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AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« on: May 07, 2011, 03:34:45 PM »
The Saga of Kelrathus
A Mount&Blade: Warband AAR (After-Action Report)


Well, I got inspired by monnikje aka Floris' AAR. This is about a guy called Kelrathus, the son of a minor noble in Balion.

Difficulty:
Damage to Player: Normal
Damage to Friends: Normal
Combat AI: Good
Campaign AI: Good
Combat Speed: Normal
Battle Size: 150

Playing Floris Expanded with Iboltax's Improved Faces.

A glitch occured in the game so I have restarted.

Index:
Chapter 1 - Fjords of Sargoth



Prologue/Backstory:

October 8 1256

Betrayal. Wrath. Vengeance. Freedom. These have all marked my life. I, Kelrathus, am the first son of a minor noble of the kingdom of Balion, serving the king unquestionably. All my life, I have served my king with honour as I brought down the armies of rival kingdoms. And all without the thought of power or gold.

However, my friend, who was a brother to me, wanted more power for himself. He told the king that I was trying to raise an army to usurp the throne. He claimed that I was inciting a rebellion among the other thanes. The king, being the fool he was, believed it entirely and sent me to prison, where I was to await the day when I was to be hung on the gallows.

Many months did I spend in that prison, frustrated and mad at my friend. My brother, who had betrayed me. Slowly, I planned my escape.

One night, which seemed uneventful, I called a guard to come in front of my cell to ask him a question. As soon as he was there, I hit his head with a stone I had been hiding. Thud. The hapless guard fell to the ground. I quickly grabbed the keys and opened my door, then freeing the others as well. Guards rushed to quell the uprising, and while they were distracted, I snuck out of the prison and ran as fast as I could. Freedom.

I was eager to leave this accursed land that had forsaken me, but before I left, I decided to drop by for a little visit. In the darkness of the night, I climbed the castle walls, snuck into the bedroom, and drawing my family knife, I went up to the sleeping body in the bed. Wrath clouded my mind. My own brother, who had betrayed me, will finally pay the price. Letting loose a bloodchilling warcry, he woke up only to find himself being gutted like a pig. His death was slow and painful. And especially bloody. By the time I was done, blood had covered my eyes, his entrails were on the floor, and pieces of his brain smashed into the walls. I then struck the knife into his skull, marking me of the crime. I had never felt that good in my life.

Knowing that I would be caught if I was found still in the kingdom, I cleaned myself at a nearby rived and disguised myself as a beggar. I went to the port and boarded on the first ship I landed. Perhaps it was fate that led me to this ship that would bring me to the land of Calradia, where, unknowingly, my destiny awaited.

« Last Edit: July 07, 2011, 09:40:02 AM by Demonwolf »


i need to find them and kill them. but first i will thank them for taking my housedragon wife. i will never forgive them. noone will take my muffin.
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Re: AAR: The Sagga of Kelrathus
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2011, 04:27:51 PM »
Please note, Demonwolf, that Saga is not spelt with to G's.

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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2011, 04:30:17 PM »
Please note, Demonwolf, that Saga is not spelt with to G's.

Oops, sorry. I thought I read somewhere that that was the spelling of it in Old Norse.


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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2011, 04:32:06 PM »
Nice start! I like your character's background. Great job.

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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #4 on: May 07, 2011, 05:13:50 PM »
Nice start! I like your character's background. Great job.

Thanks.

Great AAR btw.


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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2011, 05:49:01 AM »
Merged Chapter 2 and 3.


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Re: AAR: The Sagga of Kelrathus
« Reply #6 on: May 08, 2011, 09:35:25 PM »
Please note, Demonwolf, that Saga is not spelt with to G's.
Neither is "two" spelled with no "w".

As for the AAR, great start, keep going.

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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #7 on: May 08, 2011, 11:58:44 PM »
You've got pretty good writing style. I'll be reading often, so keep up the good work.
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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #8 on: May 09, 2011, 03:45:38 AM »
Alas, no lust, but interesting nonetheless.
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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #9 on: May 09, 2011, 10:22:55 AM »
Alas, no lust, but interesting nonetheless.

Been reading karviteri's too much, eh? Don't worry, it might come up once Kel meets a lady  :wink:

You've got pretty good writing style. I'll be reading often, so keep up the good work.

Thanks  :D

Please note, Demonwolf, that Saga is not spelt with to G's.
Neither is "two" spelled with no "w".

As for the AAR, great start, keep going.


:lol:

Thanks, I will.

Next chapter will be written today. Trying to get something interesting in the game to happen. Might try my hand in helping a village defend itself from bandits.  :mrgreen: If that fails, I'll just keep fighting Sea Raiders till I get some better equipment.




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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #10 on: May 09, 2011, 08:33:31 PM »
Great story man! I really like your writing style.
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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2011, 09:57:35 AM »
Guys, some error happened on my character where he lost all his items, money, clothes, skills, even ghis face morph. The only thing that's still there is his party members. I'll have to get all the stuff back now through import-export, which will probably take an hour to a day, so progress delayed.


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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #12 on: May 10, 2011, 10:33:00 AM »
You've got good writing skills, dare I say it a better creative writer than floris. I like its not flooded with screenshots too, I dont like it when theres more pictures than writing. Might be just a personal thing though.

You might want to look into Floris' mod pack, makes the game alot more fun (though the troop trees are harder to understand).

Sorry to hear about the error, hope you get to write more soon, ill deffo follow it!

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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #13 on: May 10, 2011, 10:45:40 AM »
Bad news, the game got screwed up for some odd reason. Shops don't sell what they should sell, rather they sell farmer clothes. On all four shops. Some other guys' head morphs are also wrong.

I guess I'd have to restart. Perhaps I should change to Floris instead?


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Re: AAR: The Saga of Kelrathus
« Reply #14 on: May 10, 2011, 12:31:25 PM »
gutted! having a go with Floris wont hurt. Play with edit mode on (found in config) on to change you chars appearance, you can export/import him to a floris map (native save is compatable but safer to start over). Floris will give you so much more scope, spesh with diplomacy=epic.

Dead simple to install the mod as well. Download then extract the zipped file into the modules folder in your warband directory! i was amazed at how easy it was.