"Winter is coming." (Mount & Blade Warband AAR)

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"Prologue."
Tryce stepped out from the doorway, letting out a yawn. Tryce shifted his view from the sun towards Maester Crowshead. Tryce started pacing towards the maester slowly. "Measter, how is my father..?" Tryce said in a worried tone. Maester Crowshead looked up from the book he was reading and whispered to Tryce in a low voice "He died while you were in bed." Tryce shook his head, spun on his heel and walked back towards the main keep. Tryce shouted back at the Maester while he was walking "Have the bastard prepare my horse!" The maester nodded. Tryce climbed up the steps of the keep until he reached the barracks. Tryce moved his head through the doorway, peering around the inside of the room.

Tryce noticed the captain of the guard seated at a table in the far corner of the room. Tryce coughed, then yelled over towards the captain "Sand, have twenty troops ready for travel by the morn." Tryce hurried towards his bedroom  before he could get a response. Tryce twisted the doorknob, pushing through the door with his shoulder. Tryce hurried over towards the desk in the center of the room. He slumped down onto the oak chair. Tryce grabbed onto the peice of parchment and a quill. Dipping the quill in ink he began to write. "Dear Robb, my father Lord Rickard Karstark has passed away from a sudden illness." Tryce stopped, dipped the quill with ink and began to write. "I will leave for Winterfell in the morning." Tryce signed the letter. "Tryce Karstark, Lord of Karhold."  He reached across the desk for his stamp. Folding the letter, he stamped his covented blue raven onto the letter.

Clicking his figners, the raven flew into the room and onto his desk. He attached the letter to the raven's feet with a small string. Tryce slid his hand into the top desk drawer and removed some seeds. Tryce held the seeds out for the raven. Before Tryce knew it the raven was gone. Tryce grabbed onto his sheath that was dangling from the back of the chair. He fastened it to his waist and walked out from the room. 


This is a AAR based off of the game of thrones mod for warband.
 
I suggest you don't repeat the name every time. You can better refer to someone with he/she or him/her from thime to time.

Example:
Tryce noticed the captain of the guard seated at a table in the far corner of the room. He coughed, then yelled over towards the Officer "Sand, have twenty troops ready for travel by the morn." Tryce hurried towards his bedroom  before he could get a response. He twisted the doorknob, pushing through the door with his shoulder.

Good Luck
 
"Chapter one: Winterfell."
Tryce stepped out from the keep of Karhold. He was grinning, knowing that he was the new lord of Karhold. He adjusted the sheath that was strapped to his back. Tryce nodded towards the Sand, captain of the guard. He slid up towards the saddle of his horse. Sand rode up beside the young lord. The captain leaned in, whispering in Tryce's ear "M'lord, everything is ready." Tryce nodded, snatching the reins with both hands. Snapping the reins forwards the young lord and his guard were off.

The company had been travelling all day without any interuptions. Night was falling upon the sky and they had to stop. Tryce raised his hand into the air at a ninety degree angle. Nodding his head the men stopped behind him. He dismounted off from his horse slowly, looking around. "Get 'em tent's set up! We have a long day ahead of us tommorow!" Tryce screamed at his guard. The soldiers made quick work of their task.  Tryce walked up towards his captain, nodding. "Have a watch set-up near the road. Can never trust the bandit's that lurk these woods."

By the time Tryce had woken most of the camp had already been packed up. He exited the tent and mounted his horse. "Pack the rest up then catch up!" Tryce screamed back towards the last of the soldiers packing up. He grabbed the reins, forcing the horse to gallop slowly along the trail.

The next night they had decided to ride through the night. They should reach Winterfell within hours. Tryce was suprised they weren't attacked by a band of bandit's yet. The walls of Winterfell were now in view. Tryce rode through the gates slowly, glancing around at the banner's of the Stark family draping from the walls. Tryce and his troops marched through the quiet town of Winterfell. Tryce was stopped by one of the city's guards. "M'lord, Lord Robb Stark, King of the North is not present." the guard said. Tryce frowned, shaking his head. Tryce shouted out towards his group of men "We shall find Lord Robb! Once we find him we will accompany him into the battlefield!" the men chanted as Tryce led them out of the city's gates.
 
"Chapter two: Raiders."
Tryce caught word of Robb Stark arriving in Barrowtown. Tryce led his troops toward the city at once. It was a pleasent trip until they were confronted by a group of lone riders. They requested Tryce paid free passage. He smirked, flinging the dagger out from his sleeve and into the leader of the rider. The blood spurted out from his throat like a fountain. Tryce swinged "Fury" out from the sheath on his back as he screamed "For Karhold!" He rushed forwards on his horse, raising the sword over his head. Tryce swung the sword down over one of the raider's heads. The sword cut into the helm with a thickening crunch. He thrusted the tip of the sword into the shoulder of another.

The rider's had cornered a group of his men. Tryce's men began to fall one by one. After Tryce had managed to come to their rescue eleven of them fell. Tryce dropped the reins, hopping off from his steed. He sliced the leg's out from underneath one of the horses charging him. The rider fell down onto the ground hard. Tryce left the rider no time to regain himself, thrusting the sword into his back. Tryce cut down another three men before the massacre had stopped.  His own maester Crowshead had managed to slay two men in the fighting. His captain also managed to slit the throat of one. Felton Flowers, his master of arms managed to crush the head of one with his mace before he got smacked with the hilt of a sword and fell unconsious.

Tryce wiped the blood and sweat off from his forehead. He screamed out to his troops "Bury our dead, make quick work! Where there is one group of bandit's there is also others!" Tryce climbed back onto his horse, galloping away with his Maester and Captain.

Tryce had noticed a fairly large group of men across the field infront of him. He had noticed the direwolf of Stark on their banners. "Must be Robb.." he said to himself. Tryce rode ahead of his party towards the center of the field. He yelled out towards Robb "M'lord, it's Ser Tryce Karstark, lord of Karhold!" Robb rode forward with two men following close behind. Robb looked forwards at Tryce. "What buisness do you have with me?" Robb said curiously. "I have come to join ya' cause." he responded. Robb let out a large laugh. "You are no lord of Karhold. The true lord is Rickard Karstark II. Now head back to ye' father's petty castle before I slay you myself. "Hmmph." Tryce pulled hard on the reins, wheeling the horse around. Tryce galloped past his men. "Back to Karhold! We have somethin' to take care of!" Tryce yelled out as he rode by.
 
"Chapter three: Wildlings."
Tryce and his troops spotted a army of wildling's around the permiters of Karhold. Tryce grabbed his reigns tightly. Slipped the warsword Fury off from his back, kicking his feet into his horses side. "For Karhold!" he screamed as he swung the sword down at the wildling's as he rode by. By the end of the fight no wildling's remained and only three men were killed of Tryce's. Tryce climbed back onto his stallion, exhausted. Made quick haste to enter Karhold without the rest of his troops. 



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