force. Saldian’s soldiers were able to easily scale and traverse the mountains, suffering from multitude of ambushes, but nevertheless, their faith and resolve under Filaharn and Saldian kept them going. The Khara-khitans were too divided to mount a proper army to fight back, thus most were on their own, ambushing, the only thing they can do to protect their towns high up in the mountains. Saldian’s force was still having difficulties of reaching every major town. But eventually, the seemingly endless supply of faithful soldiers overwhelm all of them. Later on, what’s left of the unconquered Khara-khitan towns and clans surrendered to him. Knowing they cannot defeat a foe determined enough to scour every crevice of the Khara-khitan Mountains to find them. Some have even surrendered under the belief that their shamans and elders foretell of “the lion that would toil to bring light.”

By the time the Khara-khitan mountains were subjugated, the Lion Throne crusaders where cut down to half of its size. News arrived to Saldian that the Ellisian Emperor Nikephoros was calling for aid. At the same time his forward scouts have identified a vast horde of Khergits marching towards the Mountain Pass. With the Khara-khitans that surrendered and deemed themselves loyal to them, Saldian trapped and ambushed the Khergits horde in a brilliant stratagem of bottleneck and hammer and anvil. After that Saldian decided to press forth into Khergit lands, ignoring Nikephoros’s plea for now.

The Ptians, Mylesians, and Khara-khitans found themselves as new subjects of the Lion Throne. After the Crusade army, flocks of missionaries and priests quickly populated western Malik desert. Proclaiming the faith of Filaharn. The Ptians where the most receptive and quickly converted after hearing about the might and power of Saldian’s Lion Throne and that it was all because of Filaharn. The residing Kingpriest also saw merit on the Ptian Guards and quickly had it reestablished. Today, a portion of the Ptian Guards serve in the Calradian Expedition, marked for their stalwart nature.

The Mylesians and Khara-khitans converted next, they however kept their brutal tradition and practices since it is not part of their former religion but rather a part of their culture. Saldian allowed this so as to keep their warlike trait. Today, many Mylesian and Khara-khitan Warriors are easily drawn towards the Calradian Expedition, tough brutal warriors that enjoy battle and, now, serving Filaharn.

Comments and suggestions. Yeah, I forced it out of my brain with no head for grammar. I wanted no pause since it might revert me back to idleness.
 
I find it somewhat unoriginal and blunt to simply say:

Xi----->Kara-Kithan---->Mylesians
                                      ^
                                        |
Khergits----->Ptians------|

I always imagined the area around these peoples to be culturally connected, but I still thought of them as seperate cultures. SO civilizations and cultures don't work like that. Not if you want to make them stand out. This is partly because constructions like  "Khergits----->Ptians" suggest that the Ptian culture is very young while the Khergit culture is much older. Same goes for the rest and I don't think it makes them a unique culture. I mean, couldn't you just write the story so that Ptia, Mylesia and Kara-Kithan are all cultures that developed independently? That's much more interesting than to say "Khergits were the fathers of Ptians and thus the Mylesians", as if the Khergit civilization is some uber-civ that hasn't changed in time.
If that was not your intention, then we all now all the peoples of the world are related to each other somehow, thus it would be more appropriate to say that Ptians, Khergits and Mylesians  are descendants of some common proto-civ.

I also don't quite fancy the way you made the south all desert and all of them savages that sacrifice little baby girls on camel-dung altars  :lol: You could at  least make some of them more advanced.
Ptians have heavy cavalry, so perhaps they're a metropolitan civ with large irrigated farmlands from a huge river or perhaps the Mylesians are a federation of city-states while their culture is a mix of Classical Eastern and Classical Western cultures(just making all that up, it doesn't have to be that way). I mean sure, they can have deserts and I'm sure it's hot down there, but there should be more to it.

All of that being said, I'll leave this advice to you and you can do with it what you want, I'm not going to reject your lore or something if you don't change it or change it into something bad.

 
Hey no prob. I'd expect a criticism from the rushed thing I made yesterday. And frankly now that I look back, I kinda hate myself for not smoothing it out beautifully. You can't rush art... curses

What I was trying to do was maintain the brutal aspects of the Mylesians and Khara-khitans that D insisted. Hmmm... thinking thinking thinking... I pictured them during a time where there were not such huge settlements that I considered them as cities. Before they even get a chance of reaching "true civilization", Saldian comes around and subjugates them, poor buggers.

Well the Khergits are pretty old, unless we could stick up another name for their ancestors, I'm not good at forging names when it comes to eastern and southern geographies and cultures. I've also considered other races, especially the ones included in the LT lore which the ore-LT fought, to be the original ancestors of the Ptians and Mylesians. I think it was Tib that wrote that, forgot their names though. I'd pictured the Ptians to be some sort of rich economy oriented nation.

Making them into more advanced civilizations, may lead to more lore that tells of the LT's struggle to subjugated them... That or, the LT still steamrolled over them  :smile:  I don't know. Frankly, The only advanced people I've imagined of down there are the LT, maybe another to its south, the GP, The Khergits, the Long Gao, and the Sarranids, (the factions of Arkanay too if that's included)

Not entirely desert... but it always seemed to me that those kind of cultural units are offshoots of steppes or desert, err... middle eastern style. Am I too stereotypical? >.<  Further to the southwest is the LT, to the southeast are the jungles.

 
@FuryFire: Then you can declare this text a conceptual one and add some flavor to it piece by piece whenever you get inspiration, nobody's rushing you  :smile:

Feragorn said:
I'll write the Aelffrid Hershey story. What relation is he to the most illustrious Sergeant Hershey?
This:
"The Adventures of Aelffried Hershey, The Lunatic Lord of Mirth and how he departed from his father's house and took a different course in life than his brother, the famous Seargent Hershey, to become the Chief Jester of Emperor Sigismund Augustus, easing the sorrow of the poor monarch with laughter and pranks on his least favorite officers.
Every member of his family looks down upon him after he left to do what he wanted to do at the age of 14, but Aelffried couldn't be having a jollier time in life. It is indeed rare to see a Swadian face smiling so often in these Dark times.."
Make Aelffried the younger brother and we'll have some interesting family relationships in the story.
 
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