Le Capitan
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Very good. D'sparil, do you mind if I invent a Laurian city roughly based on a Renaissance Sparta?
Le Capitan said:Very good. D'sparil, do you mind if I invent a Laurian city roughly based on a Renaissance Sparta?
Venitius said:Yeah, it doesn't really make sense.....
Le Capitan said:Venitius said:Yeah, it doesn't really make sense.....
Sorry, I was tired. To explain more clearly, like a sort of fortress city that has dedicated itself to training armies, unlike the rest of the Laurian cities.
Jonesh said:Nice story Venitius, it sounds like a dramatic battle
The Hälmarians appears in my mind to be some centralized state with a professional army where the king or appointed ministers/generals train and equip the army.
The reason I got that impression was because of some of the regiments' names, those regiments named stuff like the 34th Regiment of Foot sounds like they're not some nobleman's retainers. Though I presume Finenke and Harnstaag sounds like noblemen or somesuch.
Was that what you had in mind when you wrote the fan-fic?
Venitius said:That was the main part of my idea, but the majority of the nobles are back in their homeland, as their Queen there was going to die soon, and the majority of the Hälmarian Army is there as well (to stop an uprising as the Hälmar Union is of course, a union, and may fracture easily). The Army in this battle forms a part of the Hälmarian Expeditionary Force, and so this army consists mainly of peasanty,bourgeoisie and the lower gentry, since they're not exactly more important than the larger Hälmarian army guarding the borders with Bermia, now a Laurian Territory. The Cavalry are intended to be the retinue of nobles and gentry, with a name and number slapped on. Some of the officers raise their own regiments, (for example in this battle, Finenke's and Harnstaag's regiments would have been raised by them using their own money) while some are funded by the state. Hope that clears things up a bit.
You could trace the picture with a fine-liner or somesuch?William Iron said:Jan, do you scan you pictures? Because when i try to scan my drawings they lose a lot of quality, becouse only the darkest traces remain